*unres*
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Chalo, after all you updated! Thank you ๐
about the update, what to say, you leave me awestruck every time!
you build up the story so well that it can be even used as a script for a movie... I hope it happens one day! ๐
I don't Know why but you keep your Rey very dashing...that's really intoxicating for me... 'I die and go to heaven' every time! ๐ณ
is poore FF me in every chapter Rey has killed me once, every time! ๐ณ
He is very guilty.. let Kria forgive him... My baby is really feeling bad! I know he was wrong he shouldn't be forgiven easily but still...
your last line 'She looked up, wide eyed, to find him leaning at the door with his arms crossed across his chest and grinning at her.'
This line was like โบ๏ธ โบ๏ธ โบ๏ธ
he grinning,leaning on the door,arms across his chest,with formals (am sure) deadly!
am mad over his smile aesebhi and you wrote this! ๐
Taani and he together in Paris ๐ก
Thank god he is back ๐
Edited by Love_Kunwar - 11 years ago