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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 16)

lucky-moon Goldie

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oh come on keep up writing this is amazing Tongue


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plz eran wriite next part soon as posible, Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

keep it up it is very good Clap

Edited by neha_1 - 24 May 2005 at 3:15pm
lalgulab Goldie

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good job eran ClapClap
sakina Goldie

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nice story eran keep it upThumbs Up

Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz

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nice story... plz keep writing...


eran Goldie

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Part 39

Next Morning:

DK is in the front of the mirror getting ready for his meeting. Disha comes with his jacket and helps him put it on.

Disha: Mr Segail, you are looking nice!Wink

DK: Mrs Segail, you are always looking nice!Wink

Disha blushes and starts to walk away, when DK grabs her hand and pulls her back. Tongue

Disha: DK, i was going to get you your coffee.

DK: i don't need coffee i need you.

DK starts to bite at her ear and neck. Then kisses her cheek.

DK: What time is it? (kissing her neck)

Disha: nearly 9, O'clock.

DK: I should go! (he kisses her again on the cheak) See you later, we can go out later if you want!

Disha: OK! (Smiles at DK)

DK leaves but then there is a knock! It's DK!!!!

Disha: DK tum?

Dk: I forgot something! (Smiling)

Disha: what?

DK: This! (Kisses her cheak and leaves) (DK laughs)LOL

Disha: DK! (Disha closes the door and Smiles)

There is a knock at the door again!

Disha shouts: Go away DK!!

There is a knock at the door again!

Disha opens the door and shouts:

Disha: DK!!

But is shocked to see who it really is!!

stay tuned please reply!!

love eran!!!

eran Goldie

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Posted: 25 May 2005 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

Part 40:

It's Raj!!!Angry

Disha move back from the door and Raj invites himself in!

Disha: Dk is not here!

Raj: I have not come for DK but for you.

Disha: I will not go anywhere with you! (Scared)

Raj: You will have to go with me even if you don't like it Disha!

Raj moves towards Disha and covers here mouth with a hankichief, where disha goes unconsious and raj takes her from there and leaves a note!


Dk returns happy and says:

DK: Disha!

No reply!

DK: Disha! Disha! where are you?

DK checks the bathroom and the garden but still no  sign of disha!

He goes towards the bed to find a note which has his name on. "DK Segail"

DK reads the note and is not happy and leaves the room and gets into his car and starts to drive off and while in the car starts to ring someone, but we don't know who yet!! 

DK puts the phone down. And thinks to himself!

DK: Don't worry disha i'm coming! Raj will pay for this.

Stay tuned and please reply!!

Love eran!!!


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