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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 6)

keshp15 Senior Member
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hey eran

'great job

once again

keep it up

love KP

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this is a good one plz post the next part soon Tongue
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Keep it up Clap

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Part 22:

Disha is in a lime colored sari is walking towards mummy ji where DK is sitting next to his mother. He looks up at Disha who is smiling at the two of them.

Disha: Mummy ji, is there anything for me to do?

Sum: No beti, nothing to do.

Ved comes and sits next to Dk.

Ved: Good morning everyone! (everyone smiles)

Sum: Disha,

Disha: Jee Mummy ji?

Sum: I am going away for a few days to a temple to prey for the happiness of this family, it could take me a few days or even a week.

Disha: I will come with you, mummy ji.

Sum: No beti, if you come with me what will happen to these two.

DK and Ved look at each other as to say what? Disha starts to laugh.LOL

Disha: When will you be going, mummy ji, i will pack your things for you.

Sum: In a few hours.

Disha: i'll go and pack your things for you.

Sum: Ok!

Disha leaves to go and pack and Sum goes to the kitchen.

DK: Ved i'll just be back.

Ved: No need brother, i know where your going!!Wink

DK looks back with a cheesy smile on!!Big smile

please reply!!

love eran!!!!

 

 

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Disha is in Sum's room and is taking some clothes from the cupboard and is placing them on the bed. DK comes up behind her and puts his arms around her waist.

Disha: DK, when will you never learn there is a time and place for everything.

DK: Ok! (He lets go)Confused

Then smiles a cheeky grinBig smile and holds her again,LOL

DK: Your right Disha, i'll never learn!!!LOL

Disha: DK!! (She laughs also)

Disha starts to put the clothes in the suitcase with Dk's strong arms around her waist. Wink

Sum suddenly:

Sum: Sunny!!!!

DK lets go of Disha quickly!

Sum: Your are here, i've been looking for you everywhere!

DK: What's the matter maa?

Sum: These papers have just been sent, who are they for? (Sum hands the papers to DK)

DK: They are for Ved, i'll give them to him.

Sum: OK! Disha is the packing done?

Disha: Yes mummy ji.

Sum: I think it is time for me to go.

Sum goes to the front door and disha & Dk follow.

DK puts the papers on the sitting room table then goes to stand next to Disha, outside.

DK: Please take care maa.

Disha: Yes mummy ji  and if you need anything then please call me.

Sum: Don't worry, i'll be fine.

Sum goes to sit in the car and the driver drives off with Sum waving. Disha waves back and smiles. The car disappears in the distance.

DK: Looks like we have time for romancing now!Wink There is no Ved in the house and just the two of us!

Disha slowly moves away from Dk and goes to the direction of the garden. Dk starts moving towards her!

Disha: No Dk!! Not now please!

DK: You can't run from me now, Disha!!Wink

Disha starts to run and Dk quickens his pace! Disha runs to the garden and stops because shes out of breath. She hides behind the bush and starts to laugh!!LOL

Disha: You'l not be able to find me here! (She says to herself)

DK: Disha where are you? Disha!!

Disha still laughing!!!

Dk Looks around and sees that there is something lime coloured in the bush and starts to walk towards it, it is Disha! Disha notices he's coming towards her and starts to run but gets her pelo caught in the bush.

DK: See even god doesn't want us to part.Tongue

Dk releses her pelo and grabs disha closer and pulls her out of the bush!!!

Disha: DK you know something, your very naughty!Tongue

DK: I know i am!!Wink

Both sit on the grass!

DK starts to kiss her neck and bare shoulder. Disha closes her eyes!!Heart

Disha: Dk, can we go to Aai's today, together?

Dk is not really paying attention but still mucking around with Disha.

Disha opens her eyes and says:

Disha: DK! Are you listening to me!!

DK starts to listen.

DK: What did you say?

Disha: can we go to Aai's!?Angry ( In angry tone)

Dk: Ok, we will go later!Smile (Disha is happy)

DK lies disha on the floor of the grass and contiues with what he was doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WinkTongueEmbarrassed

Please reply!!!

Love eran!!!!

 

 

 

 

rang Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 4:50am | IP Logged

oh i can keep reading ur story for hurs, please keep writing. this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better than the actual td.

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great story eran.  please don't stop here keep writing.

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