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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 9)

lalgulab Goldie

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good job eran ClapClap

sakina Goldie

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eran Goldie

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Part 26

DK and Disha have just entered together and Aai see's them and smiles and shouts:

Aai: Disha!

Disha runs to Aai and hugs her.

Aai: DK, you have come to.

DK: your, daughter says something i will have to do it.

Disha: Aai, i'll go and make some tea.

Aai: Ok, Beta. 

Dk and Aai go to sit on the sofa and disha goes to the kitchen.

Aai: DK, you do keep disha happy don't you?

DK: I love disha, and i will do anything to keep her happy i promise.

Disha comes from the kitchen and says:

Disha: you don't worry Aai, DK keeps me very happy.

Aai: I am happy to hear that beta. You to are happy what more can i ask for.

Short one today, sorry!!!! Got to revise!!!!

love eran!!!


Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz

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thanx lot. plz post next part.


lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 4:25am | IP Logged

nice one plz post the next part of the story


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Clapgood one eran dooo coninuee,,,...........

Love Asian Princess

eran Goldie

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Part 27

Disha comes with the tea and they begin to drink.

Suddenly the phone rings:

Aai goes to pick the phone up and begins to speak:

Aai: Ok, i'm just coming.

Aai puts the phone down and Dk and Disha look at each other in confusion.

Aai: I  am really sorry Disha but i will have to go because there is a meeting that i must attend.

Disha: Ok Aai (looking upset)

Aai leaves and Dk puts his arm around disha and she puts her head on his shoulder.

Disha: the only day we had, to spend time with Aai and she gets busy. Lets go home DK.

DK: No, I am going to take my lovely wife out and we can go shopping.

Disha: I'm not in the mood DK, i just want to go home.

DK: As the day goes on your mood should get better, now come on, Please!

Disha: (Smiles) OK Dk, lets go.

Arrive at a shop:

DK: (looking at a yellow and lime coloured sari on a dummy) Suddenly he gets a vision of Disha in this sari  smiling at him and goes to touch her face and then hears:

Disha: DK!!! Where are you lost, i've been calling you for ages.

DK wakes up  and smiles and says to himself:

DK: I love you so much Disha i see you everywhere.

Disha is looking at him in confusion.

Disha: DK are you listening to me!

DK: Yes, I think you should get this sari .

Disha: Ok, it nice!

Disha and Dk go and buy the sari and leave the shop happy.

Stay tuned, please reply

Love eran!!!!



eran Goldie

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Part 28

They go to a few more shop and then stop to get an ice cream for Disha and then sit in a park to eat it.

Disha: (licking her ice cream) DK do you want a bit?

Dk: Ok, (he licks a bit off) nice ice cream.

DK gets the ice cream and starts eating it.

Disha: DK! Angry

Dk starts to laughLOL

Dk starts to feed Disha the ice cream. Then they get up and go home.

Segail house:

Disha: Dk i'll put dinner on but i'll just put these bags in our room.

DK: No Disha, please put the sari's on and show me.

Disha: Why?

DK: Please (softly)

Disha: Ok, (in a shy voice)

Dk goes to sit on the Sofa.

Disha goes and comes back in the yellow and lime sari which DK had picked. Dk gets up from the sofa and moves closer to disha and walks around her.Wink

Disha puts her face down in shyness! Embarrassed

DK: You look loverly, Disha. (Softly)Tongue

He touches her hair and moves it away from her bare back and slowly touches it, moving his finger down her spin. Disha moves slowly as she is ticklish. He then faces her and touches her face and pulls her towards him and puts his hand in her hair and pushes her head back and gently kisses her neck, disha closes her eyes.

DK then moves her sari  so he can touch her stomach and lady D is completly lost in his arms!!Wink


Ved: Brother, bhabi!!!Angry

Dk and Disha suddenly part and look out for Ved who has just turned the corner. Confused

Ved: Bhabi, i'm starving please but the food on the table.

Disha: (smiles at DK) Ok, Ved.

Ved: I wasn't interupting anything was I!

Dk: No! Disha was just showing me her new sari.

Ved: (looks at disha) Nice sari, don't you agree brother!

DK: Your right Ved! (With a cheeky smile on his face)Big smile

Tell me what you think!!

love eran!!!!



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