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ArShi FF~ Shades Deeper Than Grey *Ch-3 Updated* (Page 4)

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Oh dear!
I never planned a BDSM relation for my FF it was just the first chapter of the book that got me insanely stuck with it.
*Gutter Alert* Yes you got it in the beginning I would add mature content but of course not violent. You'd see for yourself :) and thanks for awesome comment! <3

Originally posted by gunjanmkj

Fifty shaded of grey, huh..i hvnt read d book yet..bt i've read lots of reviews on it..so m really lookin forward to some mature stuffs *gutter mind alert* Tongue
arnav as christian grey, n khushi as anastasia steele..n where wud u put d BDSM thng *smirks naughtily*
lookin forward to lots of sparks n battle of wit n ego..
update soon!

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
You never cease to amaze me with your beautiful comments Sammy Hug
I really have no words to show my gratitude. Let me say it out loud- You have been my greatest support!
Oh the BOYS! Well that is a different story altogether :D

Originally posted by tariqsamira

Radhika!!! Hug

Wonderful to read something from you after a long time and its warming up pretty nicely. Its true to your style and i had a wonderful time reading. Waiting anxiously for the next installment, I hope you'll write it soon!!

To tell you the truth, what i found more romantic was imagining a pretty little gal sitting on the Metro, deeply engrossed in her book thinking of a story. I feel sorry for the boys on the train, obviously you found the book more attactive than them!! LOL

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
Hehe Oh gurl! You got me lauging my head off :D
yes you got it right 50 shades of Grey!
And to justify let me say you already have been through too much gutter LOL so this won't harm anyways its just the first chapter that exactly like xerox from the first chapter of the book :) but yes rest will be very different!
And meri jaan maine tujhe kahin nahi phasayan hum saare hie phanse hue hai ArShi ke liye :D

Originally posted by Vampire.wingz

<font color="#006666">RES ;D
But Shit No No ! Cherry...please don't make me read Fifty shades of grey kind of thingy ...Its too mature Tongue ..and My gutter-mind is on overdrive all the time *blushes* Please ...K Fine I'll read his story Infact I guess I'm kinda Excited Hug LOL But its all sex driven ,Isn't it ? D'oh ...Kahan Phasa diya ? LOL

EDIT:- Or is it The Hunger Games Trilogy ? Shocked
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
Nice concept!!update soon!!
pm me!!

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
This is going to be an interesting read... I have read all 3 books of 50 Shades.. and totally love them.. Christian Grey (ahh how I love him, possessive, sexy and above all dark) kind of Like our very Own ASR!!

I'm def looking forward to reading more.. the first chapt was indeed like the book, but hell.. u r doing a good job.. looking forward to reading ur spin on  our Arnav Singh Raizada uff "Shades Deeper Than Grey"

-Vika

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
FIRE DOT W 

YOU ARE AMAZING 

PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE 

INTERESTING PLOT 

THANKS 

KKKA

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Oh. Alright. I din't know! I hope you din't take an offense.

Well then...I hope this A.S..R isn't into B.D.M.S. Is he? :D I hope not.

Sorry... please continue.

I'm looking forward to it!


Originally posted by fire.whiskey

I wish you really read the first thread where I said just the first two or three chapters wud be almost like the first chapter of the book! The reason I started with this FF was- I totally got hooked with the first chapter and I have made enough changes.
So now I hope you'd go on.

Originally posted by blahblah16

Dude.
seriousssllyy?
You have LITERALLY copy pasted from the novel.
NOT COOL.

I'm still looking forward, though! You must change the story and also details.
Even the details are same...I mean WHYY?

<font color="#ff0000">I've read the book..and so has half the world. It's a best seller!</font>

I'm not trying to be rude here. sorry. But get inspired. Don't.Just.Copy!
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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Nope buddy we're all good to go! But yes it did hurt but like tinsy part :P Kiddin' :D
and A big No darlings... ASR is not into BDSM stuff in my ff but yes surely another part of him thats DARK...!

Originally posted by blahblah16

Oh. Alright. I din't know! I hope you din't take an offense.

Well then...I hope this A.S..R isn't into B.D.M.S. Is he? :D I hope not.

Sorry... please continue.

[DIV]I'm looking forward to it!


Edited by fire.whiskey - 13 August 2012 at 6:27am

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