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Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47

Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 6:29pm | IP Logged

Hey guys ...i am sure you would love this one...Wink

Veer ( The Warrior )

Chapter 1 Pg 1

chapter 8

Chapter 1

Thousands take birth who are brave

but it is only after many many thousands of years that a warrior is born...


This is a story of Veer who always stood for his rights and never cared about any one except the truth...he landed into fights with anyone for the injustice... that was the reason he was sent away from home to hostel...

A 21 year old was as brave as a lion...he was so strong that he could easily twist the iron rods like mere plastic... there was always a frown seen on his glowing forehead... with strong and attractive features he was liked by everyone around him ...he had some loyal friends and enemies at the same time...

Fights were a part of his life now...he was least bothered about calling his parents or even attending their calls...he was close to his four best friends Arjun, Uday, Nakul, and Sameer...


The college was surrounded with high mountains...and a small river that lead to a wild one dared to enter as it was believed to be haunted...

As usual the gang of these five young boys marched towards the college gates after parking their bikes outside... the most fierce being Veer... with chains rolled in his left hand he entered the building '...

It was very common for Veer to be gazed by girls... as he was too popular among the whole college girls... not only that, some girls would desperately wait for him to enter the college gates so they can have a small glance of their prince charming...

hockey sticks, metal rods, chains were a part of this gang... although they were least seen in the classrooms but still they managed to pass somehow...

It was very common for them to meet their opposite gang who was their most loyal enemy...but unfortunately they all were nothing in front of Veer who was enough for anyone who came in his way...

This was their second year and none of them understood why they were studying..

Arjun was curiously looking at the book "its been two hours and I am stuck in this chapter...God knows who created Physics..."

Uday threw his towel on him "well if I knew I would have killed him way back so that he couldn't write any more nonsense..."

Arjun "but the exams are near...what to do?"

Sameer looked at his notes "well I have something if you can understand...otherwise ask Veer when he gets back..."

Uday "i am seriously surprised at Veer...he doesn't open the damn book and still he remembers after reading once... well where is he now??"

they heard the door slammed against the wall... Nakul panicked as he entered "where is the first aid..."

It wasn't unusual for them to see blood on Veer's hands and knuckles... but this time he had a bruise on his head...

Uday and Sameer immediately got him under the tap... they knew Veer was strong... but they made sure he was alright...

"someone hit him from behind...Veer beat him badly..." Nakul said while applying the medicine...

Veer was least bothered about his bruise "leave it... he will not see tomorrow's morning sun..." with anger in his eyes...


To be cont soon...Wink

Edited by Freethinker - 24 January 2016 at 7:01pm

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apurva100 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Awsome concept
update soon and PM me

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maria_awan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
Really nice dhanvi veer is acute but a handsome warrior update soon and do pm me , back to u after long time missed u. With love maria

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ridzzi Goldie

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
intresting...Nice concept...
oh so veer is like angry young man...n entry with a chain...super dhansu...n about physics...well itni bhi buri ni hoti...liked the bond b/w the buddies...
eager to know about his heroine...what's her name?
continue soon
luv u...

Edited by ridzzi - 08 August 2012 at 1:07am

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Kareena1994 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Wow interesting concept.

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Patrarekha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
great start continue soon

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Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
wow awesome start
now that's like our veer
to stand against injustice is second nature to him
luvd the beginning n the bond between the buddies
update soon

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--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Wow Very Interesting start yaar:-):-) Jus love the Concept:-):-) plz continue...

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