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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 26)

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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 3:34am | IP Logged
u r doing great eran...keep up the good work and don't worry we will stay tuned until after ur exams for the latest updates on ur story.... Clap Smile

goldi2 Goldie
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 4:53pm | IP Logged

AWSOME STORY!!!!!!! BUT PLEASE HURRY WITHT HE NEXT PART

 

later goldi2

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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
eran
i haven't been able to write lately however i did read all of your stoires and they are wonderful.  Please keep on writing after your exam.
good luck in your exam.
NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 10:05am | IP Logged
write soon eranCry
SRKfever Senior Member
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 10:37pm | IP Logged

Good Luck and thank you for writting such wonderfull stories we all need them after watching the two d's seperation

thanks to you we have a smile when we leave the forum

you're greatly appreciatedSmile

    thanxEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 6:04am | IP Logged

no prob Good Luck on ur exams! amazing storiesClap

eran Goldie
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Posted: 12 June 2005 at 4:09am | IP Logged

Recap: DK moves closer to her and hugs her and starts to kiss her shoulder Disha closes her eyes. DK moves behind her and puts his arm across her upper chest and leans on her shoulder behind her. He kisses her neck and then her cheek.

Suddenly:

Waiter: Sir?

Todays: (Part 47)

DK moves away from disha and says:

DK: Yes?

Disha looks down embarrased.Embarrassed

DK: What is it?

Waiter: Sir your 2 hours are up and we will now have to open it to all our guests.

DK: I understand, we have finished in here anyways. Thank You.

Waiter leaves

Disha runs towards Dk and hides her face away on his chest.

DK: Disha, whats the matter?

Disha looks up towards him and and gently shakes her head to say nothing.

DK: Shall we go?

Disha: Yes.

Next.............Reach the bedroom.

Disha goes towards the mirror and  starts to take her jewllery off. DK comes up behind her and says:

DK: I think we should call home tommorow just to make sure everything is fine at home.

Disha: your right DK, i was going to tell you this to.

DK: anyways this is tommorrow, we have tonight first. Come here disha.

Disha: (looking into the mirror and looking towards DK) No DK, i know what you want, and i get all shy ,please no.

DK: Please...

Disha: OK!

Disha goes towards DK who is sitting on a chair on the balcany and is looking at the romantic night. Disha sits on his unhurt leg and cuddles into him. The stars are twinkling and the moon is full and knowbody is around to see them.

DK: this night is so romantic, don't you think.

Disha: (no reply)

DK: Disha! Where are you lost?

Disha: Nothing! Yes your right, this night is romantic.

DK: whats the matter disha?

Disha: I was thinking that out of all the girls in your life i am so lucky because you could have easily married one of them and settled down and we wouldn't be here like this.

DK: Disha, there is only one women in my life i have cared more for then anything, and that is you.

Disha looks straight ito his eyes.

DK: Yes only you. You made me the man that i am today disha. Money was only important in my life and getting maa better, but you shown me a different side to life i never want to forget. Disha i promise you that i will never let you regreat your life with me, i will make you so happy that  you won't have to cry because of me. 

Disha: I know you will DK!

DK: Anyways, you won't have time to cry because we will have a big family.

Disha: Really, hows that?

DK: First we have a boy, no wait two boys.

Disha: Two boys!

DK: Yes because if we have a daughter she will have two brothers to protect her.

Disha: DK,your mad!

DK: Your right, i'm mad for you.

Disha smiles!!!Smile

Stay tuned, please reply!!!!!

Love Eran!!!

P.s. Sorry for making you wait so long.

 

 

 

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Posted: 12 June 2005 at 5:10am | IP Logged
hmmmmmm just amazing

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