THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please - Page 21

Posted: 18 years ago

great story

 pleaze continue😳

Posted: 18 years ago

Sorry you guys no story today!!!

I'm sort of out of ideas and need time to think!!!

2morrow there will be one, i promise!!!!

i've got revision 2 do to!!!

Sorry!!

Love Eran!!!

Posted: 18 years ago
no problem but make it quick!!!!!!!!!😛
Posted: 18 years ago
ur doing great Eran....plz keep posting more....atleast ur stories is all happy and nice going w/o any trouble and fights and separations.... 😉
Posted: 18 years ago

pleaze pleaze pleaze update

awaiting ur return😭

Posted: 18 years ago

Part 50:

The day has arrived when Disha and Dk have to go home.

Arrive home:

DK and Disha enter with hands joined and are smiling at each other.

DK: Maa! Maa!

Maa: Sunny! tou've come, disha how are you.

Disha: I'm fine. Mummy ji i'll go and make some tea.

Maa: Ok, beta.

Dk and his mother go and talk on the sofa then Disha enters with the tea and sits by Dk.

Maa: Disha, Sunny is telling me you had a good time with a few problems.

Disha: Yes, his friend Raj.

Maa: Everything is all right now?

DK: Yes maa! don't worry.

Maa: Ok! i'm going to the temple and will be back ater, bye then.

DK and Disha both says there good bye's and then go to there room.

DK starts talking to disha about there holiday until Disha faints on the bed. DK rings the doctor and then starts to wake disha up.

Doctor arrives:

Doc: Please wait outside Mr Segail.

DK: She will be alright won't she.

Doc: Yes, she should be fine.

15 mins later:

Doc: Congrats, Mr Segail, you are about to become a  father.

DK: What? I can't believe this, can i see Disha. (smiling and shocked)

Doc: Of course you can.

Bedroom:

DK: Disha is this true!

Disha: Yes DK!

DK lashes on to the bed and gives his wife a hug and a kiss. and shouts:

DK: Yesss!!! I'll be a DAD!!!!!

Both are very happy!!!

Please reply!!!!

Todays post was dedicated to SRK fever!!!

Now the bad news:

I'm going to india soo so i have to pack finish my exams so story stops for a while! until i get o india so the next time i post i should be in india. Sorry!!!!!

Love Eran!!!!

 

Posted: 18 years ago
thanx for update....have a safe journey and hope to c u soon with new updates 😉
Posted: 18 years ago

cont sooooooooon plzzzzzzzzz, the story is very gooooood👏👏👏

Posted: 18 years ago

👏

aysome!!!!

later

Goldi2

Posted: 18 years ago

lovely story eran👏

hav fun in india.😛

-jaslove😳

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