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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 29)

stonex IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 10:41pm | IP Logged

it was good

thanks

eran Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 8:28am | IP Logged

Part 49

At the Seaside:

Disha and DK are sitting on a blanket infront of the sea and eating ice cream. Disha manages to drop hers and says:

Disha: DK, my ice cream........

DK looks at her ice cream on the floor.

DK: I would give you mine but its to nice to give to you.

Disha: (shocked) DK!

DK Starts to laugh and puts his arm around disha so she can share his ice cream. Both eat it until DK delibertly puts ice cream on disha's nose.

Disha: DK!

DK again starts to laugh until disha puts ice cream on his nose to.

Disha starts to laugh.

DK: You find it funny do we.

Disha: Yes! (still laughing)

DK drops the ice cream and starts to tickle disha. Disha is on the blanket laughing her head off and saying:

Disha: DK stop! Please!

DK stops and lies on top of disha just above her chest. DK and disha both look around and see that many couples are at the beach together.

DK: Disha look over there. (DK points)

Disha looks to see a married couple with a daughter and a son playing in the sand.

DK: Some day disha that will be us with our kids.

Disha: I know, DK. They look so sweet don't they.

Disha puts her arms around DK and both lie there in the sun until a little boy comes over to collect his ball that has just hit off DK. DK picks up the ball.

Boy: Sorry Uncle!

DK: It's OK! You like playing with your ball.

Boy: Yes! I want to be a footballer.

Disha starts to smile and says....

Disha: You will be beta.

Boy: Uncle, can i have my ball.

DK: Yes, here...

Boy: Thank you!

Boy leaves happy. DK watches the boy while he runs back to his dad.

Disha links into DK and puts her head on his shoulder

Disha: What are you thinking?

DK: Only this that i want a son like that disha, i would give him everything he wanted, i would never say no.

Disha: Great you want a spoiled child.

DK starts to laugh and so does disha.

Stay tuned, please reply!!!!!

Love Eran!!!

 

 

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 9:34am | IP Logged

great storyClapClapClap

plz write some romantic scenes between the d'sEmbarrassed

goldi2 Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 12:50pm | IP Logged

Clap GREAT STORY

PLAESE WRITE LOTS MORE!!!!!!

later

Goldi2

Big J Goldie
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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 12:57pm | IP Logged

hey u no wha ERAN u shou become da writer 4 TD, atleast v wont hav 2 go thou all dis misery GUHAS unloads on us every week.

really dat waz real nice, TD would be so much better wid a story like dat, keep up da gud wrk. T.C!!Big smile

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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 1:48pm | IP Logged

Wow!! u r like the 1 BOY 2 be obossed w/ this forum!! WOW!! Anywayz nice story eran and keep riting!!!ClapClap

 

 

*Reemz* IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 June 2005 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
eran u r simply superb!! plz continue!! Hope u r feeling better...u had hayfever rite...its horrible i know!!
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Gr8 story Eran!!Clap

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