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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 27)

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged

okay so...

me first...

me first...

i got lucky... as i had closed the window and then had opened another one...

so firstly swaron:

just one thing... sharon is sad coz kria is leaving????

loved how even the silence of shar affects swayam... that is true  love guys...

go for it...Wink

so for kriyansh:
flashback: it was sweet... u know how u prtrayed it all...

ekdum sahi description tha...

rey worried for his repo.. then neha whining everything...

i love how rey used to think abt kria... u know her slender figure.. funny how u wrote it...

so he got her a chocolate.. actually won it...  he never does realize that kriyansh are compatible in so many ways... same-2 yet different... well  thats kriyansh,,,,,

so the present... thats the best  part...

he returned.. and loved how he is excited to make amends... he is genuinely sorry... but wud love to see kriya slugging him off... rey ko mehnat karni chahiye..

after all she is his future...

loved how she still cares for im.. well thats her core nature but still he can have his hopes a lil high...

awww... chweet... he bought her chocolates...
he never realise but he remembers each and every detail abt her...

waiting eagerly for next chapter..

one thing: u know kriyam u haven't shown their meeting yet... y do i feel there's something in store there...


P.S: hope u understand the sequence of comments... u know kriyansh are always last.. u know my fav... and usmein the part i like the most is last...Embarrassed



Edited by kriyansh24 - 27 August 2012 at 12:39pm

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
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Amazing update di
Rey brought her fav. chocolates...kuch kaam toh acha kiyaWink
Flashback was super cuteSmile
Loved chota reyTongue
i know that you have updated this and also gave us such a cuteee os but can't stop myself so when are you planning to update the next part?????????Tongue


Edited by jaanvi_Arsha - 29 August 2012 at 10:47am

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
let me a whine a little before i get to the good point...

that was short...

mereko toh pata hi nhi chala kab khatam ho gaya...

so not fair di...

guess it is the combo...

ur writing+kriyansh...

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
u know whenever i think of kria in ur ff...

i always imagined her to be a chocolate lover...

i am so glad u included it...

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
YAAAYYY finally you updated, I only wait for this story. Tish you are my most fav writer!
I loved this update. Next update please add romantic scenes. I beg youu!! LOL

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
awsome update...
Update soon
thankx 4 d pm

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Lol, Lindt's are my favorite as well! :D 

Great update. I especially liked SwaRon Part. I wonder why she's so sad. Maybe with Kria's leaving news. No one can be happy after knowing that there best friend is leaving.

Well the update was so adorable. I also loved the ending bit. Aw, sho cute! Loved the bachpan-ki-Kria and Rey! 

Amazing work done di. Sorry for not commenting in a while. Was busy with studies and well frankly speaking I just gave up reading FFs and all. So am back now. For a while I guess. :P

Thanks for the PM and do PM me whenever you update. 

Aditi

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