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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 22)

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Posted: 01 June 2005 at 5:18am | IP Logged

great writting

very romantic seens

 

lucky-moon Goldie
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just great
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Posted: 01 June 2005 at 6:10am | IP Logged

i love ur story, wish it could be true. i keep reading it over & over again.

rangSmile

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 June 2005 at 9:23am | IP Logged
VERY NICE AND GERAT STORY

VERY ROMANTIC SCENES TOO, PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTClap

I AGREE WITH RANG, I WISH THAT TOOOO     Cry
NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 9:06am | IP Logged
hi eran

where are you??????????????

waiting 4 your next part!!!!!!!!! Cry
eran Goldie
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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 10:20am | IP Logged

Part 45:

DK and Disha  are looking towards each other until suddenly:

Waiter: Sir?

DK wakes up and says:

DK: Yes put the food down and you may leave, and make sure we are not distured.

DK gives the boy a tip and then looks towards Disha.

Waiter: Yes Sir (Smiling)

Disha is still blushing and is breathing quit heavy. DK gets up and goes towards her. Disha stands up he hugs her and starts to play with her hair. They stop huging and DK gets something out of his pocket.

Its a necklase with a heart, with there names on "DK" and "Disha".

DK: This is for you, you know how much i love you and this is just a small gift to show you how much. This heart has both are names on and we will never be apart because we are one! Embarrassed 

Disha: (tears in her eyes) DK this heart is not a small gift to me its the best gift any husband can give to his wife! Cry (crying with joy) I love you DK!!

Disha hugs DK and hugs him tight as if she is never going to let go.Wink

5 mins later.................

Disha lets go and DK puts the necklase round her neck. Disha looks down at the necklase and then looks at DK.

Disha: Thanks, i really love it.

DK smiles and wipes disha's tears from her face!

DK: Shall we have dinner?

Disha nods her head, and they both sit down to have there dinner.

After dinner................

DK gets up and offers his hand to disha, disha gets up and they both start to walk until DK suddenly stops and pulls disha close and suddenly out of knowwhere music begins to play and they gently move to the music. Disha has her head on DK's shoulder and DK is smiling and closes his eyes and so does disha. Both are really happy.

DK then looks towards disha and Disha looks away until DK pulls her chin up and smiles at her.

DK: I have another surprise for you disha in....

Looks at his watch.

DK: In 5 mins.

Disha: what, please tell me?

DK: No, it's a surprise.

DK takes disha to the doors which lead out to the garden and checks his watch again. He leads her into the middle of the garden and says looks towards there..

DK Points in a certain direction. 

until suddenly...........

FIREWORKS!!!!

They all go off and DK says I love you, Disha hugs into DK and they both look at the fireworks!!! Embarrassed

Stay tuned, please reply!!

Love eran!!!!

Todays story was dedicated to Neha_1, my biggest fan!!! Sorry for not posting earlier!!!

 

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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 10:32am | IP Logged
HI ERAN

THANKS, AND IT IS OKAY YOU DONT NEED TO SAY SORRY Clap
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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 11:06am | IP Logged
lol Eran its a wonderful story!!!

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