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ArShi FF~ Shades Deeper Than Grey *Ch-3 Updated* (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Continue soon! As I've said before; I adore Christian Grey (for the most part!) and would love to read your fic. :) Update soon. :D I loved the first part, btw.
 
Oh and if you dont mind me saying, can you please make an index on the first page? It becomes a lot easier to navigate. :D
 
Cheers, Avi.

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
WOW! Nice and intimidating.  Very interested to see how the story unfolds

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Fifty shaded of grey, huh..i hvnt read d book yet..bt i've read lots of reviews on it..so m really lookin forward to some mature stuffs *gutter mind alert* Tongue
arnav as christian grey, n khushi as anastasia steele..n where wud u put d BDSM thng *smirks naughtily*
lookin forward to lots of sparks n battle of wit n ego..
update soon!

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Dude.
seriousssllyy?
You have LITERALLY copy pasted from the novel.
NOT COOL.

I'm still looking forward, though! You must change the story and also details.
Even the details are same...I mean WHYY? 

I've read the book..and so has half the world. It's a best seller!

I'm not trying to be rude here. sorry. But get inspired. Don't.Just.Copy!
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
I wish you really read the first thread where I said just the first two or three chapters wud be almost like the first chapter of the book! The reason I started with this FF was- I totally got hooked with the first chapter and I have made enough changes.
So now I hope you'd go on.

Originally posted by blahblah16

Dude.
seriousssllyy?
You have LITERALLY copy pasted from the novel.
NOT COOL.

I'm still looking forward, though! You must change the story and also details.
Even the details are same...I mean WHYY?

<font color="#ff0000">I've read the book..and so has half the world. It's a best seller!</font>

I'm not trying to be rude here. sorry. But get inspired. Don't.Just.Copy!
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
Thanks buddy! And when I'd update next I would surely be updating with an index :D
I'm looking forward to your views.
Originally posted by ArShifan1997


Continue soon! As I've said before; I loved the first part, btw.
Oh and if you dont mind me saying, can you please make an index on the first page? It becomes a lot easier to navigate. :D
Cheers, Avi.
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Oh dear!
I never planned a BDSM relation for my FF it was just the first chapter of the book that got me insanely stuck with it.
*Gutter Alert* Yes you got it in the beginning I would add mature content but of course not violent. You'd see for yourself :) and thanks for awesome comment! <3

Originally posted by gunjanmkj

Fifty shaded of grey, huh..i hvnt read d book yet..bt i've read lots of reviews on it..so m really lookin forward to some mature stuffs *gutter mind alert* Tongue
arnav as christian grey, n khushi as anastasia steele..n where wud u put d BDSM thng *smirks naughtily*
lookin forward to lots of sparks n battle of wit n ego..
update soon!
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
You never cease to amaze me with your beautiful comments Sammy Hug
I really have no words to show my gratitude. Let me say it out loud- You have been my greatest support!
Oh the BOYS! Well that is a different story altogether :D

Originally posted by tariqsamira

Radhika!!! Hug

Wonderful to read something from you after a long time and its warming up pretty nicely. Its true to your style and i had a wonderful time reading. Waiting anxiously for the next installment, I hope you'll write it soon!!

To tell you the truth, what i found more romantic was imagining a pretty little gal sitting on the Metro, deeply engrossed in her book thinking of a story. I feel sorry for the boys on the train, obviously you found the book more attactive than them!! LOL

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