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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 12)

keshp15 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 1:17pm | IP Logged

hey eran

great jopb

lets see what is gonna happen in goe

love KP

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Posted: 18 May 2005 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
great job nice one waiting for ur next shot
eran Goldie
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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 3:00pm | IP Logged

Part 32

After Lunch:

Disha goes to their room to find DK. DK is sitting on the bed looking at some papers.

Disha: Dk i've talked to Aai and she say's its fine and we can go. Have you told mummy ji yet?

DK: Yes, i left her a message and she rang back and says that it is fine for us to go and she will be back before we come back.

Disha goes towards DK on the bed and puts her head on his shoulder.

DK: What's the matter Disha?

Disha: Nothing, how long are you going to be?

Dk: not long, why?

Disha: just like that. Can't i ask?

Dk: of course you can ask, your my wife. Shall i leave all this paper work for later.

Disha smiles.

Disha: Yes!

DK: Ok!

Disha laughs, Dk puts the paperwork to one side and hugs disha.

DK: Just a few more days disha and i will have you to myself.

Disha: Don't you have me to yourself here.

DK: No i don't i share you with Aai, maa and now Ved. everytime i get a moment with you, you have to go and either cook are we are distured by Ved or anyone else. But not know. When we go away it'll be just you and me.

Disha: May be your right, Dk. Anyways where are we going to stay in goa?

DK: In a top hotel which my friend is the owner of.

Disha: great i can meet your friend while where there.

DK: you'll love goa disha, i promise.

Dk plays with disha's hair and kisses her neck and then goes to turn the light off!!!!Wink

Next we hear:

Disha: DK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stay tuned

love eran!!!!

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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
NEXT PART!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
ya plz write next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
GOD THE STORY HAD JUST STARTED IT CLIMAX LOL REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BIT IT WAS GETTING INTERESTING
eran Goldie
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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 1:35pm | IP Logged

Part 33

The day has arrived and they are about to go on holiday!!!! to goa!!!!

Disha: DK are you ready, lets go.

Ved: Take care, and don't worry about bari maa i'll take care of her.

Disha: I know you will.

Disha: DK!!!! were getting late, we'll miss our flight.

DK: Im coming, im coming! (Dk comes round the corner)

Ved: Bye, and take care.

Arrival in Goa:

Disha: This is beautiful!! Oh! Dk!!! I love you!!!

Disha hugs Dk, they are looking at there hotel. (In my mind the hotel looks like this) Big white building with white lights. Lovely open entrance with roses of all kind surrounding the building. Lovely and romantic!!!!!

DK: Shall we go in?

Disha: Yes. (Disha smiles at DK)

They both go in and see a water fountain in the middle of the entrance, loads of lights nice and romantic. Dk see's that there is a man coming towards them and Dk smiles at him.

DK: You haven't changed a bit in these years.

A man wearing a suit and looking like a business man says.

Man: You also haven't changed either. Who is this beautiful lady?

The man looks at Disha. Disha smiles back.

DK: She is my life, my love, my wife! (DK puts his arm around Disha.)

Disha: Hello.

DK: Disha, this is my friend Raj, we worked together a few times and he has been a great friend to me.

Raj: Dk, please don't embarass me infront of your beautiful wife.

DK: I'll just be back Disha, i'll just get us our room.

Disha and Raj are left alone!Confused

Raj: So Disha, how long have you been married to DK?

Disha: Just over 6 months.

Raj: You are happy with him?

Disha: Yes, what type of question is this?

Raj: Nothing, i will have to say you are brave to marry Dk after the women he has had in his life.

Disha is not happy and has a sad expression on her face. Angry

Dk comes suddenly:

Raj: DK! All booked in?

DK: Yes! In the honeymoon sweet! Come Disha, i'll see you later Raj. And nice hotel!

Disha looks at Raj in a unhappy way and grabs Dk's hand and walks to their room.

Raj Shouts: I hope you will enjoy your stay here Disha!

DK and Disha turn round and DK is smiling and Disha smiles at DK and looks at raj angrly!Angry

DK and Disha reach there room and it is a loverly room!!! Nice and romantic!!!

Please reply and stay tuned!!!!

love eran!!!

 

 

 

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Posted: 20 May 2005 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

Part 34

Disha and Dk go into there room and see that it is a lovely decorated room with rose petals on the bed!!!!Wink

Disha is not in a happy mood and is thinking over what Raj said to her.

DK: Disha, what's the matter. Ever since we left Raj you have been quite.

Disha: (Fake Smile) No, DK i have a pain in my head thats all.

DK: Are you sure, Raj didn't say anything did he?

Disha: (not looking at Dk's eyes) No!

DK: Ok! Do you like the room?

Disha: Yes, its really nice. Why don't you go and freshen up and we'll order food.

DK: Ok, i'll just be back (Dk kisses Disha on the cheek!)

DK goes in the bathroom. Disha thinks to herself:

Disha: I don't want to spoil my holiday with you Dk or cause you any harm so i will not tell you anything what Raj said. Bappa give me strenght so i can forget everything and enjoy myself here.

Dk comes out. He hugs disha from behind. The wind is blowing in there faces and disha closes her eyes. They go towards the window and look up at the full moon. DK turns disha round and kisses her forehead gently.

DK: I really love you disha.

Disha hugs him and closes her eyes once again.

Disha: I love you too!!!

Stay tuned, please reply!!!

love eran!!!

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