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Diva_Akorshi IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 25 February 2010
Posts: 14805

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged first EID MUBARAK...tomorrow is EID in my hectic day going...lots of work at home n outside...ok let it be...

awesome update as always...u r doing better n better day by day...twist n turns yaar i can't even's update it was like fairy tale...everything after reminds me ashoka movie no similarity but as related to king n kingdom...well done fr ur effort...Clap

arnav's mom really a mystery as she dead n she gave him a pendant tht pendant nw become danger fr arnav's life...but as he brave he can handle it i know...arnav's real name is arjun  singh rathore i really like ur idea in this tht ASR...n anjali gr8 she named his baby after arnav's name..i love the way he give her silent thank you...

the magical pendant as u describe its type i like it...its not a black magic pendant but a white magic pendant...whn sahadev caught it his hand cut blood comes but pendant wasn't colored...really very imaginative...

ooo love couple can't leave each other a second...i just loved this update khushi was not statue LOL i like the way she command arnav tht they will go together...superb thn the strategy cool...

in ur update u have include a important thing  women harassment which is nw a big issue in the world,,,,as every country somehow women r suffering terribly...i can't tolerate any kind of women assault...its really heinous... u have catch this i really like sometime also suffer but rationally women suffer more...

i like ranvir the way he mimic the bird sound its unbelievable...nw they r going to fight a battle...i like arnav thought tht after become the king he will give it government to rule...the battle will be horrible i can the king very much bloody it will be fun...n i know my hero will never lost...

 waiting fr next update...nw  u r free so don't take much tym to update...thxx tht u didn't give cliff hanger evilwaa my sweet friend... 

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cheval IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 May 2012
Posts: 2525

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
 beautiful dear itz awesome

love it dear plz continue sooon :D

ku n arnav r soo good together

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hellokitty94 Senior Member

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 998

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged awesome loved both parts!!

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meenaluma IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 August 2011
Posts: 7067

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
awesome update loved both
the true king is back
how arnis mom is still alive
pls continue soon

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duncanelise Senior Member

Joined: 26 May 2012
Posts: 385

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Wow! How do you come up with all this? 
I never expected that you would wage a rajputana war in your story.. Every update has a new twist.
Loved it!

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 17 March 2012
Posts: 10963

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Wow!!! That was a truly awesome Mahaupdate. You, ESR, are back with a bang. Truly what a cliff hanger and what an amazing update. Clap Clap Clap
ClapThis is getting more and more intriguing. I hate it when women are oppressed and glad that Arnav and Khushi in your story also abhor it.
Waiting to read next part. Please update soon.

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ASR6262 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 February 2012
Posts: 14617

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
amazing update 

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tmowla Senior Member

Joined: 09 May 2012
Posts: 959

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
one hell of an update...
just simply marvelous!! cant find any words right now to explain...
the more i read this story...the more i get into this...
you are an awesome writer!!!
if you take so long to update and then present us with such shocking and awesome chapters...go ahead!!! would love to read two parts and longer updates like these if u take time...

the story is getting more interesting...
love arnav khushi's bonding...they are truly made for each other!!

ooo cant wait for the next update!!! please do it soon!!!

thnx 4 d pm and the long update!!

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