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THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please (Page 10)

samy74 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 May 2005 at 10:25am | IP Logged


very good keep it up.

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Posted: 14 May 2005 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
great job !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 May 2005 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Part 29

Disha puts the dinner on the table.

Disha: Ved, DK! Dinner is ready!!

In distance: Ved and DK shout: OK!

Both come to the table.

Ved: Wow! Bhabi  this looks good.

They all start to eat.

After dinner, Disha then goes to the kitchen to do the dishes. Dk comes in and holds disha and blows in her ear while she is cleaning the dishes.

Disha: DK, stop it, please, let me get on with my work.

DK: No, I love you and i want to spend time with you.

DK gets upset!

Disha turns round and has wet hands and bubbles on her hands and touches DK's nose and then rubs her nose on his.

Both laugh!!!LOL

Disha: Sorry!!! (Dk Smiles)

DK: Disha, i'm back at work tomorrow and i want to spend some time with you.

Disha leaves the dishes and they go to their room and sit on the bed hand in hand.

DK turns disha round so she has her back to him and starts to play with her hair.

Disha: Mummy ji, hasn't called us i hope she is OK.

DK: Disha, it's only been a few days she's fine, Don't worry!

DIsha: OK! Sorry, you know me, i start to worry.

DK laughs, Disha turns round.

Disha: What?

DK: Anyways i have an important meeting tomorrow, i want to get Kanaka back to it's winning ways.

Disha: You will DK, because you are a succesful businessman.

Disha and DK look at each other and smile. .

Next Morning:

Disha: DK, breakfast!

DK: Ok disha!!

Ved and Disha are sitting at the table eating.

DK comes in with a lovely black suit and looking stunning!!Wink

Disha: Where are you going DK? Have your breakfast!

DK: Disha i'm getting late.

Disha: At least have your juice!

Disha runs towards DK and feeds him the juice. DK kisses her cheek and says:

DK: Bye, Disha! I love you!

Disha: (shyly) Bye DK!

Disha: DK!

DK turns round and says:

DK: Yes (smiles at disha)

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.

DK: Yes! That will be great! See you later!!

DK goes and disha stops and smiles and turns round to see Ved looking at her from the table.

Disha: What?

Ved: There's alot of love between you and brother!!!

Disha smiles!Smile (shyly)

stay tuned for what happens in DK's office!!

Love eran!!!




pooja1_76 Goldie

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Posted: 16 May 2005 at 11:23am | IP Logged

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.


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Posted: 16 May 2005 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pooja1_76

Disha: Shall i bring you your lunch at dinner time.


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Posted: 16 May 2005 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
that was so cuteEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 May 2005 at 6:19am | IP Logged

too good story...keep it up

and waiting 4 your next partSmile

keshp15 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 May 2005 at 11:28am | IP Logged

hey eran

you r doing an excellent job

keep up the good work

love KP

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