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Posted: 18 years ago
GOD THE STORY HAD JUST STARTED IT CLIMAX LOL REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BIT IT WAS GETTING INTERESTING
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 33

The day has arrived and they are about to go on holiday!!!! to goa!!!!

Disha: DK are you ready, lets go.

Ved: Take care, and don't worry about bari maa i'll take care of her.

Disha: I know you will.

Disha: DK!!!! were getting late, we'll miss our flight.

DK: Im coming, im coming! (Dk comes round the corner)

Ved: Bye, and take care.

Arrival in Goa:

Disha: This is beautiful!! Oh! Dk!!! I love you!!!

Disha hugs Dk, they are looking at there hotel. (In my mind the hotel looks like this) Big white building with white lights. Lovely open entrance with roses of all kind surrounding the building. Lovely and romantic!!!!!

DK: Shall we go in?

Disha: Yes. (Disha smiles at DK)

They both go in and see a water fountain in the middle of the entrance, loads of lights nice and romantic. Dk see's that there is a man coming towards them and Dk smiles at him.

DK: You haven't changed a bit in these years.

A man wearing a suit and looking like a business man says.

Man: You also haven't changed either. Who is this beautiful lady?

The man looks at Disha. Disha smiles back.

DK: She is my life, my love, my wife! (DK puts his arm around Disha.)

Disha: Hello.

DK: Disha, this is my friend Raj, we worked together a few times and he has been a great friend to me.

Raj: Dk, please don't embarass me infront of your beautiful wife.

DK: I'll just be back Disha, i'll just get us our room.

Disha and Raj are left alone!😕

Raj: So Disha, how long have you been married to DK?

Disha: Just over 6 months.

Raj: You are happy with him?

Disha: Yes, what type of question is this?

Raj: Nothing, i will have to say you are brave to marry Dk after the women he has had in his life.

Disha is not happy and has a sad expression on her face. 😡

Dk comes suddenly:

Raj: DK! All booked in?

DK: Yes! In the honeymoon sweet! Come Disha, i'll see you later Raj. And nice hotel!

Disha looks at Raj in a unhappy way and grabs Dk's hand and walks to their room.

Raj Shouts: I hope you will enjoy your stay here Disha!

DK and Disha turn round and DK is smiling and Disha smiles at DK and looks at raj angrly!😡

DK and Disha reach there room and it is a loverly room!!! Nice and romantic!!!

Please reply and stay tuned!!!!

love eran!!!

 

 

 

eran thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 34

Disha and Dk go into there room and see that it is a lovely decorated room with rose petals on the bed!!!!😉

Disha is not in a happy mood and is thinking over what Raj said to her.

DK: Disha, what's the matter. Ever since we left Raj you have been quite.

Disha: (Fake Smile) No, DK i have a pain in my head thats all.

DK: Are you sure, Raj didn't say anything did he?

Disha: (not looking at Dk's eyes) No!

DK: Ok! Do you like the room?

Disha: Yes, its really nice. Why don't you go and freshen up and we'll order food.

DK: Ok, i'll just be back (Dk kisses Disha on the cheek!)

DK goes in the bathroom. Disha thinks to herself:

Disha: I don't want to spoil my holiday with you Dk or cause you any harm so i will not tell you anything what Raj said. Bappa give me strenght so i can forget everything and enjoy myself here.

Dk comes out. He hugs disha from behind. The wind is blowing in there faces and disha closes her eyes. They go towards the window and look up at the full moon. DK turns disha round and kisses her forehead gently.

DK: I really love you disha.

Disha hugs him and closes her eyes once again.

Disha: I love you too!!!

Stay tuned, please reply!!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
i dont like raj!!!😭  but keep going!
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Posted: 18 years ago

wowwwwwwwww eran just read it allll reall gooddd plz plz plz doo continueeeeee...........wonder what happens in the honey moon suite.......................😉.............😆

dooo coninue ya doing a great job 👏

Keep it up 😊

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 18 years ago

wow. exellecent story. plz continue.

~sweta~

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Posted: 18 years ago
NOW DONT STOP THERE KEEP GOING!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Yeah plz carry on writing ur story is excellent

eran thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 35:

They stop huging and Disha has tears in her eyes.

DK: What's the matter?

Disha: I love you DK and i am scared of losing you but i need to know one thing.

DK: What?

Disha: What would you hate me for?

DK: I could never hate you disha, i love you.

Disha: DK please answer the question.

DK:ok, I would hate it if you lied to me or kept something from me.

Disha thinking to herself:

Disha: DK i should tell you that your friend is a horrible person and what he said when we arrived, bappa give me strenght so i can tell DK the truth. DK your........

There is a knock at the door. It is Raj.

Raj: Dk open the door.

DK goes towards the door. Disha grabs DK;s arm and says quietly:

Disha: Please don't answer the door DK, (she puts her arms around his neck) this night is for the two of us.

DK: Disha it must be important if he's coming now.

DK goes to open the door.

Raj: Come on DK open the door.

Disha goes to  sit on the bed.

DK: Hi Raj what can i do for you.

Raj: Just coming to see if everything is Ok.

DK: Everything is fine, right disha.

Disha smiles at DK.

Raj: How about a quick drink then, just the two of us in the bar. Disha should be tired she can get some sleep.

DK: i don't drink anymore but i'll have a cold drink. Disha you don't mind do you? 

Disha: No DK you go, i'm getting tired. I'll see you later.

They go to the bar and half an hour later there is a knock at Disha's room.

Disha: It's about time Dk, i thought you'd never come back.

Disha opens the door shocked to see who it is.

Stay tuned and please reply

love eran!!!!!

 

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Posted: 18 years ago
wwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
eran

keep it upAddSmileyIcon('👏')AddSmileyIcon('👏')AddSmileyIcon('👏')

plz,plz write the next part sooonnnnnnnnnn

waiting..................................