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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 13)

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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
i dont like raj!!!Cry  but keep going!

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wowwwwwwwww eran just read it allll reall gooddd plz plz plz doo continueeeeee...........wonder what happens in the honey moon suite.......................Wink.............LOL

dooo coninue ya doing a great job Clap

Keep it up Smile

Love Asian Princess

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wow. exellecent story. plz continue.

~sweta~

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NOW DONT STOP THERE KEEP GOING!!!
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Yeah plz carry on writing ur story is excellent

eran Goldie
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Part 35:

They stop huging and Disha has tears in her eyes.

DK: What's the matter?

Disha: I love you DK and i am scared of losing you but i need to know one thing.

DK: What?

Disha: What would you hate me for?

DK: I could never hate you disha, i love you.

Disha: DK please answer the question.

DK:ok, I would hate it if you lied to me or kept something from me.

Disha thinking to herself:

Disha: DK i should tell you that your friend is a horrible person and what he said when we arrived, bappa give me strenght so i can tell DK the truth. DK your........

There is a knock at the door. It is Raj.

Raj: Dk open the door.

DK goes towards the door. Disha grabs DK;s arm and says quietly:

Disha: Please don't answer the door DK, (she puts her arms around his neck) this night is for the two of us.

DK: Disha it must be important if he's coming now.

DK goes to open the door.

Raj: Come on DK open the door.

Disha goes to  sit on the bed.

DK: Hi Raj what can i do for you.

Raj: Just coming to see if everything is Ok.

DK: Everything is fine, right disha.

Disha smiles at DK.

Raj: How about a quick drink then, just the two of us in the bar. Disha should be tired she can get some sleep.

DK: i don't drink anymore but i'll have a cold drink. Disha you don't mind do you? 

Disha: No DK you go, i'm getting tired. I'll see you later.

They go to the bar and half an hour later there is a knock at Disha's room.

Disha: It's about time Dk, i thought you'd never come back.

Disha opens the door shocked to see who it is.

Stay tuned and please reply

love eran!!!!!

 

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wwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
eran

keep it upAddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')AddSmileyIcon('Clap')

plz,plz write the next part sooonnnnnnnnnn

waiting..................................
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thanks everyone, i write next part soon i promise!!!

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