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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 16)

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
hi eran

plz write the next part soon, your story is really very goooodd Smile Smile Smile

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
hi eran

plz write the next part soon, your story is really very goooodd Smile Smile Smile

waiting 4 your next part, keep it up and dont let us wait 4 too long plzzzzz Big smile Big smile Big smile
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Part 38

Disha and Dk just about to leave the hotel when suddenly:

Raj: Mr Dk Segail, this is for you.

DK turns round angry and grabs Disha's hand.

Raj: this is your money back because you didn't even stay here and Raj doesn't take peoples money just like that!!

DK: Keep it because DK Segail doesn't like to stay in cheap hotels for free!!! Lets go Disha!

They both leave the hotel and Raj is left angry!

Raj: you will pay Dk, either way, even if i take your disha from you!!!

Dk and Disha reach another hotel which is even more beautiful facing the sea!!!Wink

Dk hugs Disha while they look at the sea. Disha's hair is blowing in his face and he is enjoying it. Tongue 

Disha: DK why don't you go to sleep, it's getting late and you do have your business meeting tomorrow!

DK: On one condition you will go to bed also.

Disha: No DK! You go i'll unpack and then i will go to bed.

DK: Disha, what is that?

Disha: what?

DK: come with me sit on the bed.

Disha: what is it Dk?

DK: it's on your neck.

Disha is on the bed and Dk is scaring her and then kisses her neck and moves on top of her.

Disha: Dk, you tricked me right?

DK: of course i did i can't carry you so I lied.

DK starts touching her necklase and removes it and then kisses her neck again.

He then removes her braclet and then kisses that area. He then takes her churia off few at a time and then kisses her arms. Wink

Disha: Dk!

Stay tuned please reply!!!

love eran!!!

 

 

 

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
oh come on keep up writing this is amazing Tongue
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
plz eran wriite next part soon as posible, Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

keep it up it is very good Clap

Edited by neha_1 - 24 May 2005 at 3:15pm
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Next please!!!!!
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good job eran ClapClap
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nice story eran keep it upThumbs Up

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