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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 59)

Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 11 November 2011
Posts: 11928

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
acha kk first lemme breathe...

*breath in* breath out*

yeah ...everyone says that i make them breathless with my writings...

but u know what...

aaj tak koi bhi update padke i didnt breathe this hard as i m breathing now...

with any body contact u took two peoples breathe...

*rey and me*

and my f**k**g bl**dy fate...

lazy lamhe started when rey entered the office...

my earphones always stick to my ears...

u know what i covered the blanket just to hide my expression and whatever gng on in me from my roomies...

me and my playlist suck big tym...

s**t it added more effect to the part...

and now finally coming to update...

kriya...!!!!!!!! rey keliye grave bhi tayyar rakhti...

i know she is gonna kill him ...

with roses or with "her" her being the highlight...

i better prefer the second way of death to rey...

i dnt want him to die with some ellergic sneezes or whatever...

just simply by loosing his breath...

ahh!!!!!!!   i swear if  would be a boy never know meri dimaag ab kitni gandi gandi soch rahi hogi...Tongue

hmm...finally she completed her work...

aww my poor baby rey ko tadpanekeliye itna sab????

thak gayi bechari...

( u know u should have written that as she doesnt have another pair of dress she uses his clothes...she would take his breath totally if she comes in his clothes before him...and he would get the glimpse of olden tymes...dheela dresses)

hmm...he entered...lucky and a worst day ahead rey...

hmm simmi a very good assistant i would say..

the way u portrayed her i love that...

but chalta hai simmi   galti hojati hai...Wink

waise agar ek angel se dekhe toh rey should thank u for what u did...

professional ke saath saath uski personal life mei bhi helping...

assistant ho toh aisi...Tongue rey would surely thank her for dropping the coffe... was unexpected,...

i thought she would enter his cabin after shower as he enters...may be wrapped in kneelength towel...

but ...he entered the bathroom...  O_O

my eyes popped out the same way and i slid into the blanket...

precaution is better than cure ri8...

and then what i read...




* ufff*

s**y,sensuous...and more over im red...

just think...she almost naked before him...

*hard gulp* * trying to picturice* *closing eyes tight*

phew...u took my breath...

and at last u say it just a trailer????????

i mean are u really really serious????????????

if u say its was the starting ok ...

i can digest that...

but trailer???????

trailer mei hi mera ye haal hai toh

starters...and maincourse mei aaye toh kya hoga????

i will dig my grave besides rey...

kk ...and now...


hmm ...

hmmm think abt it and start writing...kk

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shalini_arsha IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 July 2012
Posts: 5286

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
awsummm update...
lovd it...
it jst a trailor means ...hmmm...
w8 gng to nxt...
thanx 4 pm

Edited by shalini_arsha - 15 September 2012 at 1:23pm

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aishasully IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 August 2010
Posts: 5269

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
omg fabulous but whers the romangtic bit yaar i was waiitng for it kyaa yaar ab jaldi updte next bit m lovng it maann

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tish18 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 December 2011
Posts: 3681

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hot.Pink.Heels

Ooh you're evil!
Fine I can be evil to.
Let's call it tit for tat, shall we?
You don't update this, I don't update Beauty and the Brute.
Yea baby, now you gotta deal with your readers and mine (;
I call it getting you to update faster with twice the load of craving readers!

Now to the update.
One word chica, WOW! 
That was... well quite hot.
I'm loving the torture session going on for Rey. But this is probably the sweetest torture he's had to bear in all his life.

Btw it's weird how Kria and Neha haven't met yet. I just realized. 
Hmm, I wonder when you'll do that.
And I have a request. Can we get a hottie for Kria? I mean Rey's got a girlfriend so why can't Kria get someone? 

Anyhoo, I hope you update soon. 
No pressure (;
Love ya! Muah <3

Oye Shaani...
Matlab i have to take the brunt of not only my readers but yours too? *glares*
And I'm called the evil one. *pouts*

Fine. I accept it. But I have my conditions too. When I update this, and I really mean it...whenever I update this I want a very long matlab 'VERY LONG' one for BB in the next 24 hours! Deal?

And And And... if you don't give one within the time limit then... *drum roll*...

I'll just give you 24 hours more. hehe (Like I can do anything else) *roll eyes*

Chal, sit back and let the readers do some work now. :P

Thanks for the comment. always means a lot. I'm working on a neha-kria face off... not getting the right plot. :( lets see how it turns out.

Ps- warning- start writing. these spammers can be nasty. ;)

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pallavi.14 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 June 2012
Posts: 5646

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged

firstly dis was teaser?? R u sure means if teaser is like dis den hw wud be whole movie i wonder??? do u want us readers to b dead means itna  hawwttt update butterflies r flying in my stomach nd  d way u described sexxyyy kriya my eye balls r popped out in front of pc...Day Dreaming

i pity on poor Rey.. bechara kya halat hui hogi cute devil kriya ko is avatar mein dekh kar...

i expected him to sneeze around wid handkerchief on his cute little nose but now he is not even in d condition to stand properly forget moving nd all dat...ROFL

just one question didn't bathroom has a lock?? y havn't kriya used it??
just loved dis Ohh so amazing part...Heart smokes r coming out frm my ears...

plzz update soon...

thanx fr d pm...

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Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 11 November 2011
Posts: 11928

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
hmm...2nd tym completed...

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 14816

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Tish di plz bato u want spamming KYa???

Pria di:What was that no BB update matlab u'll give us the other oneEmbarrassed

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MyDarkPassenger IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 November 2011
Posts: 20830

Posted: 15 September 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
ufff kya update tha! Dead
as if koi bhi reader discretion dekhke nai padta hai ...that warning is just for formality. right? LOL
see my exams are going n so utna lamba comment nai de sorry!

P.S--- we are very nasty! Embarrassed
start writing! Thumbs Up

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