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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 39)

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please cont soon!!


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where are you eran

plzzzzzzzzzzz write sooooooooooon
eran Goldie

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there will be two updates on the story today!!!
some time this afternoon, sorry my assignment for uni will have to come first i spent all day on it yesterday!!! Sorry!!!!

Love Eran!!!
Neha-1 don't get upset i will update today!!! And a longer story just for you!!! Smile


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thanks eran
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Disha's Birthday Part 1 !

Part 54:

DK is in the shower and disha is in the bedroom and is not looking happy. She thinks DK has forgotten her birthday but he hasn't he's just pretending and secretly has a suprise for her.

Disha: I am pregnant and he was over the moon about that but when it comes to remembering my birthday he forgets.

Secretly DK is listening from behind but she just doesn't know it yet.

DK:(not making is obvious that he has heard) Disha where is my shirt.

Disha: On the bed.

DK: Thanks.

Disha: DK, aen't you forgetting something?

DK: Am i WHAT?

Disha: Nothing, i think it just me.

DK laughs and smiles and Disha has just left the room.

5 minutes later..........

Disha is at the table serving breakfast.

DK: Wow! this looks great. Disha i will be late home tonight because i have a meeting to go to. So don't wait up and just go to sleep.

Disha: (unhappy) Ok!Confused

Disha thinks to herself that Dk has really forgot her birthday.

DK: Shall I go then?

Disha: If you have to.

DK: Whats the matter Disha?

Disha: Nothing!

DK: There is something come on tell me!

Disha: What i wanted today, didn't happen.

DK: What was that?

Disha: Nothing, you better leave are you will be late for work.

DK smiles.... and thinks Disha! LOL

Disha walks DK to his car and says.....

Disha: Bye!

DK: Bye! I love you!

Disha: I love you too, (Unhappy) Cry

Disha walks back inside and closes the door.

Disha: DK how could you forget!!!Angry I wanted to spend this day with you and you just left by saying you will be late tonight.

Disha goes to their bedroom and opens the door to find........................................................ ..

Roses everywhere!!!!! A big birthday card on the bed and presents covering the whole double bed.

Disha is smiling and now crying!!Smile Cry

Disha: You remembered!!! DK!!! You!!!

Disha runs to  the front door and opens the door to find DK with a big smile!Smile Wink

Disha hugs him tight and say...........

Disha: You remembered!!! Why didn't you tell me?

DK: And miss how upset you were this morning!

DK Laughs!!LOL

Disha punches him softly on the arm. Then smiles!Smile

DK: Disha, how could i forget the most important day in my life! I love you Disha and i could never forget your birthday! Embarrassed How could i go to work today!

Disha: DK I love you so much!!! Embarrassed Can i open my presents now?

DK: Ok! Lets go!

They closes the front door and go to the bedroom.

Watch out for part to soon..........

Love Eran!!!


eran Goldie

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Posted: 08 October 2005 at 8:00am | IP Logged

Disha's Birthday Part 2!!!

Part 54:

Dk and Disha are on the bed reading Disha's birthday card.

DK: To my loving, caring, beautiful wife! Happy Birthday! I love you with all my heart and i hope you enjoy the presents!!! etc............... There are 3 kisses on the end of the card Disha and I will have to give you them.

DK kisses Disha on her cheek 3 times!!!Wink

Disha: Thank You! Now can i open my presents.

DK: OK!! Open this on first.

Disha: Ok!

Disha opens it up to  find a ring a diamond ring.

Disha: DK, its beautiful.

Disha kisses Dk on the cheak!Wink

Disha: Thank you!

DK: Your Welcome!! Embarrassed

After opening many lovely expensive gifts disha says........

Disha: Where is my cake?

Dk: We can have it later!! 

DK looks at the clock.

DK: Get ready into this!

DK gets a lovely yellow sari and hands it to disha!

Disha: Wow! its lovely! Why where are we going!

DK: Suprise!!

Disha: Suprise? Thats not fair?  Please tell me!

DK: NO! Now get changed.....please!

Disha: OK!

Disha goes to get changed.

30 minutes later...........

They are sitting in a resturant having a romantic meal for two which they have just finished and are having desert which is vanilla ice cream which they are sharing and feeding each other.

DK: Open up!

Disha: (laughs Opens up and eats) It's nice! Your turn!

DK opens up to eat!

DK: Waiter!

Waiter: Yes Sir!

DK: One expensive bottle of champane please!

Waiter: Yes Sir!

Waiter brings it and DK says a tost!

DK: To My darling Wife on her birthday!Embarrassed

DK Drinks!!

DK: Now comes suprise number 3!!

Disha: What? No DK lets go home I'm tired now!

DK: Suprise number 3 is at home disha.

Disha: What is it?

DK: Not telling, now lets leave and you can find out.

Disha: OK!!!

Find out tomorrow guys.......... tell me what you think!!!!

Love eran!!!



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Eran...... y0u Smack it Gal......... thnx a l0t f0r b0th Parts Big smile ........ h0pe u hv a g00d weekend Wink


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eran the parts was fab Clap

have a nice weekend

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