Joined: 19 May 2005
omg eran this is amazing! its sp much better than wt the guhas is doin at the mo! im hooked i need ur nxt part!
wt exams r u revising for? iv got my alevels in 2weeks but ill keep comin to check ur updates!
Joined: 06 March 2005
DK gets out of his car and see's there is a building with nothing in it but broken glass, and pieces of materials all over the floor. Looks like a old factory! He looks around and see's Disha infront of him which Raj is holding on to. Disha is screaming and crying. She spots DK and starts to get away but Raj gets angry and gets a gun out!!!
Raj: Stop it are i'll shot DK!!
Disha stops moving but starts to cry!!
DK is walking towards them and says:
DK: Disha, are you all right?
Disha is still crying, Raj laughs!
DK: If you hurt my wife i will kill you Raj.
Raj: You kill me not if i kill the person you live for!!
Disha looks at Raj, shocked!
DK: Don't hurt Disha you can do what you want with me but please don't hurt my wife! (crying tone)
Disha: No DK, i don't care what he does to me but please don't get yourself hurt!! (crying)
Raj: what is this both of you will die for each other, then i should kill both of you.
DK looks at Disha and she looks at him.
DK: why are you doing this? What have i done to you.
Raj: what have you done to me! You have taken everything from me!!! The one person i loved you even took her from me!
DK: what are you talking about? who?
Raj: Preeti! Thats who i'm talking about!
DK: What does she have to do with this?
Raj: I loved her and she loved you!
DK is shocked and so is Disha!
DK: She didn't tell me that! And she went missing, knowbody knew where she was!
Raj: (Laughs) Knowbody knew because i didn't let them!
Raj: I killed Preeti!! She was my love and i can't let her be with anyone else!
DK: You killed her, Look Raj nothing happened between us i didn't even know she liked me!
Raj: I know because the day she went to confess her love i killed her! 3 bullets in the back! (Laughs evil) I hate you Mr DK Segail, you have everything and you still manage to get all these women who will die for you. Why? because you have money, i have money too why don't they love me!! You have always had it your way but not now, you darling wife will stay with me!!
DK: Raj, please i am not that DK Segail anymore i have changed and i reallly love Disha i don't need any other women in my wife!!
Joined: 28 March 2005
omg that is soo cool
plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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