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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 3)

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
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Posted: 05 May 2005 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Part 15

The bed room door starts to open and we see a very happy DK getting pushed in the room by Ved. Ved says:

V: see you tommorow brother!Wink

Ved then closes the door and DK turns round to face Disha. He comes closer to her and sits on the bed. He grabs her hand and just looks at her with a grin on his face. Dish is not reacting but we see that she is happy!!!

DK: Disha, today we are going to start a future together where they will be us and only us. I promise you disha that i will keep you happy and not give you any troubles. I will be the perfect husband to you.

DK then moves even more closer and begins to lift up her chunri, and we see disha's face. DK then lift up her chin and makes her look at him.

DK: I love you disha, and i wish this moment could last forever. Embarrassed

Disha then moves towards DK and both cuddle each other and close their eyes.

Dish: I promise you DK i will look after Mummy ji and bring this family happiness. I promise to love you forever. Tongue

they both look at each other.....

stay tuned!!!!

love eran!!!!

eran Goldie

Joined: 06 March 2005
Posts: 2151

Posted: 06 May 2005 at 11:07am | IP Logged

Part 16

They then cuddle up and then the lights go out you know they are celebrating their marrage!!!!Wink

Next Morning:

DK and Dish are asleep and they are cuddling each other. The sun has just hit Disha's face so she opens her eyes. She looks at DK to find him asleep but smiling. DK is sleeping on her chuni she tries to move away and pull it but its not shifting, after pulling for so long it finally comes free. Disha then starts to leave the bed but suddenly.......

DK grabs her chuni and pulls her back and kisses her on the cheek.

Disha: DK, let go mummy ji will be up soon!

DK: No! i will not let you go because we have just been married and we need to spend some quality time together.

Disha: Please let go. (Smiling at the same time)

DK lets go and disha gets off the bed and towards the mirror. She starts to remove her jewelery and DK come up behind her and kisses her neck and rests his head on her shoulde,r both are looking in the mirror! Tongue

Disha: DK, why don't you go and have a shower?

DK: Ok, on one condition, you will join me!!

Dish: No DK!!! You go!!

DK: Then im not going!

DK then starts to put his hand on dishas bare stomach , his hands are cold and disha says:

Disha: DK, your hand are cold...(she doesn't get to finish)

DK turns her round and then they heads are shown close, very close and Disha pulls away and says:

Disha: DK!! Wink Tongue

She then goes all shy and puts her face in her hands. DK pulls her hand away from her face and says:

DK: can't a husband romance with his wife?

Disha goes all shy.....Embarrassed


love eran!!!!



keshp15 Senior Member

Joined: 05 March 2005
Posts: 604

Posted: 06 May 2005 at 1:34pm | IP Logged

hey great job


love the suhagraat!!!!!!!!!Wink

keep up the good job

love KP

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 29461

Posted: 06 May 2005 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
man this is dam good!!! if only this really happens.. then my troubles will vanish!Big smile
eran Goldie

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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 8:37am | IP Logged

Part 17

Disha then walks up to DK and gives him a hug and puts her head on his shoulder she then closes her eyes and then opens them again to see............................

She is back in the resturant garden and is in DK's arms. She then looks at DK with love in her eyes and soft tears.

DK: What's the matter disha?

Disha doesn't say anything but keeps looking at him, DK then touches her on her face and Disha wakes up from her fantacy world.

DK: whats the matter disha?

Disha then goes back into his arms and says......

Disha: I had a dream DK, we got married and everyone was there and mummy ji was very happy. We had are........ (she then gets out of DK's arms and puts her head down.)

Disha goes all shy.Embarrassed

DK: we had are suhag raat, right? Disha nods to say yes.

DK: what happend, did we have fun, you know?

Disha: DK!!!

DK: Just kidding!

DK: Shall we go,its getting quiet late?

Disha: One minute DK, what were you thinking when i was having my dream.

DK: nothing.

Disha: come on DK please tell me.

DK:I didn't have to think about anything disha because you were with me, and thats all i want, just you!!!Tongue

Dish then cuddles into DK and they both start to walk out of the garden.

tell me what you think!

love eran!!!!



jhinni Groupbie

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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 9:25am | IP Logged

hey eran

great story better than the original.

waiting 4 the next part

be quick plzz

goldi2 Goldie

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Posted: 07 May 2005 at 11:59am | IP Logged
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