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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 20)

dracomalfoy Groupbie

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hey eran continue with ur story every1 loves it
keep writingBig smile

eran Goldie

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 5:16am | IP Logged

Part 43:

Recap: Gun has just gone off!!!

Disha who was runing towards DK has just reached his arms and looks back towards Raj and see's that he is on the floor! DK and Disha are confused as they don't know who shot him!!! They both turn round to find the police and a inspector with a gun in his hand!

DK: Karan!

Inspector Karan: Hi DK! Good job you called in time are i would have had more bodies to collect!

Disha: DK who is this?

DK holding disha in his arms and rubing her arms says:

DK: this is another friend of mine who went to school with me. I phoned him on the way here incase!

Karan: Hi, you must be disha his lovely wife!

Disha: It is nice to meet you. (smiles)

Karan: You better get going and i will be intouch and please don't try to leave goa yet.

DK: But why was Raj doing this!

Karan: This is not the first time he has done it,he's done it to many girls, he loved Preeti and she hurt him and we supected him for a long time but we didn't have any proof so we had to let him go. But thanks to you we have finally caught him.

DK: It's Ok, shall we go Disha?

Disha: Yes, bye Karan.

Karan: Bye!

Disha and Dk go back to their hotel and sit in the pool room. Knowbody is around and Dk is in his shorts and is sitting in the pool.

DK: Come and join me disha!

Disha: No, DK someone might come.

DK: So, you are my wife.

DK grabs her sari and starts to pull on it.

DK: Come on Disha, you know you want to.

Disha: please let go.

DK grabs disha and gently pulls her into the pool and disha's sari is completly wet. The sari is lime colored and see through now!

Disha: Dk, what have you done!!

DK grabs disha and pulls her close! Kisses her gently on her neck and hugs her.

Disha: (softly) Dk, someone will come, this can be done in our room, not here!!!

DK clicks his fingers and a man appers who works in the hotel. Disha hugs into DK embarassed!Embarrassed

DK: I have rented this room for the next two hours, will you please make sure that we are not disturbed!

Hotel worker: Yes Sir!

DK: And will you leave our dinner over there and dim the lights and bring in the candles i ask for!

Hotel worker: Right away sir!!

Disha: DK! why didn't you tell me? And look at me, how can i have dinner with you, when i'm all wet!!

DK: That's my next surprise!!

Disha: Surprise?

DK: When you go to the changing room i have bought you a new dress which i want you to wear! You will wear it won't you?

Disha: (Shakes her head gently and looks down) Yes.

DK: (With naughty smile) Thanks Disha! Today is our night and knowbody can stop it!! Wink

Stay tuned, please reply!!!!!!

Love eran!!!!




lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 5:33am | IP Logged
wow this is amazing plz post the next scene i just love it its just too good

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
hi eran

very good story,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap

Waiting 4 your next part
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dracomalfoy Groupbie

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
it is just perfect

Edited by dracomalfoy - 31 May 2005 at 1:04pm
stonex IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
very very nice. please comtinue
SalK Groupbie

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this is just great i love it...plz continue with the story...good work.. Clap Smile

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