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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
hey i loved it :* write from the beggining ,good old times! i have a request can you make manya a little  more sophisticated,like no tu and maata jee and stuff and with a better dressing sense!i would really love it if u fulfilled my request from the core please :) and so pm me when u update the next part  :) once again *standing ovationClap

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Lovd it plx c0ntinue

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i jus love it so much. thank-u for this amazing story. plz continue and pm me if u could.

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Awesome!! Plzzz continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update:D

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Part-2

Uday came to his hotel in full angry mode as he was still thinking about that girl.

Uday(to himself)- How dare she? Hum ko is 100 RS ka note pakda gayee ? Hum jo kisi bhi ladki ke liye prince charming hai aur us aam ladki ne hum ko insult kiya? Hum usko thoondh kar rahenge aur usko sabak zarror sikhayenge…

He called his staff to bring another car for him and also called his sister Unnati downstairs as he was in hurry to go to Rajmahal for dinner.

Unnati came down and saw another car ready for them with driver.

Unnati- Dada ye kya? Hum driver ke saath kyon ja rahe hai? Aap khud drive nahi karenge? Aur aap ki car kahan hai?

Uday- Choti sawal mat karo abhi … Jaldi gaadi main baitho hum ko RM pahunchna hai. Dad ka do baar phone aa chukka hai.

Unnati sat in the car with Uday and they started to RM.

Unnati looked at Uday who looked angry and she said- Sorry dada, hamari wajah se aap ko hotel wapas aana pada… Aap please gussa mat ho…

Uday looked at Unnati and said- Choti kisne kaha hum aap se gussa hai… Hum tum se kabhi gussa nahi ho sakte… Tum to hamari jaan ho… Hum to hamare saath abhi jo haadsa hua us se gussa hai.

Unnati- Kya hua dada?

Uday told her whatever happened with that girl.

Unnati- Oh god us ladki ne the great prince udayveer singh ko tip di… aur wahan se nikal bhi gayee… Manna padega kuch to dum hoga us main… warna wo aap ke saath ye sab kar ke itni aasani se chut jaye aisa pehle to kabhi nahi hua.

Uday- Aur hoga bhi nahi… Hum us ladki ko zaroor thoondh nikalenge aur phir usko sabak sikhayenge…

Unnati- Theek hai dada, lekin filhaal shaanth ho jaye… Hum Raj mahal pahunch chuke hai aur yahan aap ka gussa dekh ke sab ko sawal honge..

Uday- Choti hum ek rajwade hai… apne emotions ko chupana achi tarah se jante hai…

Unnati looked at him and they both got out of the car and went inside the palace.

Everyone greeted them and settled into the living room. Jay who had also came out with Vijaybhai after her afternoon shopping fiasco was now in good mood since she saw Uday.

Rajmata- Uday beta, congratulations ladakh rally jitney ke liye…

Udayveer- Thanks Dadisaab… Ye sab aap logo ke aashirvad ki wajah se hi jeet hai…

Brijraj- Nahi Uday beta, ye to aap ke sanskar hai jo aap apni har jeet ko bado ke aashirvad ka naam dete hai warna ye to aap ka apna talent hai.

Komal- Haan Uday beta, Maharaj bilkul sahi kah rahe hai… Hum ko to aapki hare k achievement par garv hai.

Vijaybhai was about to say something when the maid came to ask everyone to join for dinner. Everyone settled at dinner table and Jay managed to grab the seat next to Uday and Unnati who was there rolled her eyes and sat next to Vijaybhai.

Everyone was chatting at the dinner table while eating when Jay whispered to Uday:- so Uday ek aur jeet haan… Ab aap hum ko party kab de rahe hai is jeet ki khushi main…

Uday(smirking)- Zaroor Jay, aakhir tum ko peene ke liye koi party ka bahana chahiye hoga… Aakhir pichle tabloid ke news se tumhari sharab pe jo control kar diya hai DS ne…

Jay- Oh come on Uday, wo to sirf ek hafte ke liye tha ab to hum zo marji chahe kar sakte hai aakhir wo bhi kab tak ruthi rehti apni pyari poti se?

Uday- Jay zaroor tum ne koi drama kiya hoga aur Vijaybanna aur Menaka bua ne tumhara saath diya hoga warna DS or Brij uncle tumhari asliyat jan ne ke bad kabhi tum he palace se bahar tak na jane de…

Jay- Oh come on Uday, baat to aise kar rahe ho jaise tum bade doodh ke dhoole ho…. Jo ye gentleman banne ka drama poore parivaar ke saamne karte ho na. wo sirf hum jante hai. Jis din DS ne tumhara asli roop dekh liya na un he to heart attack aa jayega.

