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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 8)

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keep on writing eran.  your stories are excellent.

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eran.mwaaaaah! ur story is so much better than the original!
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Part 25

DK: Disha have you seen Ved anywhere?

Disha: (Looks behind DK) He's right behind you

DK turns round to give him the papers which had arrived for Ved in the last part of the story! 

DK: Ved these papers came for you.

Ved looks at them and then signs these papers and hands them to DK.

DK: Why are you giving these papers to me?

Ved: Because Kanaka belongs to you.

DK: What?

Ved: I don't want Kanaka, maa left the papers in my name and i am giving you your company back.

DK: Disha i can't belive this, god has given me a great brother. Tongue

DK hugs Ved and says:

DK: Thanks brother.

Ved goes from there and says that he is going out.

DK goes towards Disha and says this is the second best day of my life.

Disha: Second? (smiling)Smile

DK: the first was marrying you.

Disha smiles and blushes!Embarrassed

Disha: You ready DK we have to go to Aai's.

DK: Yes, lets go.

Dk and Disha go to the car and the driver drives them to Aai's.

They get out of the car and hold hands and start to enter together!

Please reply

love eran!!!

 

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please don't stop here keep on writing

 

 

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loving itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 2:26pm | IP Logged

hey

eran brilliant i have not been replying as u wanted to kepe it comment free here but now everyone has done it so i am going to comment and say one word lovely keep them coming

SamyBig smile

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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
The story is excellent plz continue writing
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lovely story really. thanks.

~sweta~

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