Pt1/2/3"Debt To Pleasure" Thrd1 Pg4/23/67 - Page 8

sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it...di...

congrats for starting a new story...

awesome...

maan and geet first meeting and first kiss..

waiting for the next update di...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

First up all... CONGRATS for New FF di...

The prologue was just awesum...

And here u gave first part too.. wow...

Ahh I loved the way u started the story...

It was superb mindblowing start...

But me confused... He is business man na then how come he a devil running on bike to get a CD... :P

Awww... Poor geet... Hehe... Started with kiss will end with god knws what... :P

Continue soon di...

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600924

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Posted: 11 years ago

congrats for the new story.

Ahan ...pehle hi update mai kissi vissi ...lol

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow!!!Superb start..
But wat is contained in the cd??
loved their first kiss in first part..

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

for "Debt To Pleasure" its Brilliant 👏 👏 👏

Enjoyed , Loved and Totally Excited for it

Continue soon

Thanks for pms

Edited by .Priya2000. - 11 years ago

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362311

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Posted: 11 years ago

congrats for the new ff

interesting concept

nice part

pls continue soon

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

brilliant annie it sounds better here loved it thanks for the pm

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SleepingSoul

@SleepingSoul

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

mysterious one

loved it

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music

@music_girl

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

mysteriously mysterious

CD and kissing???

LOL what can i expect more of Devil MSK CD guy

amazing start!

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662519

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow Annie Di... Kiss in first part itself 😳 gains the needed attention 😆

Continue sooon😛

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Pt1/2/3&quot;Debt To Pleasure&quot; Thrd1 Pg4/23/67 - Page 8

Pt1/2/3"Debt To Pleasure" Thrd1 Pg4/23/67 - Page 8