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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 2)

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
congeratulations for new thread
awesome update
 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Actually I am not sure what to comment ..
Because even I felt it was "thanda" .. as u mentioned at the end ..
I quiet was not sure where it was going .. 
I am not a swron fan .. so don't read those lines ..

But, Kriyaansh .. I mean I really thought ..u had something else going on in ur head for them .. then you changed your thoughts and wrote down about them ..
I am not sure .. but this is what I felt ..

Please do update sooonnn...


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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
congrats for 2nd thread...loved both swaron and kriyansh parts...rey kissed a dog...ROFL
yeah swayum kyun sharon se panga letey rehtha hai.?????thanks 4 the pm...eagerly waiting 4 next part...


Edited by rhu90 - 07 August 2012 at 9:12pm

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
unres... Wow tish... 1stly a bbbiiiggg Congratulations to u for ur 2nd Thread... Jst 9 updates nd u r already at Thread 2... Woah... Impressive... ;) ... Nd d update was nt dat bad yar... :P ... Nd i actualy liked d swaron part... Sharon hit swayam's foot wid her heels.. Hahaha... Poor he... Nd dat Kriyaansh part... I mean dat puppy... Yukkk... Ewww... Poor Rey... Nywaz update ws update... Update nxt part soon... :) ... P.s. - 7.55 ki fast local... Uska update pehle plzzz...

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 07 August 2012 at 10:40pm

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by a_happy_2000

Actually I am not sure what to comment ..
Because even I felt it was "thanda" .. as u mentioned at the end ..
I quiet was not sure where it was going ..
I am not a swron fan .. so don't read those lines ..

But, Kriyaansh .. I mean I really thought ..u had something else going on in ur head for them .. then you changed your thoughts and wrote down about them ..
I am not sure .. but this is what I felt ..

Please do update sooonnn...




thank u !! im glad u second my thoughts !! :D
But u have to read my Swaron. They are way cooler dan Kriyaansh :P
I always end up loving the 2nd lead in every FF... Dont know why. hehe

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
shutup girl it was really awesome
tish u cracked me up
i really liked kissing scene..ROFL
lol wen rey closed his eyes...i thought they wud kiss..but wen u described the lips..lol i guessed it ..he is going to kiss puppy
ROFLROFLROFL
it was awesome
i find swaron last scene awesome
loved it
n the way she mocked at him was really cool
n the kriyansh puppy searching scene..wow
kria ordering rey...wow..
totally enjoyed it n congrats 4 new thread




Edited by crazysky - 07 August 2012 at 10:48pm

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
congo for d 2 nd thread tish ..! DancingParty

i agree wid amy dii(a_happy_2000) hehe i felt it SUPER thanda :PPP

i too wont read swaron i skip dat part ..!:P

,merko laga its not DEIR in d update Confused kriyansh part :'(

why did i feel like dat ??!??!?! i am confused

chal loved d fact ki DOg kissed REY *ROFLMAO*

thanks for d pm

update REAL soon please

ps: i thought i will not comment nd i felt u shuld know how i felt :P :D so gave d comment srry if u r hurt ..!


Edited by sujana9 - 07 August 2012 at 10:52pm

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tish18

Originally posted by a_happy_2000

Actually I am not sure what to comment ..
Because even I felt it was "thanda" .. as u mentioned at the end ..
I quiet was not sure where it was going ..
I am not a swron fan .. so don't read those lines ..

But, Kriyaansh .. I mean I really thought ..u had something else going on in ur head for them .. then you changed your thoughts and wrote down about them ..
I am not sure .. but this is what I felt ..

Please do update sooonnn...




thank u !! im glad u second my thoughts !! :D
But u have to read my Swaron. They are way cooler dan Kriyaansh :P
I always end up loving the 2nd lead in every FF... Dont know why. hehe


Maybe Swron are cooler .. But , I can't imagine them when I read .. so kuch khaas mazza nahi atta ..
I mean .. when I read even 1 line on KR .. they just pop up in my mind .. 
so its like seeing them enact .. even if its in my mind .. as per what's written .. 

No Hard Feelings .. please ... 

Also I felt that when Rey kissed the dog .. after that he would be damn angry or you know some other reaction .. not the one he gave in the FF .. 
I don't exactly know what ... but something which would suit his character .. I mean the way you have potrayed it till now .. it somehow didn't gel .. 
My sole opinion ..  nothing else ..


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