Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 - Page 6

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great start

thanks dear 😊

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Originally posted by: pranita1202

superb fantastic

 fantabulous

love it love it

i guess i don't have 2  tell u r superb writer

yeh toh sabko pata hai

so the physics joke was awesome i told my sis she agrees,she too hates physics

me too lucky to avoid the subject coz i did diploma n then doing degree 

so all u gals rashu n other 12th passout or currently studying good luck wid physics (ofcourse some people might love physics , but none of my cousinns n friends do😆)

so veer in the gang . but u know even i was reading in my mind i was saying prithvi insttead of veer irrespective of the title

guess i got a sort of deja vu of tum mere ho

though in tum mere ho prithvi was  a good boy n no family issues but he was fighter too

but in here he is i guess more dark i guess . so there will b more depth in the character

so it wil take lot of effort 4 mugdha to break through shell to make her place in his heart

or other way round he will lose himself in her. but she wil be scared  2 his violent personality

but after she will b attracted 2 him wen she wil realize he fights 4 the weak people n 4 justice

sooppper excited

P.S- can this ff or ss B official or unofficial  TUM MERE HO- 2 

thanks a lot for the lovely comments sweetie... 😊... well the title won't suit...as Tum mere ho had a completely different concept altogether... but i am sure you will love this one as tum mere ho... 

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

thanks a lot for starting a new rtmc ff dhanvi dii...

n sorry for late commenting...

bt awesome start...

luved it...aapne veer ka jo charater describe kiya hai rajat ko bilkul suit karta hai...eagerly waiting for the nxt chapter

ud soon nd plz pm me...

thanks a lot dear, will update soon.😊...you are already in my pm list 😉

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

me in bolds.

i know you all loved tum mere ho...and i feel so happy😊...but Prithvi's character was different, you will get to know as the story proceeds...😉. well the two characters can have some things common  but still Veer is portrayed differently...you will get a more clearer picture as i start updating...😊

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Interesting concept...would love to read it further..

PM me when u update.

thanks a lot dear... will update soon...😊

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794

i love your start. i love veer which is very stroge i m also read your previous storys. i love your all storys and also your writing style it is amazing. now i am wating for your next update becouse i am very excited for this story.😊

thank you so much for appreciating... it makes my day...😊 will surely update soon... 🤗

Originally posted by: pranita1202

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i will update sweetheart...😉

Thanks for writing & sharing new RTMC FF
awesome start!!
it reminded me Tum Mere Ho

Thank di for ur sweet reply.i m wating for ur next update

Originally posted by: pranita1202

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main bhi main bhi same to same😃