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Part 64:

Arrive at farm house:

DK: Be careful disha!!

Dish: I'm fine!

DK takes her by the hand and makes her sit on the sofa.

Dish: Its so peaceful here, isn't it?

DK: Yes, i haven't been here for years.

Dk tells his servents to go and tidy their room and get the dinner ready for them.

Dish: DK, this was spose to be time for us to be together not bring our servents with us, i could have tided and cooked i don't mind.

DK: Its that reason i brought them with us, i don't want you to do anything until we have are children and you are 100%.

Dish: Ok! baba! (disha smiles)

DK smiles back and puts his arm round her.

suddenly..................

One of the servants walk in........Dk removes his hand and disha laughs out loud.

Dish: Ha! HAAAAAAAAA!

DK: Whats funny?

Dish: Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

DK: Disha?

Dish: Sorry! I was laughing because you went all romantic then suddnly changed, it was funny.

Dk: You said you don't like being romantic infront of people so i removed my hand.

Dish: I know but you did it so fast felt as if you were doning something wrong.

DK: Oh!!! I get it!!!

Dish: Get what?

Dk: You want me to romance with you infront of them.

Dk moves closer to her and plays with her hair. Then leans in to her.

Dish: DK!!! What are you doing!

DK: Doing what you want me to do.

Dish: DK! Servant is coming!

Dk: where? (DK moves away fast)

Dish:HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Just joking!!!!! HAaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Disha runs away to the bedroom and Dk goes after her laughing. He grabs her hand and pulls her close and says........

DK: playing games with me! Where in the bedroom now, nobody can disturb us now!!!!

DK pulls her closer and closer.....................................Wink

Tell me what you think!!!! Sorry for the delays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love eran!!!!Tongue

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