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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 5)

eran Goldie

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Posts: 2151

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 4:40am | IP Logged

Part 19:

Recap: Ved stops himself from letting Aai talk to Sum.

Aai: how are you Sumitra ji?

Sum: I am fine now, i am sorry i do not recognise you?

Aai: i am disha's mother.

Sum: have you come to collect her?

Aai: No, this is her house she can come home when ever she wants.

Sum: I do not understand how is this Disha's house?Confused

Aai: Dk and disha are married.

Sum: what? My daughter in law is Pori not disha!Angry

Ved out of the blue:

Ved: No Badi maa disha is the daughter in law of this family not pori.

Sum: what are you saying ved?

Ved: it's true badi maa, we couldn't tell you because the doctors said that we couldn't let you have any more shocks, which is why we couldn't tell you the truth.

DK: (out of the blue) This is true maa!

Disha comes up behind DK and looks at Sum and then looks down to the floor. (sad expression on her face!Cry)

Sum: Disha come here! (In angry tone)

DK: But..?

Sum: Sunny, don't say anything!

Disha starts walking towards Sum and when she is close enough she puts her head down waiting for what will happen next.

Sum: Why, didn't you tell me bahu?

Disha looks up in confusion, Sum hugs disha close and crys soft tears. 

Disha: I'm sorry Mummy ji! Please forgive me!Cry

Sum: I'm the one that should be sorry, why didn't you tell me earlier?

Disha: Sorry!Cry

Sum: Sunny, come here!!

DK comes forward,

Sum: Wait here!

Sum leaves, then comes back with something in her hand! 

Sum: Put this sindoor on my bahu!!! Sunny, It will make me happy!Tongue

DK takes the sindoor and puts it on disha, when putting it on disha closes her eyes and then opens them again. DK then takes Disha in his arms in front of everyone. Everyone is shocked but laugh!!!LOL

Pori is watching this from a distance and is not happy!!!Angry 

stay tuned for next bit and please reply!!!!

love eran!!!!



rang Senior Member

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Posted: 09 May 2005 at 7:41am | IP Logged

bravo...... great ....... beautiful


eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 11:31am | IP Logged

Part 20

Disha is seen to be packing her stuff to move into Dk's room! Wink Pori comes in Disha's room and says:

Pori: You must be happy disha, after getting your husband back.

Disha: Yes, and Pori thank you!

Pori is shocked and says:

Pori: What?

Disha: I thank you pori because if it wasn't for you anything could have happen to mummy ji. i want to give you something.

Pori: What, do you want to give me? (sarcasticly)

Disha hands her a contract for a movie.

Pori: What is this?

Disha: A contract for a movie, which i  hope you will take.

Pori is happy and hugs Disha.

Pori: Thank you Disha, you a wonderful person.

Dk out of the blue:

DK: She is, even after everything you have done to her she still helps you.

Pori: I should go, and thank you.

Dk moves towards Disha and hugs and kisses her on her forehead!!!Wink

Disha: Will you not help me move my stuff in your room?

DK: There is a quicker way to solve this problem?

Disha: What is that?

DK: You just come for now and we'll move your stuff tomorrow!! Then i will have you to myself!

Disha: DK, can you ever be serious!

DK:Not when i'm with you!!!

Dk grabs disha and takes her to his room and closes the door!!

We hear:

Disha: DK!!!!Wink

please, please reply and tell me what you think!!!!

love eran!!!


zohar Newbie

Joined: 31 March 2005
Posts: 31

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 11:47am | IP Logged
it very nice keep it up Clap Clap Clap

waiting 4 next bit

and be quick because i can't wait
baku28 Groupbie

Joined: 02 May 2005
Posts: 119

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

yes it is very good eran.

keep up the good work and please write more stories.  I love them.

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 2:28pm | IP Logged

Part 21

Next Morning:

Disha is in her dressing gown and has just washed her hair.

Dish: DK, time to get up!

DK: No Disha! 5 minutes more!

Disha goes up to Dk and splashes her hair all over Dk! And laughs!LOL Dkgrabs disha and goes on top of her.

DK: (Disha still laughing) Oh! So you find that funny!

Dish: Yes! LOL

Dk: I'll show you whats funny!

Dk starts tickling disha!Wink

Dish: No Dk, im sorry!

DK stops, and starts to look at disha! He starts to come closer and closer towards her face but suddenly...........Disha pulls him off her and runs to the other side of the room and starts to laugh again!LOL

Dk: Disha come here!!

Dish: No Dk!! Mummy ji will come!

DK: Let them come DK Sehgail is not afraid of romancing with his wife infront of anyone!!

Dish: No, but you are afraid of me!!

DK: Really, Prove it!!

Disha comes forward and starts to play fight with Dk!!Wink 

Dk: are so you want a boxing match!!

Dish: Yes!!!!

Dk grabs disha by her hand and pulls her closer!!

DK: I win!!!Wink

Both come close until there faces are not shown!!!

Suddenly there is a knock at the door and sum comes in, both come apart and stand away from each other.

Sum: beti, aren't you ready yet?

Dish: I was just coming mummy ji. (Quickly looks at Dk who is looking at her)Wink

Please reply!!!

love eran!!!!



keshp15 Senior Member

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Posts: 604

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 2:43pm | IP Logged

hey eran

'great job

once again

keep it up

love KP

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posts: 2427

Posted: 09 May 2005 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
this is a good one plz post the next part soon Tongue

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