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Part 1

One fine morning in Mumbai:-

At chawl people are buzzing over their regular schedule. There is a decent building right across the chawl. A girl is running down the stairs and rushed up to the watchman who is appointed at the gate.  A girl is none other than Manya. She wore blue denims and white shirt and her hair are tied in a high pony-tail.

Manya (to the watchman)- Uncle ji, kya soni neeche aa gayi?

The wathman- Nahi Manya betiya, aaj bhi tum hi sab se pehle aayi ho.

Meanwhile, another girl in salwar-kameez approaches them and says to Manya- yaar sorry main phir late ho gayee, wo jeet ko aaj jane main dair ho gayee is liye…

Manya (goes toward soni)- Kya yaar, tujhe romance se fursadh milegi tab tu use jane degi na… haan nahi to…

Soni- Ab ched mat Manya… Kya kare tera doctor jo har waqt busy rehta hai lekin ek baar teri shaadi ho jane de phir dekhte hai tu kitni free rahegi.

Manya(dreamily)- shaadi aur wo bhi aakash se hmmm… interesting… lekin us se pehle uske do bodyguard to impress ho jaye? Phir sochenge…

Soni- Bodyguards? Dr. Aakash ko bodyguards ki jaroorat kab se padne lagi?

Manya- are yaar main uske khaddos ma-baba ki baat kar rahi hoon jab dekho tab uske saath lage rahte hai. Kabhi akela padne hi nahi dete… aur uski ma ek no. ki make-up ki dukan hai yaar… poori bala hai… kabhi kabhi sochti hoon ki aakash unka hi beta hai ya adopt kiya hua hai?

Soni- Haan yaar, jab dekho tab chawl main ja kar apne status ki dinge haanki rehti hai…

Manya- Chod na unki baat ko…. Chal hum mall chalte hai mujhe kuch shopping karni hai…

Soni- Are yaar, pichle hafte to tune shopping kit hi… ab phir se ?

Manya- Haan shopping bill badha rahi hoon ye soch ke ki bill dekh kar shayad baba kuch kaam karne ki izzazat de de… yaar kab se bol rahi hoon job karna hai lekin nahi…. US se bula liya wapas … Na wahan job karne di aur na yahan karne de rahe hai…

Soni- Achi baat hai… nahi to tu bhi busy ho jayegi aur mera timepass kaise hoga… chal chalte hai…

Both head out in Manya's car toward the shopping mall….

On the other hand, Royal palace at Devgadh:

Rajmata Mrinalini Devi was talking to her family members at breakfast table.

Rajmata- Hum aap sab se kuch kehna chahte hai.

Bridraj- Haan Ma saab kahiye…

Rajmata- Aaj Udayveer ladakh ki rally jeet kar wapas aa rahe hai is liye hum ne socha hai ki hum Maharaj Giriraj, Uday aur Unnati ko dinner ke liye invite kare waise kaafi din ho gaye unhe yahan aane hue…

Komal- Ye to bahut achi baat hai. Hum khud sab ki pasand ka menu taiyaar karvayenge ma saab…

Menaka- lekin ma saab aaj to hum sab ko minister ravte ki party main jana tha na…

Rajmata- Jee nahi menka hum ne wo party cancel kar di hai…. Waise bhi ravte saab hamare estate ke khillaf hai is liye hum nahi chahte ki unke kisi bhi social function main hum shaamil ho…

Bridraj- Jaisi aapki marzee ma saab…

Menka makes a sour face and continues her breakfast.

Jaynandini- Phir to hum aaj shopping jayenge aakhir hum ko shaam ke liye best ready hona hai… Hum chalte hai DS… Vijay bhai aap hamare saath chalenge?

Vijay- Nahi Jay, hamari kuch aur appointment hai, aap k or L ke saath chale jaye.

Jay- jaisi aapki marzi… hum abhi K & L ko phone karte hai…

She orders garima to bring her phone and went from breakfast table followed by vijay bhai  who had already finished their breakfast as well. Soon everyone dispersed to their work.

Rajmata was working in her study with Bridraj when Doctor saab came there.

Doctor saab- rajmata, ye rahi latest project ki copy… Hum ne Devgadh aur Jaygadh main teen bade hospital banvane ka project approve karva diya hai… Abhi hamari baat Mahraj Giriraj se hui. Unhone signed copy bhej di hai.

Rajmata- Chalo ye bhi hamari praja ke liye unnati ka kaam hoga. Lekin is hospital ke naam kya rakhenge.

Bridraj- Devgadh estate main ban rahe hospital ka naam hum Manyata ke naam se rakhenge ma saab aur Jaygadh estate main ban rahe hospital ka naam Maharani Vasundara devi ki yaad main banvayenge. Kal hi is bare main hum ne aur Giriraj ne baat ki thi.

