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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 14)

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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
NOW DONT STOP THERE KEEP GOING!!!

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 1:07am | IP Logged

Yeah plz carry on writing ur story is excellent

eran Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 4:35am | IP Logged

Part 35:

They stop huging and Disha has tears in her eyes.

DK: What's the matter?

Disha: I love you DK and i am scared of losing you but i need to know one thing.

DK: What?

Disha: What would you hate me for?

DK: I could never hate you disha, i love you.

Disha: DK please answer the question.

DK:ok, I would hate it if you lied to me or kept something from me.

Disha thinking to herself:

Disha: DK i should tell you that your friend is a horrible person and what he said when we arrived, bappa give me strenght so i can tell DK the truth. DK your........

There is a knock at the door. It is Raj.

Raj: Dk open the door.

DK goes towards the door. Disha grabs DK;s arm and says quietly:

Disha: Please don't answer the door DK, (she puts her arms around his neck) this night is for the two of us.

DK: Disha it must be important if he's coming now.

DK goes to open the door.

Raj: Come on DK open the door.

Disha goes to  sit on the bed.

DK: Hi Raj what can i do for you.

Raj: Just coming to see if everything is Ok.

DK: Everything is fine, right disha.

Disha smiles at DK.

Raj: How about a quick drink then, just the two of us in the bar. Disha should be tired she can get some sleep.

DK: i don't drink anymore but i'll have a cold drink. Disha you don't mind do you? 

Disha: No DK you go, i'm getting tired. I'll see you later.

They go to the bar and half an hour later there is a knock at Disha's room.

Disha: It's about time Dk, i thought you'd never come back.

Disha opens the door shocked to see who it is.

Stay tuned and please reply

love eran!!!!!

 

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 6:16am | IP Logged
wwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
eran

keep it upAddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')

plz,plz write the next part sooonnnnnnnnnn

waiting..................................
eran Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 6:28am | IP Logged
thanks everyone, i write next part soon i promise!!!
eran Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 6:41am | IP Logged

Part 36

Disha is shocked to see RajAngry

Disha: Tum?

Raj: Yes me! Why are you shocked?

Disha: Where is DK?

Raj: Down stairs in the bar waiting for me but i came to see you.

Disha: Get out!!! I don't want to talk to you.

Raj: I like you disha, alot, i have had many woman but you are different, i can't stop thinking about you. (steps closer to disha)

Disha: I am married to DK Segail and i can't think about anyone else. Get out before i call DK!!!!!

Disha picks up the phone!! Raj moves closer and takes the phone from her. He touches her bare shoulder! Disha screams!!!!

Suddenly:

DK: RAJ!!!!!!!!! (echos) Angry

Disha runs towards DK and hugs him and then moves behind him.

Raj: what?, we always use to do this remember, swaping girls, whats changed?

DK:I'm not that DK Segails anymore and how dare you even look at my wife.

Disha: I wanted to tell you before he told me about your past when we came and he said he..........

DK: I know disha, i heard everything!

Disha: DK lets go from here, we can stay in another hotel.

DK: DK Segail, does not let people off that easy disha!

DK moves closer to Raj!!! Disha is shocked!!!Shocked

stay tuned

love eran!!!!

 

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 7:29am | IP Logged
what will happen next
i cant wait to read eran, too god and keep it uppppAddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')

next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Asian Princess Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 8:33am | IP Logged

hehehe.......like that might get hottie to some dushma duhshma loll hehehe..............LOL poor raj i think he'll run away once he sees hotties biceps loll

dooo continue.............Tongue

love Asian Princess

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