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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 42)

Jaslove IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 October 2005 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
no problemo eran.

eran Goldie
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Part 60:

Dk is sitting on the bed and has the pen in his mouth working on some paperwork. Disha enters the room and see's that Dk is very serious in his work. Disha has some shirts which she is about to  put in the cupboard.

DK smiles at her and she smiles back then he continues to work.

Disha sits on the bed and sorts his shirts out and then looks at him.

Suddenly......................

Disha: DK? Can I ask you something.

DK: (Still not looking at her) Yes!

Disha: Why did you marry me?

DK looks up.

DK: What?

Disha: Why did you marry me?

Dk: Disha, i married you because i love you and like to spend time with you. You know that!

Disha: Then why aren't you spending time with me, DK you have been to the office and then we had supper then i thought we would spend time together but you are just doing your work. Dk i  know work is important but spending time with your wife is to.

DK: OK Baba!! Im sorry.

DK holds his ears.

Disha smiles and laughs slightly.

DK: Come here!

Disha sits next to Dk.

Dk: Im sorry you are right i should spend time with you when i am here. It'll not happen again.

just a short one today  a bit busy today!

Love eran!!!

 

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great part eran
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thanx and please cont soon
divyagirl Goldie
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Posted: 17 October 2005 at 4:30pm | IP Logged

Great Job!!!

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Posted: 17 October 2005 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
tht was way toooo short...continue soon pls.
tanya005 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 October 2005 at 9:09am | IP Logged
THNX FR THE STORY..............ITS BECOMING BETTER THAN THE REAL ONE DAY BY DAY.............................
eran Goldie
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Part 61:

Disha has just washed her hair and is drying it with a towel in the bedroom. Dk comes up behind her and says ..................

DK: Hi beautiful!

Dish:DK! you give me a shock. How was the office?

DK: Everything is going well and i hope it stays this way.

Dish: DK go  and have a shower you must be tired and i'll make us soom coffee

Disha starts to  walk away when Dk grabs her and pulls her close. I don't want a shower and don't want a coffee I JUST WANT YOU!

Disha: DK! You start anywhere and anytime.

DK: That the beauty of marriage you can.

Disha: Ok! Baba!

Disha hugs into  Dk and both go and sit on the side of the bed.

Dk: Did you miss me!

Disha: A little!

DK: A little?

Disha gets up and goes on to the balcony and looks up to  the sky. Disha has a little bump now where the twins are.

Dk comes up behind her and hugs her from behind and feeling her bump.

Disha: This night is so nice and the wind.

DK: Disha you have wet hair you will get ill i'm fine.

Suddenly.............

DK leans down a little and puts his head against the bump.

Disha: DK what are you doing?

DK: I'm going to talk to my children!

Disha laughs.

DK: Hello! I hope you can here me! There are quite a few months till you are born but i will say this don't be to hard on you mother. If you can don't move to  much and give her pain.

Disha laughs again.

DK: What?

Disha: Dk you are mad! 

DK: I just hope they don't cause you to much pain.

Disha: I will be fine! Many mothers have went through it.

DK: I know!

Dk hugs into her and disha does the same!!!

Tell me what you think!!

Love Eran!!!

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