Pt1/2/3"Debt To Pleasure" Thrd1 Pg4/23/67 - Page 40

love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...geet dont knw msk is maan singh khrana...dats gr8...

beautiful update...

loved it sooo much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...

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795707

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

WOW what a update

aniee u rock . love the update

u r the best writer ever , reading

ur update is like a dream comes true

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

brilliant update

love maan's monologue

nd specially dat scene were he explain her y he was dere wid an underworld don

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

AWESOME !!!! Continue soon !!

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punam2712

@punam2712

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

MAAN FOLLOWED HER HOME WHERE SHE IS ALL ALONE

AND HE WAS ONLY SUPPOSED TO TAKE THE CD FROM HER, HE ENDED UP WANTING TO KISS HER AND FEEL HER

BUT WHAT WAS HE DOING WITH AN UNDERWORLD DON

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

was waiting for ur update...very nice update...maan aur geet ke beech ki dialogues bahut achhe the yaar, i liked them...ab age kya hoga...will he take the cd or will she make a run from there????...update soon...waiting...😍

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