Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG SS:BTOOMH!! Epilogue/Page 119 (Page 60)

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Part 15

Maan caressed her skin softly. Geet shuddered under  his touch. he smile but kept on going with his sweet torture and when  she was full red on her cheeks with blush, he stopped and holding both  of her hands, make her stand up as he stood up himself. Looking down at  there entwined hands, he saw the magic of how her soft fingers fits  perfectly between his hard one's. He looked up at her down cast lashes  and said soft. "You are ok" In reply Geet just nod her head as she  was unable to say anything with this proximity. His single touch can  burn a fire inside her. "Geet..." He took her name with such a sigh  that ensures her that he feel something for her, so  beautiful...

"I am sorry If you think I crossed my limits...But  its just that, I couldn't stop myself" Maan said giving name to his  feelings. Geet just look up at him and keep looking at him for few  seconds before saying... "After last night, do I still need to assure  you about my feelings?" Her question make him look into her eyes and he  gave a soft smile. "No...I know about that...But I don't want us to feel  awkward...I don't want anything to go wrong between us Geet" He  needs to assure himself that this relation that he wanna make is going  to stay forever. "Will you promise me something?" As Geet nod, he  pulled her a little close to himself still looking deep into her eyes.  "Whenever, you feel that something that I did or said to you was will tell me straightly...anything Geet...having  misunderstandings is the worse part of a relationship" He said softly.  Fear was truly evident on his face. Geet just moved her hand up and  cupped his face. She need to assure him that this thing, this relation  that they are gonna share will stay forever so she moved up on her toes  and gave him a lingering kiss on his cheek...

Maan just smiled  as she moved back with flushed face. Her boldness was something new for  herself too. "Ok, I am feeling too much hungry now...Can we eat  something?" Maan said trying to make her comfortable and still holding  her one hand, lead her to the table placed in a corner. He took off the  lids from the food, he ordered from a nearby restaurant by his peon and  it smelled yummylicious. Geet served him as per routine and they  enjoyed there first office secret lunch date. The time they finished, it  was just 15 minutes left for the lunch break to over. Maan want to  spend sometime more with her, in order to know her. The lunch was a  silent affair but the silence was peaceful. But he have to go to the  canteen to enjoy the party given by two of his best friends who have  always supported him through thick and thin of his life and now, when  they are going to step in a new relationship, he have to support them.  He was truly happy for them so he and Geet went out to attend the  party after trashing the boxes into the dustbin.

It was indeed  fun. Aditi and Nitin brought a cake for Shaina and Aryan as a gift but  that was more smeared on there faces rather than eat and above that,  Nitin and Aditi didn't miss the chance to took there pictures in that  conditions. Aryan was sulking while Shaina gave a kiss to her sulking  man on his cream filled cheek and Nitin took the picture right at that  moment. Everyone was back to work after that and the day passed on just  like a routine.

On the end, Maan sms Geet to wait for him  outside the office as they will go home together. Geet felt  butterflies in her stomach with the thought of going home all alone with  him. She smiled and biting her lower lip, collect all her things.  Putting the bag on the shoulder, she gave a last look to her cabin and  taking the other door that opened outside in the corridor, went down.  Maan was soon out with his car and stopped beside her. Getting out, he  gave her one of his trade mark smiles and came around to open the  passenger side door for her like a true gentleman. Geet just smiled  and sit in and he closed the door for her. Getting back into his seat,  he look at her and started off the car, to go towards the house.

Geet  was playing with her fingers as the silence went on. It surly was  bothering her so she turn to look at him who was concentrating on the  road infront but feeling her gaze turn to look at her. Geet pointed  towards the music player with her index fingers and ask question through  her eyes as if saying CAN-I-PUT-IT-ON and Maan said "Yeah  sure"..Geet put on the radio and a song romantic tone filled the car  which was later replaced by the melodious voice of Udit Narayan

"Jadu Bhari Ankhon Wali Suno
Tum Aise Mujhe Dekha Na Karo"

"This  song is one of my favorite" Geet said as she started humming the  song along with it. Maan's fingers automatically started tapping on  the steering as he smiled. "I was listening to this song from the last try to get a hold on myself and to stop myself to express what  i feel for you" Geet heard him and was confused when the voice  again boomed

