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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 16)

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 9:23am | IP Logged
YEAH DK GO FOR IT BEAT RAJ UP SO BADLY HE WON'T DARE TO LOOK AT ANOTHA MARRIED WOMAN LOL UR STORY IS GREAT ERAN PLZ CONTINUE

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 10:18am | IP Logged

eran

plz plz write more sonnnnnnnnnnnn

cant wait Cry Cry Cry
eran Goldie
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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 11:06am | IP Logged

I am sorry guys i got holded up on exams!!!! I shouldn't have left it on such a big cliffhanger i hope you guys forgive me!!!! Anyways here it goes.......

Part 37

DK Steps forward towards Raj and......................

wait for it..................

Slaps him big time and the echoes go through the room!! Dk then grabs his shirt!! (Looking sexy may i just add)

DK: This is for messing with Dk Segails Wife!! Remember one thing Raj before you look at my wife again remember that your messing with DK Segail!!! Dk Segail has never learned to put up with deciet!!! And never mess with me!!Angry Don't even dream of getting on the wrong side of DK, Raj are up will pay!!!

Disha moves forward:

Disha: DK (Softly)

Dk lets go of Raj!! But looks at him in anger!!Angry

Raj: You will pay for this slap, Mr DK Segail.

DK: Dk makes people pay, he has never learned to pay himself!!

Disha Moves closer to Dk and puts her hand on his shoulder!

Disha: DK, please lets go from here, I don't like it here.

Raj looks at disha angrly:

DK: (smiles sarcasticly) Your right disha, its not nice here, come disha i'll take you to a better hotel.

Raj looks at Dk and leaves the room.

Disha starts to pack and DK is fumming with anger by the window.

DK: Disha, why didn't you tell me that he was saying these things.

Disha: I'm sorry, i wanted to tell you and i was going to before he came.

DK: I'm sorry disha, i'm taking my anger out on you and it's Raj i'm angry at. He tried to mess with my wife and I could have killed him. Knowone messes with Dk segail!!!

Disha goes towards the window where DK is standing and puts her arms around his waist and puts her head on his shoulder. Dk puts his head on her head and puts his arm around her waist. Wink

DK: I'm really sorry disha, i wanted this to be a holiday to remember and romantic for the both of us.

Disha looks at him and smiles.

Disha: Dk, don't you get it where you are i'm always happy because you are with me.Wink I am part of your life i am happy with that!!

DK: you don't need to be part of my life because you  are my life, disha. Without you i'm nothing!!

DK kisses disha eyes and disha starts to blush and Dk smiles. Disha hugs him again and both close there eyes. (aah!!!!)

Stay tuned and please reply!!

Once again i'm really sorry!!!

Love eran!!!!

 

 

lucky-moon Goldie
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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 11:38am | IP Logged
good one plz post the scene when ever u are free Tongue
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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 4:08pm | IP Logged

that was some slapLOLLOLLOL

Big smile

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
hi eran

plz write the next part soon, your story is really very goooodd Smile Smile Smile
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
hi eran

plz write the next part soon, your story is really very goooodd Smile Smile Smile

waiting 4 your next part, keep it up and dont let us wait 4 too long plzzzzz Big smile Big smile Big smile
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 2:52pm | IP Logged

Part 38

Disha and Dk just about to leave the hotel when suddenly:

Raj: Mr Dk Segail, this is for you.

DK turns round angry and grabs Disha's hand.

Raj: this is your money back because you didn't even stay here and Raj doesn't take peoples money just like that!!

DK: Keep it because DK Segail doesn't like to stay in cheap hotels for free!!! Lets go Disha!

They both leave the hotel and Raj is left angry!

Raj: you will pay Dk, either way, even if i take your disha from you!!!

Dk and Disha reach another hotel which is even more beautiful facing the sea!!!Wink

Dk hugs Disha while they look at the sea. Disha's hair is blowing in his face and he is enjoying it. Tongue 

Disha: DK why don't you go to sleep, it's getting late and you do have your business meeting tomorrow!

DK: On one condition you will go to bed also.

Disha: No DK! You go i'll unpack and then i will go to bed.

DK: Disha, what is that?

Disha: what?

DK: come with me sit on the bed.

Disha: what is it Dk?

DK: it's on your neck.

Disha is on the bed and Dk is scaring her and then kisses her neck and moves on top of her.

Disha: Dk, you tricked me right?

DK: of course i did i can't carry you so I lied.

DK starts touching her necklase and removes it and then kisses her neck again.

He then removes her braclet and then kisses that area. He then takes her churia off few at a time and then kisses her arms. Wink

Disha: Dk!

Stay tuned please reply!!!

love eran!!!

 

 

 

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