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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 23)

eran Goldie
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 10:58am | IP Logged

Part 46:

Recap: Firework!!!!!!!!!Wink

Disha is huging DK while, looking at the fireworks, DK has not realised that disha is crying softly.

DK lifts her chin up and notices the tears and gets a worried expresion on his face!Confused

DK: What's the matter Disha?

Disha: Nothing, (Softly)

DK: There's something, please tell me.

Disha: You love me this much. (crying) Don't love me so much DK because if i hurt you i will not be able to forgive myself.

DK: I love you with all my heart and you could never do anything to hurt me.

DK takes her face in his hands and rubs her tears from her face.

Disha: Im scared DK, I don't know what i will do if you ever part from me again.

DK: That will never happen, because the necklase will never allow it, right?

Disha: Right.

Disha smiles and looks towards the fireworks and DK just looks at her. Then quickly kisses her on her cheek. He begins to laugh as Disha has a shocked expression on her face and has her hand on her cheek.

Disha: Mr DK Segail, you are very naughty.

DK: Really?

Disha: Yes! (smiles)

DK: Shall I be naughty again. (he kisses her again)

Disha: DK!!

Disha leans forward and kisses DK on the cheek and runs and begains to laugh.

DK: Disha! (smiles)

Disha looks back at him and gently moves her head side to side and moves back from him, DK is moving towards her.

DK grabs her arm, disha tries to get away, DK stops her and moves infront of her and pulls her close.

DK: I'll not let you go that easy! Wink

DK moves closer to her and hugs her and starts to kiss her shoulder Disha closes her eyes. DK moves behind her and puts his arm across her upper chest and leans on her shoulder behind her. He kisses her neck and then her cheek.

Suddenly:

Waiter: Sir?

Stay tuned, please reply

love eran!!!

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Oh god waiter kabab mei hadi LOL ur story is great eran wat more can isay plz continue writing can't wait for the next bit!
NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

wowwwwww eran

your  story is relly very great and gooodClap

write next part sooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

 

rang Senior Member
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 1:19pm | IP Logged

excellent work i'm falling in love with ur writing.Heart

 

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keshp15 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 3:17pm | IP Logged

hey eran

nice jobClap

will definitely wait for the next part

love KPWink

Minluvsdrav Senior Member
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
hey eran u def hav skill girl!
paki girl in us Groupbie
paki girl in us
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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 4:00pm | IP Logged

Cant wait 4 next part........Great Job Clap

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 4:30pm | IP Logged

lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great story

 

fab

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