Uday- Beautiful aisa kabhi nahi hoga… Tumhara parivaar ko duniya par se bharosha uth sakta hai lekin unke laadle Udayveer par se nahi..

Vijay- Ye kya baat hui Uday banna aap kab se Jay bhai se hi baat kiye ja rahe hai… Hum se aur baki parivaar valon se bhi do baatein kar lijiye..

Uday- Nahi Vijaybanna hum ko sirf Jay se hamari jeet ki khushi ke party ke bare main baat kar rahe the.

Rajmata- Kaise party Uday beta?

Uday- wo dadi saab, hamari jeet ki khushi main hamare kuch dosto ko hum hamari resto bar main treat de rahe hai kal sham ko to hum ne socha ke kyon na Jay or Vijaybanna bhi us party main shaamil ho?

Menka- Kyon nahi ? aakhir Uday ki party main jane se Ma saab kisi ko mana nahi karegi kyon Ma saab?

Rajmata- Theek hai lekin hum sirf is liye ijazat de rahe hai kyonki ye Uday ki party hai warna Jay ke pichle party ka tamasha dekh kar hum kabhi razamandh nahi hote…

Menka- Are Ma saab us main Jay bte ki koi galati nahi thi wo to kuch common logo ne news controversy ke liye ye sab kiya tha.

Rajmata- Jo bhi ho, Jay aap ab se apna khayal rakha kijiye. Aap ek rajkumari hai aur us tarah ke farz nibhana jaldi sikh le to aap ke liye aur hamare liye behtar hai.

Jay- Jee DS hum aage se khayal rakhenge…

After some more time, everyone dispersed to their rooms and Jaygadh parivar left for their hotel.

***********

At the same evening on dining table at Manya's house:

Manya- Kya baba, aap mujhe job kyon nahi karne dete? Aakhir main ek MBA graduate hoon… I have every qualification that I can work in corporate world aur phir ye US ja kar padhai karne ka kya fayda jab mujhe sara din ghar pe bethna padta hai haan nahi to…

Vikram singh- Beta, Kya hum ne aap ko kisi bhi tarah ki kami mahsoos hone di hai? Kya aap ki koi bhi khwaish adoori rahi hai aaj tak?

Manya- Nahi sirf job karne ki khwaish adoori hai us ko poori kar dijiye na baba please…

VS- Nahi beta jab tak hum hai aap kahin bhi kaam nahi karegi… Aap princess hai hamari aur hum aap ko kuch bhi kaam nahi karne denge… Hum aap se bahut pyar karte hai Manya beta aur aap ko kisi bhi tarah ki stress ho ye hum nahi chahte.. Please beta is baar hamari baat man lijiye… Agar aap chahe to aage panda shuru kijiye aur agar chahti hai to hum aap ko kuch aur royal lessions bhi de sakte hai khaas kar ke aap ki language ko lekar… Pata nahi US jakar bhi aap ko wo delhi wali zuban nahi badly…

Manya- Kya baba, aap bhi na… Maine aap se kahan hai na ki main aap ki khwaish ke mutabik royal princess ki tarah sab kuch sikh liya yahan tak ki politics bhi jo main agar business world main kabhi gayee to use bhi kar sakti hoon lekin meri language to wahin rahegi… I mean I know I can talk like royals but us main maza nahi aata…

VS(sighed)- Jaise aap ki marzi… Ziddi to aap bahut hai… Acha ab jaldi se so jayee… Hum ko kuch kaam hai is liye hum study main hai.

Manya- Jee baba… Good night…

She went to her room and checked her mobile. She saw SMS from Aakash that they are meeting tomorrow at 7:00 and he will pick her up.

She smiled and went to sleep thinking about her and Aakash love story and how it started:

(Flashback:

Manya came to Mumbai from USA because her dad had already shifted to Mumbai when she was in USA.  She liked the third floor flat and she was amazed by chawl people right across the street. It gave her homely feeling. She soon became friends with Soni and Jeet who lives next door to them. Jeet works in a hotel as Manager(Udayveer's hotel) and Soni is a housewife. Their family was in Bhatinda, Punjab. Soni was same age as Manya  and she came a month ago after her wedding so they get along together. In the same flat, Dr. Aakash Varma lived with his family on second floor. One day jeet was at work and soni was working in the house alone. Soon Manya came there to chat with Soni and they were talking and Soni accidently cut her hand with knife as she was cutting veggies and not paying attention.

The blood was pouring out and Manya remembered the name plate on second floor so she went down and banged on Aakash's door. Aakash was at home and his mom came at the door looking at Manya.

