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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 4)

dracomalfoy Groupbie
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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
eran i don't know what to say Clap
the story is going greatly.Wink
sometimes i get confused abt the update and the story
i really wish that this would happen really in the serial it would be so fantastic
i love the story
keep writing
i used to read
i am reading
i will be reading
a fan of ur story.Embarrassed

Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 10:39pm | IP Logged

its grat story. wait for next part

~sweta~

stonex IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 11:39pm | IP Logged

GREAT GREAT STORY

KEEP IT UP

 

eran Goldie
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Posted: 08 May 2005 at 3:52am | IP Logged

Big smilePart 18

They reach home and both go to there seprate rooms. Disha is smiling and thinking of the evening she has had with DK and DK is thinking the same!

Next Morning:

Disha is in the kitchen making breakfast. She puts the breakfast on the table and while she is doing this she heres:

"Hello beautiful" She turns round to see DK smiling at her with a rose in his hand. Out of the blue Sumitra turns up and disha hides the rose.

Disha: good morning mummy ji.

Sum: good morning beta.

Pori turns up and sits next to DK.Angry

Pori: good morning everyone.

Sum smiles at pori. Suddenly Ved comes back from dehli and finds them at the table. Disha is shocked incase Ved says anything that will tell the truth about DK and Dish being husaband and wife.

Dish: Ved will you please come and sign some papers for me in the other room.

Dish gets up and quickly takes ved to her room and tells him the truth about everything. Ved is shocked,

Ved: this is not right disha you are the daughter in law of the family not pori. I  will tell badi maa everything, nothing will happen to her.

Dish: No ved this is not right, you can't tell mummy ji anything until she's all right. Please ved.

Ved: Ok! but i don't agree with this.

Dish: have you had breakfast?

Ved: No,

Dish: will you not eat breakfast with your bhabi?

Both laugh!!LOL

Ved: Ok, lets go!

DK see's this from a distance and starts to think to himself that there is nothing for me to worry about between ved and disha's relationship because they are just friends. Big smile (One misunderstanding finished)!!

After Breakfast disha goes outside for a walk and starts to think how long will it have to be before mummy ji can be told the truth. A hand is shown behind her that is touching her face.

Dish: DK!

DK: How did you know it was me?

Dish: i can tell you are there even if i don't see you. Wink

DK: really!! i'm impressed!!

both laugh!!LOL

while they are talking! Aai has just come and see sumitra in the sitting room and goes to talk to her. Confused Disha does not know that Aai has come. Ved see's this and starts to move forward to stop Aai but then stops himself and thinks:

Ved: should i stop Aai, will it really be a bad thing!Disha will then get the respect she deserves from this family,she has suffered alot, enough is enough!!!!

tell me what you think!

love eran!!!Big smile

 

 

 

Asian Princess Goldie
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Posted: 08 May 2005 at 7:31am | IP Logged

Smile thats realll godd eran doo continuuueeeeeeee Big smile

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 08 May 2005 at 8:08am | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 May 2005 at 8:28am | IP Logged

hey

this is excellent

keep it up

love kp

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