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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 6)

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 3:13am | IP Logged

Disha is in Sum's room and is taking some clothes from the cupboard and is placing them on the bed. DK comes up behind her and puts his arms around her waist.

Disha: DK, when will you never learn there is a time and place for everything.

DK: Ok! (He lets go)Confused

Then smiles a cheeky grinBig smile and holds her again,LOL

DK: Your right Disha, i'll never learn!!!LOL

Disha: DK!! (She laughs also)

Disha starts to put the clothes in the suitcase with Dk's strong arms around her waist. Wink

Sum suddenly:

Sum: Sunny!!!!

DK lets go of Disha quickly!

Sum: Your are here, i've been looking for you everywhere!

DK: What's the matter maa?

Sum: These papers have just been sent, who are they for? (Sum hands the papers to DK)

DK: They are for Ved, i'll give them to him.

Sum: OK! Disha is the packing done?

Disha: Yes mummy ji.

Sum: I think it is time for me to go.

Sum goes to the front door and disha & Dk follow.

DK puts the papers on the sitting room table then goes to stand next to Disha, outside.

DK: Please take care maa.

Disha: Yes mummy ji  and if you need anything then please call me.

Sum: Don't worry, i'll be fine.

Sum goes to sit in the car and the driver drives off with Sum waving. Disha waves back and smiles. The car disappears in the distance.

DK: Looks like we have time for romancing now!Wink There is no Ved in the house and just the two of us!

Disha slowly moves away from Dk and goes to the direction of the garden. Dk starts moving towards her!

Disha: No Dk!! Not now please!

DK: You can't run from me now, Disha!!Wink

Disha starts to run and Dk quickens his pace! Disha runs to the garden and stops because shes out of breath. She hides behind the bush and starts to laugh!!LOL

Disha: You'l not be able to find me here! (She says to herself)

DK: Disha where are you? Disha!!

Disha still laughing!!!

Dk Looks around and sees that there is something lime coloured in the bush and starts to walk towards it, it is Disha! Disha notices he's coming towards her and starts to run but gets her pelo caught in the bush.

DK: See even god doesn't want us to part.Tongue

Dk releses her pelo and grabs disha closer and pulls her out of the bush!!!

Disha: DK you know something, your very naughty!Tongue

DK: I know i am!!Wink

Both sit on the grass!

DK starts to kiss her neck and bare shoulder. Disha closes her eyes!!Heart

Disha: Dk, can we go to Aai's today, together?

Dk is not really paying attention but still mucking around with Disha.

Disha opens her eyes and says:

Disha: DK! Are you listening to me!!

DK starts to listen.

DK: What did you say?

Disha: can we go to Aai's!?Angry ( In angry tone)

Dk: Ok, we will go later!Smile (Disha is happy)

DK lies disha on the floor of the grass and contiues with what he was doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WinkTongueEmbarrassed

Please reply!!!

Love eran!!!!





rang Senior Member

Ms. IF 420(Comic Dialogue)
Joined: 27 February 2005
Posts: 211

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 4:50am | IP Logged

oh i can keep reading ur story for hurs, please keep writing. this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better than the actual td.


baku28 Groupbie

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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 6:36am | IP Logged
great story eran.  please don't stop here keep writing.
crazyfan Goldie

Joined: 26 April 2005
Posts: 2106

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 8:44am | IP Logged
awesome eran........u rok!!!Clap
Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8184

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 9:12am | IP Logged

great story. plz keep going on. dont stop. thanks lot.


Asian Princess Goldie
Asian Princess
Asian Princess

Joined: 01 January 2005
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Posted: 10 May 2005 at 10:54am | IP Logged

WOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW eran that was wiked seriousllyyyy that is ssoooo gooodd just got aroound to reading it doo keep posting


Love Asian Princess Big smile

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Part 24

Disha is putting food on the table and calls:

Disha: Dk, dinners ready!

DK: I coming Disha!

Dk comes to the table and sits next to Disha.

DK: Wow! This looks good.

Disha picks up a bit of food and puts it in to DK's mouth.

DK: It tastes better when you feed me!Wink

Disha: DK! Anyways do you remember that we are going to Aai's this evening.

DK: Disha, i don't think i will be able to come, Vedant says that there is something important that we have to do involving Kanaka.

Disha gets up and says:

Disha: Business, business, business i hate this word. Is this all you care about, not me!

DK: what are you saying Disha, i love you! i can't help it, it must be important!

Disha gets up and leaves from there and runs into Ved and doesn't even talk to him and goes to their bedroom.

DK: Disha! Disha!!

Ved: My, My, My. Looks like the happy couple aren't happy after all!

DK: She wants me to go to Aai's house with her but how can i if we have business to do.

Ved: Brother, you will have to learn to put Disha's feelings first because without Dish where would you be now! Go and say sorry to her.

DK: Your right, business will be done everyday and i hate upsetting disha.

Ved: Then go and give her this.

Ved picks up a flower from the middle of the table.

Dk takes the flower and goes to see Disha. Disha is sitting on the bed angry and crying.Angry Cry

Disha: you don't care about my feelings DK. (DK over hears)

DK: I do disha, i love you, and i'm sorry i will go to Aai's with you today, i promise!!!

DK gives disha the flower and smiles. Disha wipes her tears and says:

Disha: Really, you are really coming.

DK: Anything for you!

DK hugs Disha and wipes the rest of her tears!!!

Please reply

love eran!!!



*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 15 March 2005
Posts: 29461

Posted: 10 May 2005 at 11:50am | IP Logged
oh man this gets better and better how do u do it??????? well keep going!! i look @ this everyday 2 see if you add more.... now u started i hope u dont stop!!Wink

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