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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 42)

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Posted: 11 October 2005 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
please cont soon!!
great part!!

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Part 57: Disha's Birthday part 4!

Todays update is for Jaslove for guessing right!! Nice one!!!Wink

A room full of toys................ the room is nicely decorated with baby wall paper and micky mouses etc...

Disha is shocked as she looks around the room!

Dish: DK..........What?

DK smiles! Big smile

Dish: DK, i don't know what to say! (disha has tears coming down her cheek!)Cry

DK: Ah! Disha! Don't cry!

Dish: I am crying because i am happy, DK! You don't know what this means to me.

DK takes disha in his arms and says.............

DK: disha we have been through alot and these twins are something for us to look forward to and hopefully put everything behind us.

Disha moves away and looks around the room. There are toys for boys and girls and cots that are matching.

Dish: Dk what do you think we will have a boy or a girl?

DK: I hope it is one of both.

Dish: What if it is two boys? or two girls?

Dk: (Laughs) then we will have to have another child for the toys that can't be used. The boys can't play with girls dolls now can there and the girls would not like to play with the boys toys would they...............?

Disha laughs out loud and so  does Dk .............she runs towards Dk and says.............

Dish: Mr Segail I love you!!!

DK: Mrs Segail I love you to!!

DK moves towards Dish to kiss her on the cheek but disha runs away but DK catches her sari intime and pulls her back with a cheeky grin! Wink

Dish: DK..........Someone will come!

DK: I don't care!

Dish: Please!

DK: No! (nodding his head)

Dk pulls her towards her and feels her face with his finger and then her lips where disha suddenly..............bits his finger and dk quickly moves his hand.

Disha laughs and moves towards the door Dk laughs to and shouts:

DK: Disha!

Disha runs back  towards the party and Dk tries to  catch up with her.

Suddenlly.............

Aai: Disha where have you been, don't you want to cut your cake the guests are waiting.

Disha looks back and finds Dk is smiling at her with a very cheeky smile.

Dish: Yes, lets cut the cake.

DK comes behind her and says.........

Dk: Yes lets do........(Aai Leaves with a smile) DK puts his hand on her waist and smiles and Dish says...

Dish: Stop it Dk someone will see!

DK: Disha i told you i don't care!

Disha looks down and holds his hand to take it away.

Dk: Lets go and cut the cake!

Dish: OK! (She smiles at him)

Tell me what you think, And thanks for reading!!

Love Eran!!!

 

 

 

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brilliant

plzz cont Clap
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couldn't be any better! Clap Clap Clap
plz continue Smile
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Posted: 12 October 2005 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
thanks Eran the story was gr8. Clap

"DK: disha we have been through alot and these twins are something for us to look forward to and hopefully put everything behind us".

only if this happened in TD soon. such a lovely dialogue. Eran you nailed it. Embarrassed Clap


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Posted: 12 October 2005 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
nice part eran!!
please cont soon!! Smile
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 2:11am | IP Logged
you know what eran... i the best part i like about Indian romance is that it is done as a very private affair, couples don't go around showing of their affection publically and u my dear have used this very beautifully in ur story, it is comendable.
imagine if DK kisses Disha in front of all the people or keeps holding her by waist all the time all the beauty & spice would be killed. Bravo is the word for u. keep it up.
Clap luv,
rang Smile
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 5:06am | IP Logged

Part 58: Disha's Birthday Part 5!

Todays episode i will have to dedicate to Rang for her sweet comments:

Here it goes!!!

Recap: DK and Dish are just about to go and cut disha's birthday cake!

Dk and Disha are standing next to her aai, rano and everyone who she clearly loves.

Everybody: Happy Birthday to you! etc......

Disha cuts her cake but grabs Dk's hand as well to cut it with her. They both cut the cake and disha picks up a piece to feed her aai who is standing right next to her (DK is still smiling).

Aai: No beta! This piece is given to the person who  you love the most.

Disha turns round and feeds DK. And Dk takes the piece and feeds Disha.

DK: Happy Birthday! Disha! (Smiles at her, with a twinkle in his eye) Wink

Dish: Thank You!

Disha starts to  serve the cake out to everyone and all are happy.

Later...............

Dish: Bye Aai! Thanks for coming!

Aai: How could i have not come, Disha!

Everybody has left and Dk is sitting on the sofa where disha comes to sit next to her.

The servents are clearing up and dish says...........

Disha: Why don't you go to sleep we can do the rest tomorrow its getting later.

Servents: Ok!

Servents leave and the two love birds are alone at last. Disha hugs Dk and Dk looks straight into her eyes.

Disha: Thanks DK! I will never forget this day!

DK: Neither will I!

DK puts his feet up and puts his head in disha's lap. Disha moves down to rub her nose with his. Dk starts to laugh and so does she.

Disha: Tomorrow you will go  back to work and i will be bored here on my own.

DK: Thats business disha and you should know how much work i have to do to be succesful.

Dish: I know! I just want you to be with me all the time!

DK: Why don't you come and give me my dinner everyday and we can have it together in the office!

Disha: OK! (disha yawns) I'm so tired!

DK: I'm quite tired to. Shall we go to bed.

Disha: Ok!

Both go to the bedroom and cuddle into each other and Dk says..........

DK: I love you disha......... Sweet dreams!

Disha smiles and lights go out!!!Wink

Tell me what you think!

Love Eran!!!!!

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