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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 12)

eran Goldie

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 10:14am | IP Logged

Part 31:

Disha stops huging DK and looks at him.

Disha: Goa! I have heard goa is a nice place.

DK: And romantic!Wink

Disha: DK! Be serious! When are we going?

DK: In a few days time so we better start packing.

Disha: But DK....Mummy ji.

DK: Don't worry we'll have to tell maa before we go but she won't mind.

Disha: i will have to tell Aai before i go.

DK: Ok! You tell Aai tomorrow and i'll see if i can get through to maa.

Disha: I can't wait. Anyways DK, what do you want to eat. Ved should be coming back soon.

DK: Let me think, (pulls disha closer) how about YOU!!

Disha: DK!

DK starts to kiss her shoulder and her neck and pulls her towards the bed.

Disha: DK! Let me go Ved should be coming soon.

Ved: Bhabi!!!

Disha gets up and runs towards Ved.

Disha: I'm coming.

Ved: I'm hungary Bhabi.

Disha: I'll just bring it.

stay tuned

love eran!!!

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 10:23am | IP Logged
such a good story plz continue writing
rabzz!!!! Groupbie

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
[QUOTE=dracomalfoy]author eran


Dish-Dk u can't tell maa anything she wont be able to take it.[shock]

Dk-Ok i want to spend time with u disha. tell u what v'll have dinner at a restaurant tonight.

Dish-Ok! but u go now quickly.

In the background maa is calling "Sunny"!!!

Dk-coming maa! DK turns to smile at disha before he leaves.

Dish then falls on her bed like shes away with fairies and smiles like a mad.

That evening:

Dishis getting ready into a yellow sari, looking dead hot and of course with her ring and bangles on!!! Dk is also getting ready into the blue shirt disha had wanted him to wear for the party! both look god!! and Dk is to die for here, well he is in my head anyway!!!

Dk goes to his maa who is sleeping now. Kisses her forehead and saya - i am going to spend time with ur real bahu if u knew u would b happy to know that not Pori but Disha was ur bahu. [Dk has soft tears in his eyes]
Dk then turns to leave and c's Pori at the door. HE is mad but tries to keep a straight face so he doesn't spoil his mood..

Pori-where r u going so late DK without ur wife?

Dk-shut up pori.

Dish out of the blue.

Dish-who says he's going without his wife?[Dish is smiling at Dk and then has a sarcastic smile for Pori] ha ha ha !!!

Dish-shall v go DK? [she grabs Dk 's arm and they walk out together.]

Pori- Disha!!![in an angey tone!!!]
wow wot a story u've ritten u shud be da director of td
rabzz!!!! Groupbie

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 1:08pm | IP Logged

part 32:

at goa:disha:leaning on dks arm)wow wot a wonderful place

dk:i no thats y i bout u here

disha: its so romantic

dk: disha don u think v shud hav r baby gal hereWink

disha:dk enouf of that joke now!!!!!!!!!!!!

dk lafesLOL

disha: were r v goin 2 live

dk:in this hotel, even more romantic, only us 2 in only 1 roomBig smile

disha:im so haappyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


rabzz!!!! Groupbie

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 1:16pm | IP Logged


part 33:

dk n disha in1 room at 9ite

dk:disha look we hav told eech other that v luv eech other then y dont u sleep on da bed insted of da sofa?

disha:i donno

dk:comon disha!!!

dk:we,ll speak all night long

disha:dk did u no u r so rrrrrrrroooooommmaaaaaannnntttttiiiiiccccccc!!!!!!!!

dk:i no

disha;dk how much do luv me

dk: more than u can expectHug 

dk n disha

keshp15 Senior Member

Joined: 05 March 2005
Posts: 604

Posted: 18 May 2005 at 1:17pm | IP Logged

hey eran

great jopb

lets see what is gonna happen in goe

love KP

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posts: 2427

Posted: 18 May 2005 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
great job nice one waiting for ur next shot
eran Goldie

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Posts: 2151

Posted: 19 May 2005 at 3:00pm | IP Logged

Part 32

After Lunch:

Disha goes to their room to find DK. DK is sitting on the bed looking at some papers.

Disha: Dk i've talked to Aai and she say's its fine and we can go. Have you told mummy ji yet?

DK: Yes, i left her a message and she rang back and says that it is fine for us to go and she will be back before we come back.

Disha goes towards DK on the bed and puts her head on his shoulder.

DK: What's the matter Disha?

Disha: Nothing, how long are you going to be?

Dk: not long, why?

Disha: just like that. Can't i ask?

Dk: of course you can ask, your my wife. Shall i leave all this paper work for later.

Disha smiles.

Disha: Yes!

DK: Ok!

Disha laughs, Dk puts the paperwork to one side and hugs disha.

DK: Just a few more days disha and i will have you to myself.

Disha: Don't you have me to yourself here.

DK: No i don't i share you with Aai, maa and now Ved. everytime i get a moment with you, you have to go and either cook are we are distured by Ved or anyone else. But not know. When we go away it'll be just you and me.

Disha: May be your right, Dk. Anyways where are we going to stay in goa?

DK: In a top hotel which my friend is the owner of.

Disha: great i can meet your friend while where there.

DK: you'll love goa disha, i promise.

Dk plays with disha's hair and kisses her neck and then goes to turn the light off!!!!Wink

Next we hear:

Disha: DK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stay tuned

love eran!!!!

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