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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 66)

Tyler_Durden IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
that was a hell of an overdrive

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aashi_arsha Goldie

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Freakin Hawt ! p

Edited by aashi_arsha - 15 September 2012 at 3:58am

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yogini64 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Freaking hawtt Blushing
tish u r unpredictable . . . . . . . I was expecting sneezes,, scoldings n drama . . . . . . But u changed the theme of drama Wink
kriya kabhi uske couch pe so jati hai kabhi bathroom use karti hai . . . . . Agar uska boss rey na hota to pata nhi kab ki fire ho chuki hoti ROFL
omgeee Shocked
kriya ne bathroom kyun ni lock kiya LOL
he's gaping at her aww so amazing feminine figure Tongue
aur jab jane ki sochi toh . . . .
& kriya's acting like she owns the place Big smile
their bodies in contact wid each other . . . . Eeeppsss Day Dreaming
coffee stain gya bhaadh me ROFL
koi na tish . . . . Teaser se 10 times bada tha ye Wink
bas agla update yahi se continue kariyo Tongue
40-50 pages . . . . U knw us right?
1st thread pe page 80 tak wali demand yaad hai na Evil Smile
start writing babes . . . . We can wait . . . . . Wink

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 2:01am | IP Logged
so pehle...

yeh teaser se toh bahut bada tha...

but regular se choota...

so call it sort of prelude to the future????Thumbs Up

stewing temptation toh till now it was... ab toh pata nhi rey ka kya hoga... not favouring him per say lekin then also it is literally 3rd degree torture for time to stand there... way to go kriya...Star

no use of any weapons... u can literally make him bleed in pain just aise hi...Evil Smile

i won't be surprised if rey has dreams/nightmares/hallucinations/wish fulfillment whatever u wanna call during nights with eyes closed nd at the same time during day with eyes open... to be precise 24*7... he is so gonna be smitten by her and i wud be so happy if kria makes him to her bidding.. after what he did he has to pay...Approve

karma is a  *what they say* b*tch...

okay so the update arrives:

literally pehle toh i tho ki aapne mereko purposely pm nhi kiya.. i thot u forgot me...Ouch

fir pata chala bahutko nhi kiya...

okay so kriya is leaving o stone unturned... bechaari kitni mehnat kar rhi hai and that too to get fired... itna toh log promotion paane ke liye bhi nhi karte ROFL

so plan successful... sab set hi... she goes to take a shower.. really office ko toh usne ghar hi bana diya hai...D'oh

uske bad rey ki entry and like the telepathy it is... well it is a heart connection o kriya that he knows she must be upto something... bahut sannata hai na bhai issliye...Ermm

okay so he gets the coffee stainf.. fact of the life: kabhi kisi chee ki tareef karo hamesha next moment uss cheez ke saath kuch galat hoga...Wacko

lekin simmi did a fruitful thing varna we wudn't have got an update like this...

so rey in bathroom...

oohhh... that is one sight he is never ever gonna forget unless and until he makes all his thinkings a reality one by one... WinkCool

so what to sya...

u portrayed it so well... just head over heels with it...

rey's thots very well portrayed... the way he thot abt the beby products and then her and then everything it was so good...

that was one of a kind di...

fab work as always...

ab toh word hunting shuru karni padegi...Embarrassed mereko toh ek hi word of appreciation likhne mein sharam aati hai seriously... kahin se dhundhna padega mereko...Ouch

marvelous work di...

i so wanna read rey's reaction on seeing a floral shop precisely a rose shop opened just for him...

P.S: it wud be so good to see them going to an official trip alone Wink

Edited by kriyansh24 - 15 September 2012 at 2:12am

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HR-DMG4life IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Nice update/teaser and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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kriyansh19 Senior Member

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Amazing ..!
Loved d update ..!
It was jst awsome ..!
Verry hot ...!
Update soon ..!

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anniemathiaskr IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
awesome loved it

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update tish dii...Loved it so very much..Each and every  part 2day made me grasp..Acah were are the ro0ses that he didnt se it..
Yup Krioa was damn bold  to keeep the door open...
And Rey controlling his emotions..Yup Hard.Gulp..

thanks for pm..
Tish di unfare..Acha agar spam kiya tho update jaldi milega kya???

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