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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 17)

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Me :)
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Look who finally decided to grace us with her presence.
Nice to have you back Tish!

The update, well I'll be honest. If you haven't already guessed, it really hate Rey here. Like really really hate him. I don't even feel bad when he feels angsty or guilty. Maybe it's the way you presented the whole situation and how he messed up, or maybe it's the fact that he pretty much destroyed Kria because of his ego. But whatever it is I have this really deep feeling of animosity for him.
So no surprise when I say that I hope Kria doesn't give in too easily and that Rey has one hell of a time convincing her.

Lovely update darl. 
Your writing is so damn good that it makes these crazy feelings arise within me.
Continue soon 
Muah


Edited by Hot.Pink.Heels - 22 August 2012 at 12:07pm

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
*unres*
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Chalo, after all you updated! Thank you Big smile

about the update, what to say, you leave me awestruck every time!
you build up the story so well that it can be even used as a script for a movie... I hope it happens one day! Day Dreaming
I don't Know why but you keep your Rey very dashing...that's really intoxicating for me... 'I die and go to heaven' every time! Embarrassed
is poore FF me in every chapter Rey has killed me once, every time! Embarrassed
He is very guilty.. let Kria forgive him... My baby is really feeling bad! I know he was wrong he shouldn't be forgiven easily but still...  Ouch

your last line 'She looked up, wide eyed, to find him leaning at the door with his arms crossed across his chest and grinning at her.'

This line was like Blushing Blushing Blushing
he grinning,leaning on the door,arms across his chest,with formals (am sure) deadly!
am mad over his smile aesebhi and you wrote this! Big smile

Taani and he together in Paris Angry
Thank god he is back Clap


Edited by Love_Kunwar - 23 August 2012 at 9:08am

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Yesss! I was waiting for your PM for weeks, finally! I loved this chapter!! Keep writing I beg of you! I want Kriyaansh romance scenes too please!!!
Keep going loved it.

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Great update
Hope rey nd kriya get together soon
Aww I think neha was at the door I love reunions
Thnx 4 da pm

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
amazing update...
Thankx 4 d pm
nd nw plz don't get late update soon

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
wow rey is back

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
It's awsum dear... Hope rey nd kria meet soon...nd neha nd kria too aftrall besties meet is quite intrstng...nd thanx 4 d pm

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Tish Dii fab update..Acha aap doc ho nah tho plz dnt bite nails..

To ur update.It was fab as  usual.
Lovely one..
My most awaited Ff.
The way Kria spoke to Rey and made him feel more guilty.
The mistake she realised and wanted to go back nt able to face hi,m.
The samer with him.

His inclination to Her ..
taani ki bich mai nak gushanaAngry
Reys attitude to taani.
And Kria doing work for her frnd This is the part I liked the most..


Now to this

She looked up, wide eyed, to find him leaning at the door with his arms crossed across his chest and grinning at her.

This line touched nme so much.The way he replied I hate him too and the way she was affected cause he did not spk with her..

Gosh both still spk..


Thanks for pm.

Running fingers across..Plz update soon...

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