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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 7)

eran Goldie
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Part 24

Disha is putting food on the table and calls:

Disha: Dk, dinners ready!

DK: I coming Disha!

Dk comes to the table and sits next to Disha.

DK: Wow! This looks good.

Disha picks up a bit of food and puts it in to DK's mouth.

DK: It tastes better when you feed me!Wink

Disha: DK! Anyways do you remember that we are going to Aai's this evening.

DK: Disha, i don't think i will be able to come, Vedant says that there is something important that we have to do involving Kanaka.

Disha gets up and says:

Disha: Business, business, business i hate this word. Is this all you care about, not me!

DK: what are you saying Disha, i love you! i can't help it, it must be important!

Disha gets up and leaves from there and runs into Ved and doesn't even talk to him and goes to their bedroom.

DK: Disha! Disha!!

Ved: My, My, My. Looks like the happy couple aren't happy after all!

DK: She wants me to go to Aai's house with her but how can i if we have business to do.

Ved: Brother, you will have to learn to put Disha's feelings first because without Dish where would you be now! Go and say sorry to her.

DK: Your right, business will be done everyday and i hate upsetting disha.

Ved: Then go and give her this.

Ved picks up a flower from the middle of the table.

Dk takes the flower and goes to see Disha. Disha is sitting on the bed angry and crying.Angry Cry

Disha: you don't care about my feelings DK. (DK over hears)

DK: I do disha, i love you, and i'm sorry i will go to Aai's with you today, i promise!!!

DK gives disha the flower and smiles. Disha wipes her tears and says:

Disha: Really, you are really coming.

DK: Anything for you!

DK hugs Disha and wipes the rest of her tears!!!

Please reply

love eran!!!

 

 

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 11:50am | IP Logged
oh man this gets better and better how do u do it??????? well keep going!! i look @ this everyday 2 see if you add more.... now u started i hope u dont stop!!Wink
shrutichopra IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
keep writing eran..ur marvellous dude...Big smile
lucky-moon Goldie
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
yeah its a nice story line plz do keep on writing
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
that is so awesome Clap
goldi2 Goldie
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 8:16pm | IP Logged

fab

 

aanandi2003 Groupbie
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
tooo goood...I think you should put this topic in the bold letters, so that any producers visit this site and read the story and atleast then they will realise what we are expecting from them....LOL and hope they will copy your story....Smile
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 9:14pm | IP Logged

nice story. plz keep writing. thanks

~sweta~

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