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divyagirl Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2005 at 10:15pm | IP Logged

That was so cute!! Please Continue Soon!!!!ClapClap

Edited by divyagirl - 23 October 2005 at 10:15pm

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 October 2005 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
please cont soon!!!!!
eran Goldie

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Posted: 24 October 2005 at 9:55am | IP Logged
hi you guys i will write soon i promise!!!
I'm packed up with deadlines at uni as soon as i have time to write i will i promise!!!

Love Eran!
blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2005 at 10:27am | IP Logged
take care eran....

uni stuf comes 1st Clap Clap

bt stil....write soon Wink Big smile LOL .....

im jokin, take ure time
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Posted: 24 October 2005 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
no worries!!!
..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2005 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
eran plz write soon
u r fabolous
eran Goldie

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Posted: 25 October 2005 at 5:54am | IP Logged

Part62: Raksha Bandan Special!  

Disha is standing in a red sari buttering Dk's toast and Dk is reading the paper. Disha looks down at him.

Disha: Dk do you know what day it is?

DK: Yes i know it is Raksha Bandan, i also know you will starve yourself all day, for what?

Disha: DK this is for the happiness for the both of us and to make sure you are mine everytime.

Dk looks into Disha eyes and kisses her on the forehead.

Dk: I'm sorry disha i know how much this means to you.

Dk gets up from the table and is about to go when disha shouts...............

Disha: DK! Least have your breakfast.

Dk: Disha i'm not that hungary i'll get something later.

Disha: Ok! bye! Love you!

Dk: (looks back) Love You to!

Dk: (To himself) How can i eat disha when i know you will not eat anything all day. i will not eat if you don't eat.


Disha is standing at the door waiting for Dk to arrive! At last he does and they both go in together.

Disha: Hungry!

Dk: Yes!

Disha: You can eat now, the moon is not out yet.

DK: Disha! I'm not that hungry either.

Disha: But you just said..........!

Dk: I changed my mind...........Im having a shower, ill be quick.

Disha: (to herself) What is the matter with Dk! It's not like him to  not be hungary. He's not.................. He is...........He's not eating because i'm not. Dk! why did you do that................that's so sweet.

Disha goes to the bedroom. She goes to where he is getting changed and helps him do up his buttons!

Disha: DK! Tell me the truth! Your not eating because i'm not aren't you.

DK doesn't look into her eyes.

Dk: What? Of course not!

Disha: DK!

DK: Yes!

Disha: Why?

Dk: How can i eat knowing that you will be starving for the rest of the day.

Disha: Your mad! (She hugs him)

Both laugh!

Disha: Where is this moon! I'm really hungary now!

DK: You are my moon disha!

Disha looks at him and smiles!

Dk: There it is disha!

Disha: Yes! lets go!

Both go outside and disha has the thing in her hand she picks it up to the moon then turns it to face DK! he smiles at her and she at him.

Dk: I love you disha!

Disha smiles!

Dk picks up the glass of water and feeds her it and then disha to him. Then he takes a bit of food from the plate and disha stops him to pick up some food as well and both feed each other then they cuddle into each others arms.

Tell me what you think........................

Love Eran!!!!

eran Goldie

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Posted: 25 October 2005 at 6:02am | IP Logged
I know i have wrote raksha bandan just agnore it i really ment karva chute!!! Sorry about that!!!
Ha!! Ha!! Ha!!!
Love Eran!!!

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