Rajmata(sadly)- Haan bridraj, taaki jab hamari rani beti wapas aaye tab unhe pata chale ki sirf hum ne hi nahi unki praja bhi unhe yaad karti hai…

Komal (entering the study)- Pata nahi kahan hogi hamari manyata?

Scene shifts to the mall:

Jay is walking arrongantly with K & L and making snide comments about some stores in the mall. They enter one shop and the manager of that shop welcomes them and shows his best desighing outfits  and Jay chooses some dress and starts to leave the shop. Meanwhile Manya and Soni enters in the same shop. Jay was walking arrogantly and Manya was looking at a pretty dress in the shop, but Jay doesn't see her and collides with her and fell down along with Manya  and the dress.

Jay- What the hell? Are u blind? Dekh ke nahi chal sakti thi tum gavar kahin ke? Hamare aage aane ki kya zarrorat thi? Hum ko gira diya… Manager Manager…

Meanwhile Manya pulls herself up and looks at Jay with weird looks. Soni comes to her as well. K & L also pulls Jay up and start their bakwaas about how stupid and ill manner the other girl is….

Manager also comes there running and stood shocked there.

Jay(angrily to Manya chillate hue)- Hello, yun khadi khadi dekh kya rahi ho, chalo hum se maafi mango… Ek to andho ki tarah chalti ho aur upar se itni bhi manners nahi ke apologize karo…

Manya is smirking at her and Jay gets angrier asking her why she is smiling at her.

Manya- nahi bas ye soch rahi hoon ki tumhare paas dimag hai bhi ya nahi… Ek to khud bina dekhe dumb ass ki tarah chalti ho… kisi aur se takrati ho phir expect karti ho ki wo tum se maafi mange? Aur ho kaun tum… kahi ki hoor pari ho kya? Tumhare jaise logo ke dimag main bhusa bhara rehta hai kya… ameer zaadi ho to kya… kisi ki bhi insult karti phirogi? Itna hi paisa ho to apna khud ka mall kyon nahi banva leti? Wahin pe ja kar akele shopping karna aur unth ki tarah sar uncha kar ke ghoomti rehna…. Phir kisi se takrati nahi phirogi haan nahi to…

Jay- Tumhari itni himmat… Tum ne hamari insult ki? Tum janti nahi ho hum kaun hai… Hum chahe to tum ko is mall se bahar phikwa sakte hai…

Manya- Oh hello, this is free country…. Tum is desh ki president bhi hogi na to bhi mera kuch nahi bigad paogi…

Manager(to Jay)- Rajkumari ji, main inki taraf se aap se maffi mangta hoon… Please aap shaant ho jaye… In ke jaise logo se mooh lagne se aap ki shaan ki tahueen hogi…

Manya(to Manager)- Oye ye filmy dialgoues bandh kar aur behla is nakhchadi rajkumari ko… Kyonki waise bhi tere ye dukhan main ek bhi dhang ka kapda nahi hai…

Jay- Tum jaise logo ki aukaat hi kya jo tum ko samaj main aayenge ke designer dress kise kehte hai…

Manya leaves the shop but when she is leaving she knocks a hanging flower pot and Jay was standing right there and all muddy water from flower pot gets on her hair and dress. Jay screams loudly along with K & L but Manya has already left with Soni and Manager stood there shocked at another incident in his shop.

Jay is super angry and cursing Manya while Manya & soni laughed and leaves to eat some food. Jay in super angry mode leaves the mall in same condition followed by K & L.

Manya was having food when She gets a call from Aakash.

Aakash- Hi Manya, kahan ho tum?

Manya- Are aakash main yahan mall main hoon soni ke saath but tum ne is waqt call ki? Tum hospital main nahi ho kya?

Aakash- Haan maine break main tum se baat karne ko phone kiya…

Manya- Oh how sweet… to batao kab free ho rahe ho? Aaj shaam ko kahin chalte hai.. Main, tum Jeet aur soni sab chalenge…

Aakash- aaj possible nahi hai… Meri massi aa rahi hai to unko pick karne jana hai… Kyon na hum kal chale?

Manya- Ok we will go tomorrow see ya…

Soni (to Manya)- Are manya kal ka program banaya to tum dono ko akele jana hoga, kal mujhe jeet ke saath uski office ki party main jana hai… waise acha hai tujhe apne pyar ke saath waqt mil jayega akele…

Manya- Kya yaar tu bhi na….chal theek hai phir to main aur aakash enjoy karenge haan nahi to…

They both also leave the mall and Manya drops Soni at her house but she remembers that she forgot to pick up something from market so she goes back to the market.

