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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 45)

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
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Posted: 20 October 2005 at 5:13am | IP Logged

Part 61:

Disha has just washed her hair and is drying it with a towel in the bedroom. Dk comes up behind her and says ..................

DK: Hi beautiful!

Dish:DK! you give me a shock. How was the office?

DK: Everything is going well and i hope it stays this way.

Dish: DK go  and have a shower you must be tired and i'll make us soom coffee

Disha starts to  walk away when Dk grabs her and pulls her close. I don't want a shower and don't want a coffee I JUST WANT YOU!

Disha: DK! You start anywhere and anytime.

DK: That the beauty of marriage you can.

Disha: Ok! Baba!

Disha hugs into  Dk and both go and sit on the side of the bed.

Dk: Did you miss me!

Disha: A little!

DK: A little?

Disha gets up and goes on to the balcony and looks up to  the sky. Disha has a little bump now where the twins are.

Dk comes up behind her and hugs her from behind and feeling her bump.

Disha: This night is so nice and the wind.

DK: Disha you have wet hair you will get ill i'm fine.


DK leans down a little and puts his head against the bump.

Disha: DK what are you doing?

DK: I'm going to talk to my children!

Disha laughs.

DK: Hello! I hope you can here me! There are quite a few months till you are born but i will say this don't be to hard on you mother. If you can don't move to  much and give her pain.

Disha laughs again.

DK: What?

Disha: Dk you are mad! 

DK: I just hope they don't cause you to much pain.

Disha: I will be fine! Many mothers have went through it.

DK: I know!

Dk hugs into her and disha does the same!!!

Tell me what you think!!

Love Eran!!!

nsa4657 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 October 2005 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
great part!!
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 21 October 2005 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
how sweet!!! please cont soon!!!
tanya005 Senior Member

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Posts: 794

Posted: 22 October 2005 at 9:16am | IP Logged
thanks eran...........its awsome..............thanks alot fr the story as its the best................ Clap
blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8152

Posted: 22 October 2005 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
it was fab eran, plz continue soon, ......ur story is fab..keep up da brilliant wrk eran Clap FANTASTIC Clap

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Posted: 22 October 2005 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
write sooooooooooooon
sweets Goldie

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Posts: 1144

Posted: 22 October 2005 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
it was damn cute...pls continue soon.
Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6727

Posted: 23 October 2005 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
eran that was gr8. Clap
cont. soon

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