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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 28)

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Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:28am | IP Logged
hey Eran whats up...no more continuation of the story??

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 June 2005 at 8:57am | IP Logged
HEY ERAN WHERE ARE YOU????????????
goldi2 Goldie
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Posted: 16 June 2005 at 6:34pm | IP Logged

tottally!!!!!!!

i've read this story like 3 times form the begeing already!!! I"m getting bored... plez continue!!!!!!!

 

later

Goldi2

eran Goldie
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 6:43am | IP Logged

Sorry everyone! I've been at the doctors haven't been well recently. I've got hay fever on top of that so i'm really i'll try to continue with the story from now on!

Part 48:

Disha: DK, what are we doing today?

DK: I think we should go down to the beach for a walk.

Disha: OK!

DK: But before that..........

DK gets a hold of Disha and pulls her close, and faces her and looks into her eyes.

Disha: Mr DK Segail, let go, please.

DK: One condition....

Disha: Whats that.

DK: I get a hug and a kiss.

Disha: No way!

DK: OK! I don't mind staying like this all day.

Disha: Please DK, don't do this, lets go.

DK: NO!!

DK turns his head to the side and looks outside the window and says....

DK: Shame it's a nice day to and we will have to spend it inside.

Disha quickly looks outside to then suddenly gives DK a kiss on the cheek and hugs him tight and doesn't let go, then goes all shy. Embarrassed

DK: That was nice. (Smiling) Smile

Disha is smiling with her head on his chest.

DK: Shall we go then.

Disha: No!

DK: Why?

Disha: I don't want to go now!

DK: Why?

Disha doesn't reply and DK grabs her waist.

DK: I'll get you a ice cream!

Disha starts to laugh and so does DK, both are happy. LOL

Please reply, stay tuned a day at the sea side coming up!!

Love eran!!!!

p.s. I'm sorry!!

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 10:02am | IP Logged
wow this is spectacular plz do continue when ever u are free
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
very very goooooooooood keep it up,and write sooooon plzzzzzzzCry
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 12:09pm | IP Logged

thats was short.. but worth readin!!!!!!

do continue soon!!

laer

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rang Senior Member
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 12:37pm | IP Logged

that was excellent eran. how did u do ur exams?

plz take good care of ur health coz the time u spend at the doc u can actually devote that time to writing such great scenes.Wink

rangSmile

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