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Posted: 18 years ago
thnak u so much Eran..... i am truely honored... i didn't know that u would like my comment so much that u would dedicate the entire part to me.. thanks once again.... ❤️ 😊

i think my lucky days r finally here first Bombay fulfilled my request for the song in her movie... now this....... hey anyone else wants to dedicate anything to me? 😆

rang ⭐️
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 59:

DK is in his office on the phone and is shouting saying..........

DK: How is this possible, the deal should have went through.

DK holds his head and then Taj comes in and Dk puts the phone down not looking happy.

Taj: Sir the company has not liked our designs and does not want to go through with the deal.

Dk: This can not be happning to us.

DK gives a loud huff and says........

DK: Ok! You can go.

Suddenly..........................

DK is sitting and hands fall on to his eyes and a voice........

Voice: Guess who?

DK: It can only be the love of my life! Disha!

DK gets her by the hand and makes her sit infront of him on his desk.

Disha: How did you know!

DK: I would know if you are coming even if you were a mile away.

Disha laughs. Then goes serious.

Disha:DK is there a problem you don't look so good.

DK: No! Just like that.

Disha: You won't tell me, i thought as your wife you would tell me everything.

DK: Ok! The deal has not gone through because they don't like our designs, they say they are to  alike they want something different.

Disha: And they will, with my help.

DK: Disha no! You are pregnant and i don't want you to have any tension.

Disha: It's no tension please. and anyways it will be an excuse to be with you all day.

DK smiles and gets disha by the waist and makes her sit on his unhurt leg.

Dk: So you want to be with me all the time?

Disha: I miss you Dk at home, it gets very boring. please say yes Dk!

DK: Ok! but you will be a distraction for me.

Disha: But a nice distraction.

Disha laughs.

Dk: A very nice distraction!

DK kisses disha on the cheek and there is a knock  at the door.

DK: Please don't disturb me, come back later.

Taj: (outside) But sir i have good news.

Disha gets up and says...........

Disha: Come in Taj!

Taj: The suppliers would like to buy them now they said that they have thought over it and would like to buy.

Disha: That is good news.

DK: All of a sudden?

Taj: I don't know., that what they said.

Taj leaves..........

DK: Disha you are a good look to me,all morning i  have had a bad day  you come into the office and everything goes well. When you are with me i feel as if i have the world.

Disha hugs Dk and is smiling.

Tell me what you think.

Love Eran!!!

 

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Posted: 18 years ago
mua mua 😳
i just love your writing eran,where do you get all this idea from,and let me tell you something,if this story was live telecasted it would a great hit and its definately better than the real TD.I was wondering if the suppliers buying whatever it was is a twist in the story 😈 anyway plz do continue can't wait until you write again 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part eran!!
please do cont soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
please cont sooooooon...i luved all of it.....brilliant.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
please cont sooooooon...i luved all of it.....brilliant.... 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Im sorry there will be no story today but 2 tommorow!
I'm a bit busy today!! Sorry folks i hope you understand!
Love Eran!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 60:

Dk is sitting on the bed and has the pen in his mouth working on some paperwork. Disha enters the room and see's that Dk is very serious in his work. Disha has some shirts which she is about to  put in the cupboard.

DK smiles at her and she smiles back then he continues to work.

Disha sits on the bed and sorts his shirts out and then looks at him.

Suddenly......................

Disha: DK? Can I ask you something.

DK: (Still not looking at her) Yes!

Disha: Why did you marry me?

DK looks up.

DK: What?

Disha: Why did you marry me?

Dk: Disha, i married you because i love you and like to spend time with you. You know that!

Disha: Then why aren't you spending time with me, DK you have been to the office and then we had supper then i thought we would spend time together but you are just doing your work. Dk i  know work is important but spending time with your wife is to.

DK: OK Baba!! Im sorry.

DK holds his ears.

Disha smiles and laughs slightly.

DK: Come here!

Disha sits next to Dk.

Dk: Im sorry you are right i should spend time with you when i am here. It'll not happen again.

just a short one today  a bit busy today!

Love eran!!!

 

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Posted: 18 years ago
tht was way toooo short...continue soon pls.
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Posted: 18 years ago
THNX FR THE STORY..............ITS BECOMING BETTER THAN THE REAL ONE DAY BY DAY.............................