THE I LOVE YOU STORY! no comments please - Page 19

Posted: 18 years ago

tottally!!!!!!!

i've read this story like 3 times form the begeing already!!! I"m getting bored... plez continue!!!!!!!

 

later

Goldi2

Posted: 18 years ago

Sorry everyone! I've been at the doctors haven't been well recently. I've got hay fever on top of that so i'm really i'll try to continue with the story from now on!

Part 48:

Disha: DK, what are we doing today?

DK: I think we should go down to the beach for a walk.

Disha: OK!

DK: But before that..........

DK gets a hold of Disha and pulls her close, and faces her and looks into her eyes.

Disha: Mr DK Segail, let go, please.

DK: One condition....

Disha: Whats that.

DK: I get a hug and a kiss.

Disha: No way!

DK: OK! I don't mind staying like this all day.

Disha: Please DK, don't do this, lets go.

DK: NO!!

DK turns his head to the side and looks outside the window and says....

DK: Shame it's a nice day to and we will have to spend it inside.

Disha quickly looks outside to then suddenly gives DK a kiss on the cheek and hugs him tight and doesn't let go, then goes all shy. 😳

DK: That was nice. (Smiling) 😊

Disha is smiling with her head on his chest.

DK: Shall we go then.

Disha: No!

DK: Why?

Disha: I don't want to go now!

DK: Why?

Disha doesn't reply and DK grabs her waist.

DK: I'll get you a ice cream!

Disha starts to laugh and so does DK, both are happy. 😆

Please reply, stay tuned a day at the sea side coming up!!

Love eran!!!!

p.s. I'm sorry!!

 

 

 

 

Posted: 18 years ago
wow this is spectacular plz do continue when ever u are free
Posted: 18 years ago
very very goooooooooood keep it up,and write sooooon plzzzzzzz😭
Posted: 18 years ago

thats was short.. but worth readin!!!!!!

do continue soon!!

laer

Goldi2

Posted: 18 years ago

that was excellent eran. how did u do ur exams?

plz take good care of ur health coz the time u spend at the doc u can actually devote that time to writing such great scenes.😉

rang😊

Posted: 18 years ago
awww...... that was cute and sweet!!!!😳 do cont!!!!! yeah Goldi2 your right.. it was worth reading!!!!!!!!
Posted: 18 years ago
Tat waz short but excellent and hope u feel better!!!!!
Posted: 18 years ago

hey eran ur story is goin gr8!

atleast in ur version the 2 Ds are together and both arent goin to disappear for a while!

luv

minnie

 

Posted: 18 years ago
wow that was awsome hope your feeling better soon 😭

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