On a highway, a car is speeding away and the driver is handsome dude wearing sunglass. He is wearing red polo-shirt and blue denim jeans and looking extremely handsome. He is driving with speed and enjoying the breeze. His  phone is ringing and he picks up the call.

Unnati(on the phone)- Dada aap kahan ho? Hum aap ka kab se wait kar rahe hai. Aaj hum ko dadi-saab ke yahan dinner pe jana hai aur hum kab se taiyaar ho kar aap ka intezaar kar rahe hai…

Udayveer- Kya choti hum wahan khud pahunch jayenge aap dad ke saath janewali thi na?

Unnati- Dad ki koi meeting thi to wo wahan se seedhe aa jayenge aur hum waise bhi aap ke saath jana chahte hai.

Udayveer- Theek hai hum aap ko pick karne aate hai.

He hangs up the phone and says to himself- Hmmm ab hotel pahunchne ke liye short-cut lena padega… warna time se dinner pe nahi pahunch payenge… Ye choti bhi na… Hamari drive ko short kar diya.

He went back to the city and takes a short-cut to go to his hotel. He is going in speed and suddenly another car was coming from other side and takes turn ahead of him but he was speeding  so he hits the car in the back and the taillight of the car is broken. He curses the other car…

Uday- damn ab ye car ko bhi hamare aage aana tha?

The other car driver comes out of the car and it's none other than Manya. Uday also comes out of his car. Manya sees her tail light is broken and she sees Uday out of the car. He is still wearing his sunglasses when it's evening and sun has already sat..

Manya- Abe o, tujhe dikhayi nahi diya hamari car ki tail light tod di…

Uday(angrily)- Tum hamari car ke aage achanak se aa gayi aur waise bhi hum speed main gaadi chala rahe the to break nahi laga paye… aur waise bhi sirf tail light tuti hui hai aur kuch nahi hua…

Manya- kuch nahi hua lekin bahut kuch ho sakta tha…. Ye busy road hai yahan pe highway ki tarah car ko udane ki kya zarrorat thi agar kisi rah chalte se car takrai hoti to? Wo to mar hi jata na…

Uday pulls out money from his pocket and put in manya's hand….

Uday- Ye lo, itne se tumhari gadi ki tail light to theek ho hi jayegi aur baki tum rakh lena tip ke taur pe… waise bhi tum jaise logo se jabban lada kar hum apna din kharab nahi karna chahte…

He was going back to the car when Manya pulled him back and put his money back in the hand. Ye lo tumhare paise aur kahin ja kar apne liye tameez kharid lena in paise so aur haan ruko… She took out 100 rupees from her bag and shoved in his hand…

Uday(angrily)- what the hell is this money for?

Manya- Abhi dikhati hoon. She took a big stone from the road and smacked Uday's car's headlight.

Uday- What the hell ye tumne kya kiya?

Manya- Badla liya… Tumne meri gadi ki tail light tod di aur maine tumhari gadi ki head light… Hisaab barabar… aur haan ye jo 100 RS diye hai na wo tumhare liye tip hai… Rakh lena… Haan nahi to…

And she stormed towards her car cursing udayveer with words like Halkat veda suvar kahin ka pata nahi aaj kis ki shakal dekh ke uthi thi to stupid logo se pange ho rahe hai…

Uday was standing there in anger and he heard  every curse word of her and said to himself- Tum se hum jaroor milna chahenge miss Haan nahi to…

He clutched the 100 RS note in his hand and angrily drove toward his hotel.

 

Precap: Dinner at Rajmahal…. Jay and Udayveer meet Manya once again….

 

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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

ya,doo cntinueee,wnt to read mre!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ilvuday

amazing start plz cont soon n plz pmBig smile
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shals9

Would love to read your story - how uday m manyata will meet and their clashes and love. Pls pm me when u update next
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Originally posted by DAPS

plz continue dear and do pm me when u upadate
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Archi02

Amezing concept. Very nice. Can't wait to read it. Please update soon and pm me if you can.
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahara23

Wow continue soon
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

it was awesome very nice this paragraph 

This story is about two strong personalities who are equally stubborn and both want different things in life and most importantly both know how to play politics very well'. Who will win in this war of power? Will they ever love each other? Will they ever unite?

 

it was cheery on the cake please update soon i loved the update it was awesome awesome Big smile please pm me if you can and please continue soon and please can manveer meet in the first meeting but the meeting like always has to be dhamaketharWink


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In my ff Manyata has same political mind as Udayveer and when both mind collide then there will be battles...

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