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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 43)

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I LOVE IT!!! I love your writing.... Wink keep up your good work! Clap

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nice one!! please cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 11:46am | IP Logged
thnak u so much Eran..... i am truely honored... i didn't know that u would like my comment so much that u would dedicate the entire part to me.. thanks once again.... Heart Smile

i think my lucky days r finally here first Bombay fulfilled my request for the song in her movie... now this....... hey anyone else wants to dedicate anything to me? LOL

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Part 59:

DK is in his office on the phone and is shouting saying..........

DK: How is this possible, the deal should have went through.

DK holds his head and then Taj comes in and Dk puts the phone down not looking happy.

Taj: Sir the company has not liked our designs and does not want to go through with the deal.

Dk: This can not be happning to us.

DK gives a loud huff and says........

DK: Ok! You can go.

Suddenly..........................

DK is sitting and hands fall on to his eyes and a voice........

Voice: Guess who?

DK: It can only be the love of my life! Disha!

DK gets her by the hand and makes her sit infront of him on his desk.

Disha: How did you know!

DK: I would know if you are coming even if you were a mile away.

Disha laughs. Then goes serious.

Disha:DK is there a problem you don't look so good.

DK: No! Just like that.

Disha: You won't tell me, i thought as your wife you would tell me everything.

DK: Ok! The deal has not gone through because they don't like our designs, they say they are to  alike they want something different.

Disha: And they will, with my help.

DK: Disha no! You are pregnant and i don't want you to have any tension.

Disha: It's no tension please. and anyways it will be an excuse to be with you all day.

DK smiles and gets disha by the waist and makes her sit on his unhurt leg.

Dk: So you want to be with me all the time?

Disha: I miss you Dk at home, it gets very boring. please say yes Dk!

DK: Ok! but you will be a distraction for me.

Disha: But a nice distraction.

Disha laughs.

Dk: A very nice distraction!

DK kisses disha on the cheek and there is a knock  at the door.

DK: Please don't disturb me, come back later.

Taj: (outside) But sir i have good news.

Disha gets up and says...........

Disha: Come in Taj!

Taj: The suppliers would like to buy them now they said that they have thought over it and would like to buy.

Disha: That is good news.

DK: All of a sudden?

Taj: I don't know., that what they said.

Taj leaves..........

DK: Disha you are a good look to me,all morning i  have had a bad day  you come into the office and everything goes well. When you are with me i feel as if i have the world.

Disha hugs Dk and is smiling.

Tell me what you think.

Love Eran!!!

 

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Posted: 14 October 2005 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
awesome!! lov ur writing!!
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Posted: 14 October 2005 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
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i just love your writing eran,where do you get all this idea from,and let me tell you something,if this story was live telecasted it would a great hit and its definately better than the real TD.I was wondering if the suppliers buying whatever it was is a twist in the story Evil Smile anyway plz do continue can't wait until you write again Big smile
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Posted: 14 October 2005 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
awsome part eran!!
please do cont soon!! Clap Clap

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