"Phir Main Koi Umeed Karon
Phir Mujhe Koi Arman Ho
Tum Shayad Meri Ban Jao
Phir Dil Ko Aisa Guman Ho
Par Aisa Na Ho Tau Acha Hai
Iss Ka Anjaam Jo Hota Hai
Wo Dard He Deta Hai Dil ko

Jadu Bhari Ankhoon Wali Suno
Tum Aise Mujhe Dekha Na Karo"

Geet  suddenly get quiet as she realized what this song meant and why he was  listening to it. She knew it that he was scared to attach himself to  someone but in reality, he don't wanna face that heart-ache he already  went through. A lot of thoughts run in Geet's mind just with this  idea. "What if i failed him?" "What if he will loose his trust over me?"  "What if any of my mistake will hurt him?" And she got worried. He was  the most beautiful dream she ever saw, and she don't wanna loose him at  any cost.

Reaching home, Geet get out quitely and wishing  evening to Bi and her mother went straight to her room. Maan was a  little taken back by her sudden change of mood but he can't go behind  her now. He know that something is disturbing her. She was OK, till she  was sitting in the car but later, she was all but attentive to him. "Is  she having 2nd thoughts about 'US'?"  A fear creep over him as he enter  his room and loosen his tie. He sit on the bed half-heartedly and look  up into space. "Do she have any doubts? Or like others, she is also  disappointed in me?" His heart bleed with these thoughts and he hold his  head in his hands. Life is surly not a easy ride for him.

On  dining table, Maan who was called twice by Bi, joined finally with a  sulking face. Geet was not yet present on there. Bi saw his eyes  searching for her so she asked Smriti as she knew, Maan would never  raise this question. "Smriti, Where is Geet?" Maan ears were fixed  on the discussion while his eyes and hands were fixed to serve himself.  "Samiya...she wasn't feeling she just took medicine and is  now laying in her bed" Smriti replied. Bi got worried. "Something  serious??" She asked again. "No just a minor headache" Smriti cleared.  Maan's heart fell down with the thought that she is ignoring him thats  why avoid this dinner. He wasn't in mood to eat anything, but for the  sake of bi so that she will not arise a question out from it, he ate a  little. His heart was beating fast and was irritated. He need to ask  her, hear her. It seems like just last night, he again need to confront  her.

After having dinner, he cleared his mouth with the napkin  and left. He paced in the room with restlessness, went to the window of  his inhale the freshness of the air when he felt a shadow in  the corner moving. His eyes were fixed on that for a moment and then he  saw Geet coming into view and taking turn, went back into darkness.  "I need to talk to her" He said to himself. Just a day to there  confession, and he was already feeling like loosing her. No matter they  spend just a day of there togetherness, but just the thought of her  leaving him was hard to digest for him. he felt a pain in his chest with  these aweful aweful thoughts. He turn and without making anyone see  him, make his way to the backyard of his house.

Geet was  worried. Too much worried. No at any cost she wanna give him any ache.  But she is a human-being. She will make mistake. What if any of her  mistake will cause him distrust her. What if she would become a reason  for his tears. She herself would never be ale to bear that than how will  he take that. He was already been through so much. She tried to give  100% to her relationship she had with Samar, but when he changed and  just thought of her as a person of body and bone, not a person of heart  and soul, she lost trust in him. But this man, in whom she found her  true love, love her for what she is...and is closed to his heart that it  feared her. Tracing her trembling lips, she was so engrossed in her  thoughts to feel Maan coming close to her. Right when she was about to  turn, Maan hold her from her arms and startled her. Her body jerked  as she felt the hold, but seeing Maan she took a breath of relief.

