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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 40)

ellen4eva Senior Member
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Posted: 12 October 2005 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
couldn't be any better! Clap Clap Clap
plz continue Smile

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Posted: 12 October 2005 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
thanks Eran the story was gr8. Clap

"DK: disha we have been through alot and these twins are something for us to look forward to and hopefully put everything behind us".

only if this happened in TD soon. such a lovely dialogue. Eran you nailed it. Embarrassed Clap


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Posted: 12 October 2005 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
nice part eran!!
please cont soon!! Smile
rang Senior Member
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 2:11am | IP Logged
you know what eran... i the best part i like about Indian romance is that it is done as a very private affair, couples don't go around showing of their affection publically and u my dear have used this very beautifully in ur story, it is comendable.
imagine if DK kisses Disha in front of all the people or keeps holding her by waist all the time all the beauty & spice would be killed. Bravo is the word for u. keep it up.
Clap luv,
rang Smile
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 5:06am | IP Logged

Part 58: Disha's Birthday Part 5!

Todays episode i will have to dedicate to Rang for her sweet comments:

Here it goes!!!

Recap: DK and Dish are just about to go and cut disha's birthday cake!

Dk and Disha are standing next to her aai, rano and everyone who she clearly loves.

Everybody: Happy Birthday to you! etc......

Disha cuts her cake but grabs Dk's hand as well to cut it with her. They both cut the cake and disha picks up a piece to feed her aai who is standing right next to her (DK is still smiling).

Aai: No beta! This piece is given to the person who  you love the most.

Disha turns round and feeds DK. And Dk takes the piece and feeds Disha.

DK: Happy Birthday! Disha! (Smiles at her, with a twinkle in his eye) Wink

Dish: Thank You!

Disha starts to  serve the cake out to everyone and all are happy.

Later...............

Dish: Bye Aai! Thanks for coming!

Aai: How could i have not come, Disha!

Everybody has left and Dk is sitting on the sofa where disha comes to sit next to her.

The servents are clearing up and dish says...........

Disha: Why don't you go to sleep we can do the rest tomorrow its getting later.

Servents: Ok!

Servents leave and the two love birds are alone at last. Disha hugs Dk and Dk looks straight into her eyes.

Disha: Thanks DK! I will never forget this day!

DK: Neither will I!

DK puts his feet up and puts his head in disha's lap. Disha moves down to rub her nose with his. Dk starts to laugh and so does she.

Disha: Tomorrow you will go  back to work and i will be bored here on my own.

DK: Thats business disha and you should know how much work i have to do to be succesful.

Dish: I know! I just want you to be with me all the time!

DK: Why don't you come and give me my dinner everyday and we can have it together in the office!

Disha: OK! (disha yawns) I'm so tired!

DK: I'm quite tired to. Shall we go to bed.

Disha: Ok!

Both go to the bedroom and cuddle into each other and Dk says..........

DK: I love you disha......... Sweet dreams!

Disha smiles and lights go out!!!Wink

Tell me what you think!

Love Eran!!!!!

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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 8:55am | IP Logged
I LOVE IT!!! I love your writing.... Wink keep up your good work! Clap
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 11:44am | IP Logged
nice one!! please cont soon!!!!
rang Senior Member
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Posted: 13 October 2005 at 11:46am | IP Logged
thnak u so much Eran..... i am truely honored... i didn't know that u would like my comment so much that u would dedicate the entire part to me.. thanks once again.... Heart Smile

i think my lucky days r finally here first Bombay fulfilled my request for the song in her movie... now this....... hey anyone else wants to dedicate anything to me? LOL

rang Star

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