Aakash mom- Kya hai tum ko tameez nahi hai? Kyon itni zor se darvaja peet rahi ho?

Manya- Jee kya Dr. Varma ghar pe hai. Main third floor pe rehti hoon aur meri dost ke haath main chot aaye hai. Please un se kahiye ke wo meri dost ka ilaz Karen.

Aakash mom- Are agar chot aayi hai to hospital le jaye yahan kyon pareshaan karti ho… waise bhi mera beta aaj chuti pe hai wo nahi aa sakta.

Aakash came hearing the commotion and he liked Manya's beauty and he decided to help her to impress her. He went with her and addressed Soni's wound and talked to them sweetly. He found out that Soni is Jeet's wife and Manya lives next door. He offered his friendship and talked very nicely because he knew Manya's father had money and Manya is educated from US who can achieve his goals in his life if she came in his life.

When Jeet came to know that Aakash helped Soni, he wasn't much impressed as he knew Aakash's true nature but couldn't tell in front of his wife and friend as they were already impressed by him. After some days Jeet also came to know about love affair between Manya and Aakash and he wasn't happy but he just advised Manya to be careful as he considered her as a sister. He always tried to go with Soni with Aakash & Manya despite his dislike towards Aakash because he wanted to protect Manya and he still does so at every occasion he gets…

Flashback ends)

At the evening of the Uday's party:

Udayveer invited jeet with his wife and also gave two extra pass for the party because he considered Jeet as his friend even though he was commoner but Jeet respected Udayveer for his true nature which was hidden from outside world and Uday also liked Jeet's genuine nature. Jeet knew Aakash was planning to take Manya on a date so he gave tickets to Aakash saying that it's a royal party and he can impress Manya more. Aakash who got free tickets thought that he didn't have to spend any money and will impress Manya as well but Jeet just wanted to watch over Manya.

Udayveer, Unnati, Vijay and Jay were at the party and talking to each other. Jay was drinking and flirting with Uday and Vijay was telling to Unnati  what happened to Jay in the mall day before.

Udyaveer heard that and laughed:- So jay, kaise rahi wo barish… Manna padega us ladki ko jis ne tum se panga liya I mean wo jo hum na kar sake wo us ladki ne kar dikhaya…

Vijaybhai- Jay ki haalat dekhne layak thi with all muddy water in her hair and dress… I tell you

Jay- Oh shut up Vijaybhai… Or Uday tum bhi chup hi raho… Aakhir wo hum apne se niche logo ke mooh nahi lagte… Hum ek rajkumari hai or wo do take ki ladki hamari barabar kabhi nahi ho sakti.

Unnati- ab chodo in baton ko and let's enjoy the party… Let's dance everyone…

Unnati and Vijaybhai left for dance floor and Uday was talking to Jay. They also started for dance floor.

On the other side, Jeet and soni were dancing with each other and Aakash and Manya entered the club.

Manya wasn't excited to come to the club because she had thought that Aakash would take her on a quiet place for their date but Aakash was too excited about the club so Manya came with him.

She was following Aakash and on the other side Uday and Jay were coming. They passed each other when Uday & Jay heard Manya's comment.

Manya(to Aakash)- Yaar tu mujhe is pakao jagah pe kyon laya hai.

Aakash- Kya baat kar rahi ho Manya ye Mumbai ka best club and resto bar hai… Udaynivas restobar… It's belong to a prince aur ye unki party hai. You should be excited ki itni achi party tum ko enjoy karne ko mili.

Manya- Aakash lagta hai tumhe bhi in stupid royal ki tarah party karna nahi aata… Ek din main tujhe bataongi party kaise karte hai… Yahan sirf shor, daru aur batmeez snobby rich people ke alava mujhe kuch nahi dikh raha… Haan nahi to…

Aakash- Are yaar, tum na chodo in sab baton ko aur enjoy karo sirf aaj ke liye. Aaj ke baad hum phir kabhi yahan nahi aayenge ok sweetheart… please…

Manya- Ok if you say so… waise bhi is jagah main aisa kuch khaas nahi jo main yahan doobara aaongi… chal aa hi gaye he to thoda dance kar lete hai…

Jay(to Uday)- Waah kya guest hai tumhare Uday… Tumhari hi party main tumhari burai…

Uday stopped manya from holding her hand and faced towards him. Aakash didn't notice as he was going to dance floor ahead of Manya…

Manya- Kaun batmeez insaan hai yeh?

And she sees Uday and Jay there and she is shocked as well as Uday & Jay…

Jay- Yeh… Yeh ladki tumhari guest hai Uday? Ye do take ki ladki jis ne ham par mall main wo muddy water giraya or hamari insult ki yeh?

