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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 21)


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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
hi eran

very good story,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap

Waiting 4 your next part

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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it is just perfect

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stonex IF-Dazzler

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very very nice. please comtinue
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this is just great i love it...plz continue with the story...good work.. Clap Smile
red_ruby82 Senior Member

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wow! u should seriously think bout writin romantic novels! sheesh u got me blushin! hahaha! cant wait till ur next post!!
eran Goldie

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Part 44:

Recap: Disha and Dk in the pool he has just told her he has bought a new dress for her.

Disha gets out of the pool and helps DK out, she gets a towel and begins to dry him on his chest. DK grabs her waist and pulls her closer.

Disha: DK your getting wet again, shall i go and get changed and then we can have dinner.


Disha turns to leave but DK gets a hold of her arm. Disha turns round to face him.

Disha: DK please let me go!

DK: No!

Disha: Please!

DK: No!

Disha moves closer to him and goes all shy then suddenly tickles him on his neck and runs to get changed.

DK stands still and laughs and shakes his head. Dk turns round to get changed himself.

DK returns first and sits himself down at the table and see's that the lights are dimed and the candles he asked for had arrived and displayed around the area. The candles are red and very romantic.

Disha comes when DK is lighting the last of the 3 candles on the table and suddenly looks towards Disha. Disha is wearing a long red silky, shiny dress with her hair open and a lovely red necklase to go with her dress. DK is blown away! Disha looks to the floor and then at him. DK is still looking at her.

Disha moves closer to the table and sits down on her seat and clicks her fingers and DK wakes up.

Disha: Where are you lost DK?

DK: (Shakes his head) You look beautiful!

Disha: Thank You! (shyly)

DK: Dinner will be here in a moment for now can we talk?

Disha: Yes, about what?

DK: Anything, are we don't have to talk at all. (Naughty Smile)

Disha looks to the side and smiles shyly!!Embarrassed

Stay tuned

love eran!!



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wow its an excellent romantic scene plz continue!!

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