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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 19)

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Posted: 28 May 2005 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
eran
it's perfect i just read all of them again
i wish that the serial's writer reads this and puts it in the serialWink
keep on writing u r doing greatClap

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Posted: 28 May 2005 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
hi eran

keep up the good workand write the next part soooooonnnnnClap   

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Posted: 28 May 2005 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
gREAT TWIST
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Posted: 29 May 2005 at 12:55am | IP Logged
hey man i am loving every min.. keep going!
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Posted: 29 May 2005 at 1:17am | IP Logged
I love it!!! Please keep going!! I can't wait what happens next!!!
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Posted: 29 May 2005 at 2:21am | IP Logged
ClapClapGREAT STORY PLZ CONTINUE!!!ClapClap
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Part 42:

Recap: Raj has a gun in his hand and has a hold of Disha and DK is trying toget to them and save his loving wife!!!! 

Raj: Stop moving forward DK, are i will kill her, I mean it, i have killed before i can do it again.

DK: Ok!! Raj, but please don't kill Disha!

Raj: (Laughs) I have you now Mr DK Segail! You will do anything for this women!! Wow!! Disha, i must say you have changed him! (Laughs Again)

Disha: DK please go from here, i will be fine, i mean it but please go!! (crying)

Raj: Shut up Disha!!! Angry

Disha shuts up and begins to cry! Cry

Raj: Ok!! Dk i will kill you, then after a few months she will forget you and she will love me!! You took my love and i will take yours!!

DK: I didn't love Preeti and i didn't know she loved me!!

Raj: Shut up!!!! i don't want to listen to your lies!!! Any last requests!!

Closes his eyes and then opens them says:

DK: Only that you keep disha happy.

Raj: Will do!! Bye DK!!

Raj points the gun towards DK, DK looks at Disha who is crying and screaming:

Disha: NO!!! No!!!!!

Suddenly:

Disha kicks Raj where it hurts and runs towards DK and then suddenly...................................................

Gun goes off!!!!!

stay tuned please reply!!

love eran!!!

 

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Posted: 29 May 2005 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
why did u stop now
continue please...Cry
it's going great
keep up the great jobClap

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