Uday(still holding Manya's hand)- woah jay to ye wo ladki hai… Kamal hai manna padega aakhir tum ko  kuch to dam hai tum me…

Jay- Disgusting Uday… Tum is middle class ladki ka haath bhi kaise pakad sakte ho… Waise hamara yahan rehna bhi hamari shaan ke khilaaf hai. Hum drink lene ja rahe hai tumhe tumhare fatichar guests se time mil jaye to aa jana…

And Jay leaves; Uday is smirking after her but still holding Manya's hand…

Manya- Oy halkat, Haath chod mera….warna ek khinch ke doongi to thjhe teri naani yaad aa jayegi haan nahi to…

Uday(pulled her closer)- Badi theekhi mirch ho tum lekin hum tum ko aise nahi jane denge.. Jay ke saath tumne jo kiya wo to samajh sakte hai theek kiya  lekin hamare saath jo kal kiya uske liye hum tumhe nahi jane de sakte… aur waise bhi abhi abhi tumne hamari party or hamare club ki insult ki… Aaj tak Udayveer singh ke club main ya uski zindagi main koi aisa insaan nahi aaya or ek ladki to kabhi nahi miss Haan nahi to…

Manya struggles a bit and then forcefully escapes Uday's hold by digging her nails in his arm…

Manya- Apne bare main kaafi galatframiyan hai tujhe... Tujhe kya lagta hai kuch bigdi hui ladkiyan tere aaspass ghoomti hai aur tu kahin ka prince hai to puri duniya tere kaboon main hai… apni aankhen khol or dekh is duniya main tujh se kai jyada behtar log milenge jinke liye teri koi value nahi hai aur haan mujhe tujh jaise tandebaaz aur batzmeez logo main koi dilchaspi nahi hai… Waise bhi yakeen maan, aaj ke baad hamari mulakat kabhi nahi hogi kyonki tere jaise logo ke saamne aane ka na mujhe koi shuak hai or na hi koi dilchaspi ab hat pare…

By the time Aakash comes there and says:- Manya kya kar rahi ho chalo na dance floor par chalte hai…

Manya- Nahi Aakash, Mujhe ab koi mood nahi hai… mera sara mood kharab ho chukka hai aur main yahan se jana chahti hoon… agar tum chaho to ruk sakte ho par mujhe jane do..

Aakash- acha chalo chalte hai… But let me say bye to my friend as I just met him there.

Manya- Ok Aakash main tumhara yahin intezar karti hoon…

Uday saw that and said- Tumhari pasand bhi bahut ajeeb hai teeki mirchi… Apne liye dhoondha bhi to thanda birf ka gola… meri maano dump kar do use kyonki wo tumhare layak hi nahi hai… sambhal nahi paayega tumhe…

Manya- Jo bhi hai tujh se to better hi hai… waise bhi tu na hi mera rishtedaar hai na hi mera dost… Tu sirf ek ajnabi hai to apni advise apne paas hi rakh… or ja ja ke kisi aur ko paka…

Uday- waise ajnabi to hum nahi… aakhir do mulakatein ho chuki hai hamari aur wo bhi kaafi dilschap… tumhe nahi lagta agar aise hi milte rahe to kuch to rishta hoga hamare bich miss thikhi mirchi?

Manya- Chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega… us do mulakaton se ek rishta tere naal bana hi leti hoon wo bhi dushmani ka… agar kabhi hum doobara mile zindagi main to dushman ki tarah milenge kyonki tujh jaise insaan ke saath mera koi aur rishta ho hi nahi sakta and she moves to go and Uday notices her wound on the back and he is shocked.

Before he can say anything, Aakash comes there and both Manya and Aakash leave from there.

Uday is utterly confused about the wound on her back but he discards his feeling thinking that he is thinking too much as Miss tikhi mirch can't be Princess Manyata…

****

Aakash and Manya come back to the chawl and Aakash's mother sees them together. She is highly angry and tells Aakash to stop hanging out with Manya. Manya just makes a face at her and leave to her house.

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Precap: Aakash, Manya, Jeet & Soni goes to GOA and In Mumbai Raj Parivar finds out about Vikram Singh and Princess Manyata…

 

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it was awesome and mindblowing please update soon thanks for the pm and please continue soon loved uday and manyata meeting was good meeting and manveer scenes were short please in tab but the next update the update should be was  longer please but this update was good too manveer next meeting i hope it is also dhamakethar and in FF is akash played by abhishek rawat or someone else

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And yes Aakash is played by abhishek rawat...
I only have few new characters in this ff which will come as the ff progress.

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