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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 11)

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eran Goldie

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Part 30


Disha arrives at Kanaka with DK's dinner, she arrives at Dk's office to find Sanya!!!Angry DK is sitting in his chair and Sanya is standing in front of him and DK does not look happy. Disha look's at DK.

DK: Disha.......

Disha: What are you doing in my husbands office?

Disha then looks at Dk and Dk gives her a look to say he doesn't know why she is here. Confused

Sanya: I came to congradulate DK about getting his business back and to wish him luck for the future.

Disha then smiles at DK and then looks back towards sanya:

Disha: you do not have to congradulate my husband because i, his wife am there to do that. isn't it DK?

DK smiles at Disha to say yes.

Disha: Now get lost! And in future don't come back here and keep away from my husband!

Sanya leaves angry!!!Angry (Ha, Ha, Ha!!!!!)LOL

Disha goes towards Dk and puts the food on his desk.

DK: Disha I........

Disha: I know DK! you don't know why she was here. I trust you DK!!

DK smiles at Disha. She smiles back and moves closer to him and sits on his unhurt leg and puts her arms around him and puts her forehead against his and smiles.

Disha then starts to feed DK.

Disha: how is the food, i made it.

DK: It's.....Ok!

Disha: (shocked) OK!!!

Disha starts to hit him gentley on the chest!!

DK: I'm kidding! my wife's cooking is the best.

Disha: Thank you! (Smiles)

DK: You should come everyday if you will feed me like this!

Disha starts to laugh and feeds him again.

After lunch:

Disha: I'll go now DK, you do your work and ill see you tonight.

Disha turns to leave, Dk grabs her sari.

Disha: DK let go!! I have to go!!

Dk pulls her closer and says:

DK: Don't go! Not until i get a hug.

Disha hugs DK.

DK: And a kiss!

Disha puts her head down and blushes. Embarrassed

DK: on the cheek! Not in the office disha!

Disha kisses him on the cheek and runs out quickly and laughs at the sametime.

DK: Disha! Disha!

DK laughs and smiles!!LOL  Smile

Segail House evening:

Disha is hanging clothes in the cupboard. DK comes out of know where and says:

DK: Boo!

Disha: (shocked) DK!!!

DK: Sorry! (Disha smiles)

Disha: How was work, and why are you so late?

DK: I'm late because of a meeting and we are going away!

Disha: Where are we going?

DK: Goa! I have a meeting there and then we are going to enjoy ourselves for a few day. Disha i couldn't give you a honeymoon, but i can now!!!

Disha is happy and  hugs DK!!!Wink

stay tuned

please reply!!!!!!!!!!

love eran!!!


baku28 Groupbie

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eran, it is wonderful.  Keep on writing
eran Goldie

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Part 31:

Disha stops huging DK and looks at him.

Disha: Goa! I have heard goa is a nice place.

DK: And romantic!Wink

Disha: DK! Be serious! When are we going?

DK: In a few days time so we better start packing.

Disha: But DK....Mummy ji.

DK: Don't worry we'll have to tell maa before we go but she won't mind.

Disha: i will have to tell Aai before i go.

DK: Ok! You tell Aai tomorrow and i'll see if i can get through to maa.

Disha: I can't wait. Anyways DK, what do you want to eat. Ved should be coming back soon.

DK: Let me think, (pulls disha closer) how about YOU!!

Disha: DK!

DK starts to kiss her shoulder and her neck and pulls her towards the bed.

Disha: DK! Let me go Ved should be coming soon.

Ved: Bhabi!!!

Disha gets up and runs towards Ved.

Disha: I'm coming.

Ved: I'm hungary Bhabi.

Disha: I'll just bring it.

stay tuned

love eran!!!

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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such a good story plz continue writing
rabzz!!!! Groupbie

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[QUOTE=dracomalfoy]author eran


Dish-Dk u can't tell maa anything she wont be able to take it.[shock]

Dk-Ok i want to spend time with u disha. tell u what v'll have dinner at a restaurant tonight.

Dish-Ok! but u go now quickly.

In the background maa is calling "Sunny"!!!

Dk-coming maa! DK turns to smile at disha before he leaves.

Dish then falls on her bed like shes away with fairies and smiles like a mad.

That evening:

Dishis getting ready into a yellow sari, looking dead hot and of course with her ring and bangles on!!! Dk is also getting ready into the blue shirt disha had wanted him to wear for the party! both look god!! and Dk is to die for here, well he is in my head anyway!!!

Dk goes to his maa who is sleeping now. Kisses her forehead and saya - i am going to spend time with ur real bahu if u knew u would b happy to know that not Pori but Disha was ur bahu. [Dk has soft tears in his eyes]
Dk then turns to leave and c's Pori at the door. HE is mad but tries to keep a straight face so he doesn't spoil his mood..

Pori-where r u going so late DK without ur wife?

Dk-shut up pori.

Dish out of the blue.

Dish-who says he's going without his wife?[Dish is smiling at Dk and then has a sarcastic smile for Pori] ha ha ha !!!

Dish-shall v go DK? [she grabs Dk 's arm and they walk out together.]

Pori- Disha!!![in an angey tone!!!]
wow wot a story u've ritten u shud be da director of td
rabzz!!!! Groupbie

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part 32:

at goa:disha:leaning on dks arm)wow wot a wonderful place

dk:i no thats y i bout u here

disha: its so romantic

dk: disha don u think v shud hav r baby gal hereWink

disha:dk enouf of that joke now!!!!!!!!!!!!

dk lafesLOL

disha: were r v goin 2 live

dk:in this hotel, even more romantic, only us 2 in only 1 roomBig smile

disha:im so haappyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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part 33:

dk n disha in1 room at 9ite

dk:disha look we hav told eech other that v luv eech other then y dont u sleep on da bed insted of da sofa?

disha:i donno

dk:comon disha!!!

dk:we,ll speak all night long

disha:dk did u no u r so rrrrrrrroooooommmaaaaaannnntttttiiiiiccccccc!!!!!!!!

dk:i no

disha;dk how much do luv me

dk: more than u can expectHug 

dk n disha

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