"Why  are you ignoring me?" The question came straight without any delay from  him. "Are you having 2nd thoughts Geet? a man having a bad history  and with an extra baggage of a baby, is this what now making you back  off?" Maan asked in an aggressive tone. He was on the edge to have a  heart failure if he just don't get some answers right now. Geet  looked at him with a confused and stunned face. "How can you even think  that i must be having second thoughts about you..." She asked with a  disbelief expression. "Then why are you running away fro me...Did i do  something that embarrassed you...or you felt wrong about...You promised  me just today that you will tell me straightly" He demanded. Geet  sigh and hold his hands in hers. "there is nothing like this...You  haven't done anything that i felt wrong about...its just that..." she  stopped. She was finding it hard to explain. "its what?" he asked.  Geet turn around and lead him to a bench in the far dark corner of  the backyard. The freshness of the air from the plants was soothing and  the moon was shinning above, providing a soft glow. "I am afraid of  myself..." She said a moment later looking ahead while his gaze was  fixed on her face. "What if i failed you? What if any of my mistake will  hurt you badly...What if you loose trust over me?" She turned her face  to look at him, just to see his reaction but he was plain. No expression  was readable out there just a little frown over his forehead could  indicate that he was processing some thoughts. When he didn't answer for  sometime Geet shook his hand. Maan looked at her worried face.  She moved closer to him and cupped his face in her hands. "You have been  already through so have been sentenced to bear all that  pain, you didn't deserve a loose the people you love the  most...But I can promise you, you will never loose me..." She said with  pain evident in her voice and a tear escaped her eye. "I can't think of  my life without you anymore...but i m just scared, what if i will not be  up to your expectations? What if..." Before she could say anything  more, Maan covered her lips with his index finger, silencing her.  "SSShhh" he said with a smile playing on his lips and his finger moved  away from her lips to her cheek to clean the tear. "How can you speak so  much? and thought so unimportant things" He said with a chirpy voice as  Geet looked at him with a wide eyes. This side of him, she was  seeing for the first time. He definitely has stunned her and to make it  even more, he pulled her closer from her waist and now they both were  sitting side-by-side, eyes fixed on eachother faces. While Geet's  one hand was now placed on his chest where his heart was beating, her  other hand was holding the bench underneath. "You are a fool to think  like that Geet...If i let you enter in my life, its that because  after being hurt, after going through so much, I found someone in you, i  can depend on...You can never disappoint me...or better if i can say, I  can never be disappointed by you cause the love, the light you brought  in my dark life will always keep me in debt of you...You own  me...completely" He said with truthfulness in her tone that make  Geet heart filled with love for this amazing man to the brim. She  moved forward and placed a kiss on his cheek "I love you Maan" she  said in a deep tone, totally overwhelmed with the love he showered on  her...Maan gave his full enchanting smile. "I love the way you take my  name..." He said and pulled her into a side hug as she smile and they  both look up into the sky. "I need to say something else too" she said  sometime later. He looked down at her as she moved a lil back. "Ananya  is not a burden on me Maan...I loved her from the start and now, I  love her even more as she is a part of please don't ever think  that she is just something i have to bear...she is an angel and i will  be blessed to be a part of her life" Maan's heart felt peace hearing  her as she say those words "But I want more..." he said with a serious  face. "What more??" She asked with a perplexed expression. "Kids..." and  that brought a red crimson blush on her face as she hide her face in  his chest as he chuckled and caress her soft silky hairs.

Maan  and Geet's lunch dates became a routine now. Every day they both  will make an excuse and have there sweet lunch in the silence of his  cabin. There friends start to wonder as what's going on. "Guys, what's  up with Maan now-a-days...he is giving to much work to Geet...Poor  girl can't even have her lunch properly" Aryan said. "Yeah, I have  barely saw her twice this week...what's wrong with Maan" Shaina too  said. "I wonder why is he pressurizing her so much" Aditi added.  "Friends, I think its time to talk to Maan..." Nitin said as all  agreed and get up leaving there unfinished lunch plates on the table not  knowing how surprise they were going to be to see them sharing the food  being alone in his room.




Edited by cool_SK - 24 December 2012 at 12:09pm

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super awesome update...loved maaneet moments & their convo

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 24 December 2012 at 12:39pm

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear.

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Amazing update loved the maaneet moments n convo ...

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 2:31pm | IP Logged

loved it...
awww maaneet moment are so magical and divine. ...
maan is so soft.i mean theway he thinks of geet being away or ignoring him...he is so heartbroken. and thanks to make him smile... same goes with geet.. ooyyyi hooyyyiii sab frnds ko pata lagega tu maanneett to gaye kaam se..
thanks for the lovely update yaar.
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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
aaahhh wow ive missed soo much.. they had confession.. sweeet.. i love how they r talking everything out.. lol ooh la la.. maan wants more kids. lmao.. becahri geet.. and oh the last part lol cant wait for the next part.. friends r in for a surprise for sure and maaneet in trouble.. lol cont soon

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