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KR FF- Stewing Temptations #2; Ch 9 to 15 (Page 125)

-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 January 2010
Posts: 29500

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
since i missed the position so i thot no point resing...

i was sending pms... issliye stuck up...

so finally u updated... yayyy!!!!!!!!!!

u know as much as i hate ur writer's block coz of the time u take to update next i also love them coz the updates are really like voila!!!!!!!!!

haan so the update...

no surprises that rey is daydreaming at such a short time span...

u r really redefining torture for him and i am so loving it...

so loved his fantasy kria... thats sensuous, hot, breathtaking... u name it,...

loved the way rey used her to describe u know her highness, and dangerous territory...

wonder what will happen when he will sleep... after this i really doubt that though that he will ba able to sleep

rey's dream broke... and woh bhi by kria herself...

so now the reality... and kinda is a b*tch so to say

i cannot decide whether to pity rey or his bang head off... seriously... i know its human predicament how much u try to make up things they always get mess up...

but here he is the one doing it..

okay kria may go overboard but he needs to control his tongue...

first i was like is he joking and then as realization struck i was like ki bolne se pehle 10 baar socha kar...

glad kria gave him a piece of mind...

so poor roses go to waste... *saddy*

they did their work in a sense though...

how much kria hide she is still the same gal who she was 6 years back...
appearances change lekin person don't...

so not seeing from the view whatever rey did before...

loved how she dragged him out... vaise i was quite surprised he didn't react on roses being called...  but then also...

i believe that he tries a lot and thats where the fault lies...

brought her soft side... awww...

he kissed her on her nose... or like kria says beech mein...

dream mein toh he wud always be on lips but reality its gonna be long time till he travels that distance and everything is sound when he does that... yeh ff bhi toh ussi pe based hai vaise bhi...

rey was cute...

loved how kria was angry on herself...

mentally chiding herself... poor she... bechari ki mehnat ruined plus she ended up melting in frnt of rey last thing she wanna do...

all in all a splendid update

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 14816

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Updatte...A big hug to u for this m,arvellous updatte..

And abhi me running to study...

So watch up...Thread ko end karne ka kam koi aur kare nahi tho by friday i'll do..
The way Kria reacyed i must say i was in an awe at that moment..

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hetu29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15298

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update...
Lol... Rey imagining all those...
for a moment i was like... WHAT !! KRIA? Seducing him?
Then further i saw.. It was just a fantacy... !! ROFL

then Next rey saying he will sue her for seducing him.. Haha rofl... ROFL ROFL
then kriya caring for Rey.. Awwiee. That was cute.. Embarrassed

Update the next part soon...

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Roxxy47 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5494

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Okay you are getting way to unpredictable from the previous updates LOL...
I mean seriously Rey was imagining Kria , as umm seducing him Shocked...
Gosh Rey and his imaginations Wink...
N here starts "The Sneezing" part LOL...
Firstly Kria did all that Hard work just to irritate Rey , n now when he is their she takes him away Ermm...
And what does Rey do , Kiss her nose n call her Cute Big smile...
Itni beziti ke baad bhi Rey ka kuch nahi hua LOL...
It was just Fabulous Clap...
Loved it Heart...
Waiting to know what happens next...
N thanks for the pm Smile.

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rubykriyansh Senior Member

Joined: 19 September 2012
Posts: 793

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
It was realy intemating in d starting bt rey's bad luck it was a dream
bt really beautifully written ..!
Update d next part soon n thanx 4 d pm ...!

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aishasully IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5269

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT super awsome yaar i totallly loved ur update super rocking myn damn it was only a dream kyun yaar well i hope we get to see it in realy lyf story 2 plzz tishh well loving it so fa cnt wait 4 the next update so updte fast

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Zehnaseeb. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13116

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged

i m not in a state to comment right now. i m going complete aww-ing over the nose-peck partBlushing

will come back if i overcome from that.

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shaffy_arsha IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5304

Posted: 19 September 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
seriously tish dis was amazing
wen i was reading dat romantic part i was lyk haww ye kaise? kb hua? ROFL
bt den i realise dis was dream of rey...hahaha now dis will gng to b wid rey evrynyt n evryday Wink

n njoyed dere fight
gosh!!!! dat was amazing
n always kria Misunderstood him
poor rey LOL

aww he peck her on nose i loved it
n she care for him now also
aww i want to see kriyaansh togther yaar

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